Gystex Update Thread - New and Improved

Self-indulgent poll: Which of my stories do you like best?

  • Blue Diamond Escorts

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Doing the Sorority

    Votes: 5 31.3%
  • FantasyWomen, Inc.

    Votes: 4 25.0%
  • Sappho's Amulet

    Votes: 2 12.5%
  • Sex

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • The Isle of Lesbos

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • U.S.S. Ishtar

    Votes: 2 12.5%
  • You suck and I don't like any of your stories.

    Votes: 3 18.8%

  • Total voters
    16

gystex

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This is where you'll learn all about updates to my stories. Links to all my stuff is found in my signature, which is updated as I come out with new items.


Doing the Sorority
Lucky you has been selected as the House Stud for the Alpha Chi Omega sorority! Get ready to satisfy the needs of dozens of hot, lusty college girls.

The Isle of Lesbos
On this island paradise, indulge in your lesbian desires with any number of hot, lovely girls.
NOTE: This story has been closed due to major lack of interest - that is to say, even I've lost interest in it. Anyone who wishes to assume the editorship is welcome to it - just contact me.

Sappho's Amulet
A magical amulet gives you power over the minds and emotions of other women - and a strong, insatiable desire to have sex with them.

U.S.S. Ishtar
The Federation Starship ISHTAR has been flung to a remote corner of the galaxy, its crew infected with a virus that drives them mad with lust for each other.

Blue Diamond Escorts
Someone had to take over for Heidi Fleiss! In this story, you are employed by Hollywood's most exclusive escort agency. Celebrities are your clientele, and sex is your service.

Sex
You have one week of enhanced sexual ability and attraction. Make the most of it! (This is a non-branching, linear story; each thread ends with only one option.)

FantasyWomen, Inc.
If I may be so immodest as to say so, this is the ultimate CHYOO story. Choose from over a thousand fully customized FantasyWomen by selecting such features as race, hair color, bust size, and attitude - or choose an "off-the-shelf" Feature Model if you prefer.

I also have non-interactive stories on Literotica.

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If you wish to contribute to one of my stories (and I hope you do) here are my guidelines:

1: Use decent grammar and spelling. None of us hold doctorates in English, but there is a certain level of literacy that's necessary to make any story a good one. I will proofread and correct up to a point, but if it's just plain sloppy I will reject.

2: A single sentence is not a thread. Please submit at least a paragraph.

3: I do not approve of non-consensual sex, even in fantasy. Some people like to fantasize about such things and would never dream of acting on them - to each their own, but it won't happen in my stories.

4: Some stories have other guidelines. They are available on CHYOO.

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The following is a list I created once upon a time to help new readers/writers/users of CHYOO. Other writers have expressed approval over this list, though I have not received feedback from the webmasters about it (they never send feedback on anything). I reproduce it here for those who might like some tips:

THINGS THAT APPLY TO THE STORY AS A WHOLE:

* Follow the rules set by CHYOO. It's their site, and they have final say.

* Do a little reading before doing any writing. Be aware of what's already been done. If you want to do something again that's already here, go ahead, but better to do something new and fresh.

* Make an effort to use proper English. Don't make your readers wade through a morass of bad grammar and creative spelling to get to the story underneath.

* Do not use underage characters. It is improper, disgusting, and morally wrong to do so, and against CHYOO's rules besides. We are not pedophiles, nor do we want anything to do with those who are. The rules of CHYOO state that all characters must be over eighteen years of age.

* When it comes to sex, describe in detail. That is what we are here for.



THINGS THAT APPLY TO THE FIRST THREAD:

* The first thread is the key to the story. It sets the tone, creates the scene, grabs the reader's attention, and entices the writer to contribute. Put some effort into it. Don't just dash something off in two minutes and expect it to be any good.

* Make it long. Describe the characters and the setting, and make sure to clearly demonstrate what the story's plot is to be. Don't leave your readers wondering where you're going with it.

* On the other hand, don't tell the entire story in one thread. The introductory thread is just that, an introduction.

* The first choice is vitally important. The choices leading off from it should each lead to an interesting storyline. It shouldn't be a yes/no question where the answer is obviously "yes" because "no" would mean the end of the story.

* Follow up the first thread with more from your own hand. It's your story, after all, and if you don't submit to it, who will?

* While it is not necessary to include sex in the leading thread, it is generally best to lead the story in that direction from moment one.



WHEN SUBMITTING THREADS TO OTHERS:

* Read their guidelines before you submit. It will save headaches all around.

* Contact editors before submitting threads. They may be gone, and there's no point in writing a thread that will never be accepted or rejected due to te editor's absence.

* Use the same tense and point of view as the rest of the story.

