A Little Feedback for a Novice...

bluefox07 said:
Hi,
I just recently made a submission called One Night at the Borderline Hotel. It's about as close as I'll probably come to writing something humorous. I was just wanting to see what people thought about it. Your comments are welcome and appreciated. -bluefox07

Here's the link:
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=196840


-"You know you want me baby!" Crow T. Robot, MST3K

A great story! A well mixed bag of humor and hot Sex! I plan to read more of your stories.

A novice? hahaha
 
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Thanks!

Hey thanks. I consider myself a novice still. Once I get published, then I can move on up the food chain. -bluefox07


-"You know you want me baby!" Crow T. Robot, MST3K
 
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