A female's opinion...

[storytyme]

I have written and published two editions of a story on here called "Putty in her hands" and "Putty in her hands 2". The story is about a woman teaching another woman how to make herself irresistable to others, using hypnosis. This is from a male's point of view. I would like women's views on if you think these stories are somewhat realistic and if you have any suggestions on how I could make it better. I am currently working on the third edition of this story.

Storytyme

 

[dr_mabeuse]

You might have better luck posting your request in the "Story Feedback" board. And do include a link to your story. Without a link, almost no one will bother to try and find it.

---dr.M.

 

[storytyme]

how do you post a link with your comments? Sorry I am sorta new here.

 

[lucky-E-leven]

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=302041

This is my memberpage, simply copied and pasted into the message box I'm writing here.

Just copy and paste the www: addy of your stories from your address bar into the message post. In the options box directly below your message post there is an option to automatically parse url's. If the box is checked then they will automatically come up as links inside your post and take people directly to the story in question.

PM me if you have trouble.

~lucky