* Write a decently long submission. A single sentence is not a thread.

* Be aware of what has happened in the threads leading up to yours. Do not contradict what has already been written.

* Leave a good hook if you want your thread to be followed up on. Remember, this is about choices. Don't end your thread with only a single logical path to follow at the end, make sure there is a crossroads.

* Alternately, if you feel you have reached a termination point, feel free to end the story. The editor can re-open the thread if he/she does not want it to end there.

* If your thread is rejected, do not become upset or agitated. It may simply not have been what the editor had in mind. Move on to another story if one editor ticks you off, there are plenty of them to choose from.



GENERAL ADVICE:

* Write threads in some other application like Notepad, Wordpad, etc. and then copy-paste them into CHYOO. If you try to write them directly into CHYOO, you could be timed out and lose your thread.

* When dealing with name insertion, the proper way to display the name in the story is {FIRST_NAME} for the first name and {LAST_NAME} for the last name. Be certain to use all caps and the proper punctuation, it is important.

* It is best to double-space between paragraphs. This will make your thread more readable.

* Write for yourself, not the editor or the readers. Write about what turns YOU on. You'll suffer from burnout if you try to please others above yourself.

* The best stories seem to be ones that are about something besides sex. Develop a plot. It doesn't have to be a very believable or involved plot, but something is better than nothing.

* When threads are submitted to your story, take the time to read them and ensure that they will fit properly. Being the editor is more than being a button-pusher. It's your story, be in charge of it. Most importantly, if you do reject a thread, be sure to tell the author why.

* Review and rate other people's threads, especially ones you like. We all like to receive praise.

* We have a polite, friendly, mutually respectful community here. Do not be a jerk. Those who are find out very quickly that they are not welcome around here.

* Have fun with it! That's what this place is for.


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I will try to post updates to my stories to this list whenever they come in, but in the past I have sometimes not been entirely prompt about such things. If you submit a thread to my stuff and I don't mention it here, don't take it personally, it's just my ADD kicking in. I appreciate everyone's submissions to my work!


(Note: Most of the frequent posters around here know that my Avatar changes on roughly a weekly basis - just thought I'd point that out to those who hadn't noticed.)
 
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FantasyWomen, Inc.

FantasyWomen, Inc. is now fully operational and open for business on all threads. Choose any FantasyWoman you like, hetero or lesbian, any physical appearance and attitude. All threads now lead to finished women.

I am also pleased to say that having figured out the "Link Thread" function that is new to CHYOO 2, there are now links that will take you directly to Feature Models, or "off-the-shelf" FantasyWomen that have already been completed by myself or outside contributors. This is a feature for those who don't want to bother with all that choosing of features and would rather get straight to the sexual fantasy. At this time there are about a dozen hetero Feature Models available, and none for the lesbian section because none have been completed yet.

For those who are interested, there are currently 1,075 different women available, with practically limitless room for expansion should contributors wish to customize. The story as a whole comprises over 2,800 threads, making it by far the largest story on CHYOO.

Cheers,
 
New threads by me

New threads by me have been added to...

Sappho's Amulet, in which Darlene and Danielle put on a hell of a show. Click here to jump directly to the thread or follow the path 1-1-2-2-1 to find it.

Sex, in which our hero has his second woman of the night: DeeDee, the waitress. Here or just read from beginning to the current end ("Sex" is a linear story that does not branch).

FantasyWomen Inc, in which the first lesbian FantasyWoman is created and given the role of a sultry Russian spy. Click here.

Enjoy!
 
New thread

A new thread by augy6666 has been added to Doing the Sorority, in which Natalie (House President) uses her formidable powers of persuasion to talk you into a game of strip pool for high stakes. Click here to jump directly to the thread or follow the path 3-1-2-1 to find it.


A new addition to U.S.S. Ishtar has been submitted by android1966. In this story arc, Ensign Skylar Davis gets wild with Andorian Lt. Tilloth, and then goes to see the Captain for a different sort of encounter. Here, or follow 3-1-1-1-1-1.


Enjoy!
 
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New FantasyWoman

A new lesbian FantasyWoman has been created by me:

"Suki", an innocent Japanese exchange student.

Find her by selecting Female - Choose a Feature Model. Suki is the second option on the next page.

Cheers!
 
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New Threads

Two new threads by two of my favorite authors and one brand-new one, who all had to wait an unreasonably long time for me to approve them - sorry! (since I can't log in to my main page on CHYOO anymore, I often don't realize new threads are there).

Fantasy Women, Inc. features a new fantasy by AaronWebster, who brings us an 18-year-old innocent black student who's never heard of sex, it seems - but she's heard of spankings! She can be found here.

