A Woman is Taken (closed for Alicia and Kaye; open for Julia)

[RavenSSS]

"A Woman is Taken."

This story will be a collaboration between RavenSSS and Kittenbritches.

I wanted to start a thread based on emails that Raven wrote to a friend - and any forum member could offer feedback as that friend. I couldn't find the exact forum vehicle that would work that way; therefore, I decided to go the SRP route but do it a little differently.

Raven (as Alicia) and I (as Kaye) ostensibly will alternately write successive segments as our story unfolds. It will be based on fact but we will spice it up, embellish it, and extrapolate, so that, hopefully, it will be more than just a wee blah blog. It may not even be recognizable as fact by the time we tweak it.

Our story is being told ostensibly to a (fictitious) friend named Julia.

At first, our roles as Alicia and Kaye will be locked; however, the thread will be open to any Literotica members who would like to offer feedback as Julia. Jump in whenever you want to respond as Julia. Make comments, ask questions, reprimand us, give opinions, criticize us, praise us, and tell us anything you think about what we're doing. It doesn't have to be positive. We're big girls; we can handle whatever you want to throw at us.

We expect criticism, but please don't be nasty, snide, or insulting. Raven has claws. She has lashed out at snotty comments made about her in this forum before. If our story is beneath you, you don't have to read it.

We'll accept suggestions if they fit within the realm of what is occurring. We won't change the underlying framework, as it could send the story off on a tangent, and we might not be able to bring it back on course.

Eventually, Alicia (Raven) will bow out if some courageous woman would be willing to take over her role. By then, you should know enough about Alicia to extrapolate her role and insert your own thoughts and wishes. At that point the 'new Alicia' will take Kaye as her pet and do whatever delicious things you want to inflict on her.

I know this is complicated but I know of no other way to make it work.

We'll play both roles ourselves until we find the right woman to take over for Alicia. Our story is girl on girl, of course, but it doesn't matter if you are straight, bi, or gay if you are willing to take on Alicia's lesbian role somewhere down the road. Men need not apply for the roles of Alicia and Kaye, but may be our fictitious friend, Julia. Just sign your feedback as 'Julia'.

Kaye has signed a waiver and a checklist of what she is willing to do. I'll furnish those when appropriate. When you take over Alicia's role, you don't necessarily have to stay within the bounds of the waiver or her checklist, but don't go too far afield. Don't do permanent damage to Kaye. That didn't happen IRL and it's not acceptable in this thread. e.g., You may bite Kaye's nipples, but not bite them off. LOL. Nipples are tougher than you may think, so I don't see that happening anyway. Other examples: I'm scared silly of needle play IRL, but if that's your fantasy, go for it when playing your role. I hate canes, whips, single-tails, and crops, but my character won't / can't object to their use. I'll 'roll with those punches' for the sake of the story. I'd prefer a loving, caring domme like Alicia, but I'll accept a sadist one or anywhere in between, again, for the sake of the story.

I'm giving out this info for anyone contemplating taking on Alicia's role, but it will not be in the near future; therefore, whenever you're ready, please tender your 'resume'. LOL. That will give me time to decide who will play my dear Alicia. Egads, this is becoming complicated. I'm having palpitations already, and I haven't started writing yet. Oh, well, I usually feel this way when I begin writing something new.

Raven and I live together (at two locations), and I use her computers - her business desktop and personal laptop - as well as my own laptop - depending on where we are, so at times, it will appear that the role is coming from the wrong person. Don't let that bother you. You'll know who's playing. Furthermore, as time passes, I'll probably be submitting both roles until one of you lucky ladies takes on Alicia's part.

Hopefully, this will work out, but after re-reading what I've just written, I realize that it will be quite a stretch.

Please help this transition. If you have doubts, comments or suggestions about how I'm handling this, please chime in. I haven't any experience in writing this way, and I'm probably overlooking something that may be obvious to you.

I'd also like to know if you think you'll be interested in reading our story. I won't bother writing if there isn't much interest. I'll submit the story Introduction and you can decide, now or then, whether it's worth reading or not.

I know I'm quite nervous about this as I keep blithering and blathering on and on. Sorry.

Ciao,

K

 

[RavenSSS]

"A Woman is Taken."

Introduction -

Alicia cruised local hotel lounges in search of prey. She knew from past experience that women traveling alone sometimes 'let their hair down' and were more susceptible to sexual advances than they would have been in their home territory.

Alicia had several criteria that in the past had led to her taking, using and abusing a certain type of woman: an attractive woman who knew she was attractive and ate up flattery; a married woman who might be bi but probably had never acted on her urges, or was bi-curious, or was ready for a girl on girl liaison; a submissive woman who would allow Alicia to abuse her and thrive on the abuse; and, of course, a woman who was attracted to Alicia and was open to a tryst.

Alicia sat at a corner alcove table in the hotel lounge and fixed her eyes on an attractive, dark eyed, brunette sitting alone at another table. The brunette's tailored business suit hid but also indicated that there was a curvy body under it. Her wedding ring added another factor to Alicia's list of possibilities. She allowed the woman to catch her staring.

The woman would take a sip of her drink, look up to see if Alicia was still watching her, avert her eyes, and pretend that she was unaware of Alicia's attention. Occasionally, she'd glance up, find Alicia's stare, and was obviously becoming a bit flustered. After a few minutes of this cat and mouse game, the woman tired of being mousie and met Alicia's stare. A moment later, she smiled and Alicia knew the woman was hooked. Now to reel her in. Alicia didn't smile back as that would have suggested something other than what she had in mind. Instead she crooked her index finger and beckoned the woman to come to her. If the woman got up and approached, Alicia could count on her not only being interested but suggestible, possibly submissive. Alicia couldn't conceive of making the first overt move. That was up to her prey to bite at her bait.

