A poet walks into a story forum

[AZMotherLover]

That is an original title for sure, doubt there is another like it. Pretty different twist as well

Now....what if, you wanted to go against all the daddy daughter cliches?

What if....a mother was killed in a car accident and her grief stricken husband is drowning his sorrow in booze? What if he sometimes was so drunk he thought his daughter was his departed wife whom he desperately wants to say goodbye to?

What if in an act of desperation the daughter poses as the mother when dad is drunk and let's him "say goodbye" quite intimately and is...appalled the entire time and in the end does NOT end up being daddy's cockwhore.

What?

http://www.literotica.com/s/that-damn-red-dress

That's an awesome idea for a twist on a common theme. You should write that down.

How about this? Teenage son steals mom's/sister's soiled panties from the dirty clothes hamper, takes them back to his room and sniffs them while he jerks off.

Still with me? The big payoff comes when mom/sis discovers the missing unmentionables and, get this, confronts the young man. He admits his dirty deed, but instead of being mad, mom/sis is flattered and, well you can guess where it goes from there.

 

[subdued_passion]

It's settled then. Non-con, non romantic my first attempt shall be. So you're going for gritty and real?

WTF is GM?

GM can be
genetically modified
general motors
general manager
good morning

But considering we were talking Lit categories, Gay Male is what I meant.

If you're writing just to troll people then I'd say give the story a shocking gay twist at the end. Better yet if you could work in some CBT- hot wax play gone wrong, malfunctioning vice.

I thought the most read category was Loving Wives, and the don't was "Don't post there." (There are no do's.)

Contentious, yes. Most read, no. Check the Top Lists for Most Reads and at a glance you'll spot that the first page is cluttered with Incest stories.


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The most original incest story I came across was by some guy from Bangalore- I can't remember the name of the story or the author.

So in the story guy falls in lust with his biological mom, the woman who gave birth to her. He records her and discovers that mommy's real work is as a whore where she services rich sexually unsatisfied housewives. He also discovers that mommy has a dick which is bigger than his. In the story, 20 years after mommy gave birth to two babies (not twins) due to hormonal issues mommy got more gorgeous and grew a dick. And now, she's the sexiest and most well paid shemale hoor in Bangalore.


And he says they're soooo predictable. Pfft!

 

[Magnetron]

I thought Bangalore was your stripper name back in New Delhi?

 

[twelveoone]

It's settled then. Non-con, non romantic my first attempt shall be.

WTF is GM?



I read a few, skimmed through a few others ..... and I was appalled. Not by the writing, but by the predictability.

two little people (over 18) meet at a costume party...
later discover that they are twins separated at birth...
and here is the real kicker, they also discover they work at the same place...
as short order cooks...
their progeny
later go on to found several towns in the US
....or was that done before?
several times?

I'm still enthralled about the genetically modified gay males that work as general managers at general motors. I need a car title. I have no idea what CBT means outside of Cognitive behavioral therapy. Of which I am in dire need of, as I am seeking to end my writing career.

WTF mag, giving up the poetry racket? Tired of being read by three readers? Five if some cojoined twin throws an espresso in their Starbucks.
Someone took down my TISM wanker post.

 

[Magnetron]

WTF mag, giving up the poetry racket? Tired of being read by three readers? Five if some cojoined twin throws an espresso in their Starbucks.
Someone took down my TISM wanker post.

You are a genius.

Conjoined twincest.

My ulterior motive is to trick story readers into visiting my profile and reading some shitty poetry.

 

[AZMotherLover]

My ulterior motive is to trick story readers into visiting my profile and reading some shitty poetry.

You succeeded.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Oh, did not see this.

YOu can-and I learned this the hard way- also piss them off by having consensual sex, but rough BDSM style sex.

As I was told in my favorite comment of all time "That good sir is no way for a loving brother to treat his beautiful sister."

Yep, I discovered this in Erotic Horror - story was going along mostly male-female, some hetero anal, a bit of girl milk, then I had a chapter with incest father son action, with mother and milk going on as well.

Was accused of "a nasty turn for the worst, I'm not going to read any more." What, gay incest is nasty, on Literotica, but it's ok to fuck a girl in the ass, but not your dad? Some kind of weird homophobic double standard there, I thought.

So a couple chapters later my narrator got fucked in the ass by a she-male, just to say, "no double standards here, and by the way, it's my story, I'll do what I like!"

 

[robertreams]

It would be my guess that "real" incest usually involves a minor and an adult. We don't do "real" here we do fantasy. However, the predictability I find in Lit.'s incest stories is: OH my God! I saw her tit, now I can't help but fuck her. Junior High stuff. (substitute dick and change pronouns where necessary. It is the only category I find in Lit. (except maybe loving wives) where there is absolutely no romance or feelings of intimacy before the fuck.

 

[robertreams]

Dad is so drunk he doesn't know who he is fucking? How can a man not know who he is fucking? Doesn't he know his own wife's body? By smell? Taste? shape? Texture? Boredom vs heat? Something?

 

[Hypoxia]

It would be my guess that "real" incest usually involves a minor and an adult. We don't do "real" here we do fantasy.

And a good thing, too, and not just for Incest-Taboo. We pretty-up Incest and Group and of course NonHuman (bestiality), and ugly-down cheating (in LW) and its repercussions. Reality isn't always erotic.

However, the predictability I find in Lit.'s incest stories is: OH my God! I saw her tit, now I can't help but fuck her. Junior High stuff. (substitute dick and change pronouns where necessary. It is the only category I find in Lit. (except maybe loving wives) where there is absolutely no romance or feelings of intimacy before the fuck.

I deliberately write my Incest stories to avoid the cliches.

 

[avrgblkgrl]

You are a genius.

Conjoined twincest.

My ulterior motive is to trick story readers into visiting my profile and reading some shitty poetry.

You sir are every where!