KeristaFan
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- Feb 13, 2019
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Hey y'all, this is how it's done. Believable protagonist/narrator, as full of doubts as anyone would be. Vague descriptions of each character's body--really, really, please believe me, I'm begging you, when I see a bra cup size in a description of a woman's body I want to throw everything in the trash. I'm not running a lingerie store. I don't need to know she has 38DDs or 32AAs or whatever. Tell me she's zaftig, curvy, juicy, willowy, spare, scrawny, muscular, frail, whatever. Tell me her breasts are opulent, generous, firm, pillowy, droopy, elegant, spare, whatever; just spare me the cup size. Same goes for male genitalia. Every detail takes something away from my imagination.
The pacing's a bit slow at first but picks up, which is pretty much what you want in any story. Every action follows from the characters' natures (if we agree to suspend disbelief just a little). No one is smug. The narrator tells us how she feels, what she does, and what they all do, and that's the story. Nobody comes off like a superhero; just three ordinary folks having a good time together. Go thou and do likewise.
The pacing's a bit slow at first but picks up, which is pretty much what you want in any story. Every action follows from the characters' natures (if we agree to suspend disbelief just a little). No one is smug. The narrator tells us how she feels, what she does, and what they all do, and that's the story. Nobody comes off like a superhero; just three ordinary folks having a good time together. Go thou and do likewise.