The woman, as if on cue, rose and, carrying her drink, came to Alicia's table. "Hi," she stammered, "I'm Kaye. I've noticed that you're alone. Would you mind if I joined you?" Hooked and reeled in, time to gaffe her and pull her into the boat.

"Well hello," Alicia introduced herself and said, "Please sit down. I would really welcome your company." Now for seduction. "I apologize for staring at you, but I find you extremely attractive - enough to wish we could be more than just acquaintances."

The brunette's eyes widened; she took a deep breath, and whispered loudly, "I think I'd like that."

"Now, for the next step," Alicia thought. " I'll see if she's ready to play." Wasting no time with idle conversation, she reached under the table cloth and put her hand on the woman's stockinged knee. Her prey didn't flinch, but averted her eyes and found it difficult to catch her breath.

Finding no resistance, Alicia slid her hand under the woman's skirt to bare flesh above her thigh highs. The breathless woman still didn't move when Alicia's fingers found her crotch. She touched Kaye's panty-covered pubes and waited for resistance that didn't come.

She was ready to test for submissiveness and if she found it, she knew she had found her victim. She was more interested in abusing the woman than in just having sex with her; however, she didn't want to alarm the woman and cause her to run off.

Alicia reached along the woman's inner thigh under her panties, took hold of a pubic hair and began to pull, gently at first, but harder and harder until it finally pulled free. She had been looking into the woman's eyes and, not finding panic, pulled out another pubic hair.

The brunette closed her eyes and tilted her head back, but made no move to stop Alicia. Two more pubic hairs were pulled out without any complaint, and Alicia knew that she had found her submissive, ripe ready play toy. Running her hand over the woman's panty crotch, she found it damp which confirmed her diagnosis.

One more step and she'd drag her prey to lair. She reached under the woman's panties and wet her fingers in the woman's juices. She withdrew her hand, reached over and touched the woman's lips. The glossed lips parted slightly, Alicia reached into her mouth, and wiped the wetness on the woman's tongue. Kaye shuddered and looked at Alicia with half closed eyes.

She seemed to be dazed but got up from her chair and followed Alicia from the lounge to the valet stand. A few minutes later, they were on their way, not to Alicia's town apartment, but to her weekend Cabin miles from town in a heavily wooded area. During the drive, Alicia continued caressing the woman's pubes and could smell her arousal. Or was that her own arousal that she smelled - or just her imagination since she was anticipating what would follow?

Kaye was trying to tell Alicia something - probably that she was not 'that kind of woman'. Alicia stopped thinking of what lay ahead and tried to focus on Kaye's shaky words, "I'm not sure I'm ready for this." Kaye said. "Maybe we should go back to the hotel."

Light was fading fast when Alicia answered, "We're almost there. I'll take you back in the morning."

Alicia turned on the car's headlights in time to illuminate a house back about fifty feet back from the road. Instead of pulling up in front of that house, Alicia followed a curved, gravel road several hundred yards to another house back among the trees. "We're here. Wait a sec while I turn on the flood lights," Alicia announced. She pressed a remote switch on the car sun visor and the area was awash in a bluish light.

She went around to the passenger side, opened the door, and offered her hand to Kaye. She held Kaye's hand and guided her to the rear yard and unlocked the door. "Wait one," she said and pulled her dress over her head. She folded it neatly and laid it in a large, wicker basket sitting on a low bench. "House rules. Street clothes aren't permitted in the house, so put yours in the basket too," she warned as she bent and removed her heels and stockings. She didn't wait for Kate to undress but entered the house wearing nothing but her panties and began turning on mood lighting.

Kate stood under the doorway overhang conflicted as to what to do. She couldn't stand there forever; she couldn't get back to town; she didn't want to undress. She was too submissive to break 'house rules' and go in without undressing. She agonized, "What am I to do?"

OOC: At this point, I'd like feedback. If anyone's interested in our story being continued, I'll go on. If not, I'll end it here. I've already opened a can of worms by creating this modified SRP, and I don't want to waste my time if I'm only going to be talking to myself.

K

 

[kittenbritches]

Apparently, there's no interest in this thread, so I'm closing it for now. I may try again elsewhere.

KittenBritches

 

[kittenbritches]

OOC:

If you are not female, this will not be of interest to you.

This 'modified SRP' hasn't received any interest. Angeleyz was kind enough to PM me and suggest we wait before ending it. However, Raven is rashly impatient and has bowed out. That leaves me alone, so I would like to approach this from a different perspective.

I'm Kaye (just my initial, 'K') in the introduction and, therefore, can't take Raven's part, nor would I want to. I couldn't do justice to her role anyway as it needs a dominant woman. In any case, I'd rather play my own part.

If one of you ladies listed in the SRP Writer's Profiles or any female player would like to play Raven's part, I'd be very grateful. I'll email you her bio and other info which you could use as you see fit - or not at all. I'll email you my bio also, so you could know in advance what (or whom) you'd be getting yourself into. Pun intended.

If you would be willing to play a dominant lesbian, I'd like to play with you. We could start over, and you may change the thread name to whatever you wish, but I'd like to keep the 'Introduction' as that is the way this started for me.

Where the Intro left off, I'll tell how I reacted and what I did next. Then you could pick up the thread at that point.

Please PM if you're interested.


If you're curious as to how I got the name 'KittenBritches', it's what a neighbor calls me.

I looked online and found this:

Cat's Fur to Make Kitten's Britches


1. A U.S. Southern pun which means "Don't question me. Do what I say and use proper English."

Father: Do what I say.

Son: What fer?

Father: Cat's fur to make kitten's britches. That's what fer.



Forgive me. I've been told I don't know when to stop blathering.

K