1st Stab At Erotic Horror (No Pun Intended)

[Mary Riley]

The attached file is my first attempt at the new Erotic Horror section of Literotica.

The name of the story is "Love Everlasting". It was an idea that I had been kicking around for a while but never seemed to have a fitting category for it, so it wasn't until recently that I decided to write it.

As always, constructive criticism is welcomed as well as opinions and thoughts in ways in which the story could be improved. I value any advice and feedback that is given.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Mary,

I don't know it's me or it's your file, but when I downloaded it it appeared as one solid block of text, no paragraphing at all. In this format, it's simply unreadable.

---dr.M.

 

[Mary Riley]

That's odd...it must be the file. Sorry about that.

 

[RoryN]

Don't lie. You totally intended to make that pun. Nicely done!