A very nasty story...

[Guest]

Has anyone finished reading "Discovering My Nasty Wife" by Tony88888? I swear on my honor that I have been reading it for the last few nights and haven't been able to progress more than a half a page or so at a time without stopping to masturbate to an intense orgasm. Talk about erotic writing... this author knows how to pour it on and keep it cumming! I hope we see more from this talented writer. Thanks!

 

[Marxist]

Unless fuct up grammar and the inability to string a sentence together is a major turn on, I'd suggest skipping this "nasty" tale. Quite possibly the worst story on the site.

MARXIST

 

[HornyHarpy]

That's not true

The worst story is the Demi Moore celebrity story:

"C'mon, Henry! Do my ass! Put that prick inside my asshole. Fuck my ass, fuck it hard! Oh, God, Henry, please fuck my ass!"

That's oh so hot! *shrugs*


But let's hear it for blatant anonymous self promotion! At least you could do it openly like tigerjen and keep us posted on every move your poems make.

harp

 

[Natalie Nessus]

At least you could do it openly like tigerjen and keep us posted on every move your poems make.

I think it's terrific Tigerjen does that - this is the place to do it and as I admire people who can create poetry (envy is perhaps a better word) I also think it is important to promote poetry as an art force.

In this world we want everything spelt out - if a new movie hasn't got an instant summary of the plot in the first 30 seconds it fails at the Box office.

Poetry makes the mind work.


Keep it up Tigerjen.


Nessus gets down from rickety soapbox, checks shoes for scratches and walks off. Being a considerate person, Nessus leaves soapbox for next user

 

[Wyatt]

Nessus has obviously seen"The Fast and the Furious".The list of ingredients in my popcorn had a better plot.

 

[Marxist]

I am a proponent of tigerjen's poetry, but like harp I really don't care where her poetry is in the rankings. Face it, the great majority of people who access this site are not going to read poetry, they want instant gratification. And some of the best stories and poems have rankings in the mid-3's because they try to tell a story or try to have a point other than "I came, then she came, then the mailman came, then the dog humping his leg came, then the fleas in his fur came, then the mites in the shingles of the flea......."

Don't get me wrong, I want high votes like everyone else but how important is it in the big picture? This is an online writer's workshop for all intents and purposes.

So keep at it tigerjen, keep pointing out the good stuff, but as far as your own pump, keep your hands off! I'm going to read it anyway.

MARXIST

 

[Guest]

Love Tigers poems too......

Poems are good......like "foreplay". Nice thing to read and get started with perhaps. But a "good" (?) erotic story is what's needed when the love making begins.......something nice and long and slow, hopefully with some nice build up before the pleasured release....and a little "Afterglow" to go along with....

<Hmmm gee, Afterglow...now where have I heard that from before?> Oh yes...that's a poem I wrote...(lol)

But if you're trying to get off simply on poetry? Gee...even my hand doesn't move that fast.......

To sleep.........perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I remain.........

Thesandman

 

[CRaZy]

Re: Love Tigers poems too......

But if you're trying to get off simply on poetry? Gee...even my hand doesn't move that fast.......




I remain.........

Thesandman

People read the stories to "get off"? I thought people read them for the excellent characterisation and well paced plots. Damn!!!

 

[Quiet_Cool]

Everybody writes poetry, right?

I don't mean to distract anyone from what we've been saying here, but isn't the point of this sight for us to define what we think is the best writing? THe point to that would depend on what you're looking for out of it...I like a story to be strongly plot-driven 90% of the time, but that doesn't mean something that isn't plot driven isn't good writing...there's always attention to good detail, style, well-written descriptive phrasing, realistic dialogue (I didn't read the the Demi Moore story, but thatput it up my ass!" shit doesn't sound like good dialogue). And let's face it, some people do read the stories here, just to get off, which brings the Sandman's point into play...poetry's too short for that. I'm guess most of the people who read them for that purpose are just visitors, for while some of us will read them for that purpose(And I think all of us do that now and again) the people who are writer's of anthing here realize that importance of story and style and characterization, so etc.
I guess the point I'm making is this...as far as the stories go, most of the votes aren't from people who have a good understanding of writing, the process, or the value it holds to the writer and an intelligent, appreciative audience.
NOw, I don't intend what I've said or what I'm about to say as an attack on anyone, especially not the poets here, 'cause it's not like I don't totally suck at poetry, and I always envy those who have the artistic ability to do what I cannot, but almost everybody thinks they can write poetry...I mean, let's face it...every girl I went to school with and every other girl Ive met since has a book of poetry somewhere, and a lot of guys have written some that they mostly hide so no one else knows about, not to mention those who admit it...hell, I've tried it and done terribly at it...Truth is, most of us have read the works of poetry that others have written in this sense, realized how bad it was, then came to this site, which is a non-paying site, and said, probably just the same ole shit...
It's not, I'm sure, (I'll admit it, I'm not really into poetry, Shakespeare aside, of course), but they'd have to read it to come to this conclusion.

 

[Uther_Pendragon]

Verse

Once upon a time, people wrote verse. It had a definite
meter and rhyme scheme. (In English, other languages,
other verse forms.) Then somebody said "All that stuff isn't
necessary; I'll just be 'poetic.'" Good rhyming poetry is
hard to write; good non-rhyming poetry is damn-near
impossible.

I've read some wonderfully erotic verse. Try
e e cumming's "She Being Brand New." But bawdy is easier,
and much commoner.
What I want is for the rhythm of the verse to suggest the
rhythm of the couple. And, no, I don't expect any amateur
to do it for free here.
(Not that "amateur" is a word that matters much on poetry;
the only poets who make a living make a living from Hallmark.)

anyway, my $.02

 

[tigerjen]

THANK YOU for the lovely compliment!

Thank you for those on this thread who have
paid lovely compliments to me, and my open
self-promotion of my writing!! You are awesome!

Will write more later on here!

til then......

Tigerjen

 

[tigerjen]

oh yes...one more thing

Oh yes...one more thing before I go......

come check out:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=21794

merci beaucoup!

Tigerjen

 

[bearblue]

I am a proponent of tigerjen's poetry, but like harp I really don't care where her poetry is in the rankings. Face it, the great majority of people who access this site are not going to read poetry, they want instant gratification. And some of the best stories and poems have rankings in the mid-3's because they try to tell a story or try to have a point other than "I came, then she came, then the mailman came, then the dog humping his leg came, then the fleas in his fur came, then the mites in the shingles of the flea......."

Don't get me wrong, I want high votes like everyone else but how important is it in the big picture? This is an online writer's workshop for all intents and purposes.

MARXIST

Okay, I totally laughed out loud at this image....yeah, that's how it is sometimes. I'm one of those who likes those 3's kind of stories.