There's also has a new thread by DemonD, who continues his excellent thread series of the Asian Bath Attendant. Click here to see his latest or here to start the thread from the beginning.

Finally, one by new author staafje, who also continues DemonD's Bath Attendant story and has a taste from her tits. Find his thread here or, once again, start it from the beginning.

Thanks for all the contributions! I'll try to be a little quicker about approving them in the future.

Cheers,
 
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Oops!

Somehow, a previous update to this thread posted six times. In order to clean the thread up a bit, I am editing the extraneous entries with new update information as it comes in. Please note that there may be new material posted above this thread (which will itself eventually be "edited out").

Cheers!
 
I'm so happy!

It seems that Literotica, which tallys votes every month to name the most popular stories in each category, has selected JNE-99 as the winner for the Non-Human group!

For those who don't know, JNE-99 is about a woman who acquires an android with whom she has a romantic and sexual relationship.

The thread that names all the winners for the month of March is HERE. My story can be found using the links in my sig file.

I invite all my CHYOO friends to read JNE-99 and humbly ask that you indicate a rating based on how good or how lousy you think it is. Every little bit helps, and I think you'll like the story so I am confident in asking for you support.

Cheers,
 
I absolutly love Doing the Sorority , it's a great, well written story that takes a lot different paths, all of which are sexy as hell. I've been trying my damnedest to write a write a thread that I consider worthy of it, but everything I try, I end up scraping. I haven't given up and will eventually get something good in there. The only other story that's given me fits like this is Maester's Geeks are Freaks. I think it gives me trouble because it has such a incredibly detailed world that I can't decide which way I want to go, and when I do, that path has already been taken.

It seems that Literotica, which tallys votes every month to name the most popular stories in each category, has selected JNE-99 as the winner for the Non-Human group!
Congrats! I'll give a read. I'm sure it'll be great!
 
New Threads!

New threads, and lots of them!

I must apologize to my contributors who have waited weeks for these threads to be approved. For some reason, I am not receiving update notices like I used to, and for I while I couldn't figure out how to log into the "new threads" screen so that I could check them. That last problem is solved now, and so I will respond much more quickly in the future.

In any event, here are the new threads:

U.S.S. Ishtar: Ensign Skylar Davis takes the lovely Andorian Tilloth over the edge! Another fine thread in a series by android1966. Click here to jump straight to it.

FantasyWomen, Inc: Building off a thread by Jakelyon is staafje, who gives us a long and sexy oral encounter with the next-door neighbor. To find the thread, go here and select Feature Model "Anne" - then follow through to the current end.

Doing the Sorority: Natalie's game of pool begins - and what a surprise, there's stipping involved! Find it here. Thanks to augy6666!

Doing the Sorority: After turning down the girls' offer and insulting one of their members besides, you get a chance to apologize. Lostandfound contributes his first thread to the story here.

Blue Diamond Escorts: Our high-class whore walks into her first Hollywood party and chats up a couple of fellows - but winds up alone with a smouldering starlet instead! Click here. Another submission by Lostandfound.


Thanks to everyone for these high-quality threads!
 
More threads! More threads!

Doing the Sorority has two more entries, both by lostandfound (whom I will call L&F hereafter). In a previous thread, he arranged a vote among the girls of Alpha Chi Omega to determine your fate after you shamelessly insulted one of their members - now, learn the results! Start here to see his previous thread, and then choose your fate!

Blue Diamond Escorts gets its hottest and sexiest thread yet, once again from L&F. Lesbian love with Halle Berry - that's all I'm going to say about it. Click here to visit the preceding thread, also by L&F, and continue to the new one.

Thank you, L&F! I will try to return threads as soon as possible.
 
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NEW THREADS

FantasyWomen Inc. has a new custom model designed by new author Urborg Vengrath, who gives us a lovely Asian woman, 30 years of age, with small breasts and some exotic tattoos! He may decide to give her an attitude and role to play as well, but there's no reason why someone else might not want to do so. Click here to see his thread.

Doing the Sorority has yet another new thread from one who is certainly one of my favorite contributors, Mr. Lostandfound. Julie, the girl you've insulted, gets to name your punishment - but it may not be what you think... Read about The Room here.

Doing the Sorority features another new thread by another new author, one hellkite. After meeting the virginal Christine at the house party, the two of you slip away for some private time, and then things start getting romantic. Click here for the preceeding thread, and take the "Fireplace" option to see hellkite's new addition.


Thanks to you all!
 
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THREAD UPDATE

Sorry for the delay of several days! I’ve been switching to a new Internet Service Provider, and while I was at it I rebuilt my machine’s OS, so I haven’t been able to get online for a little while.

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From FantasyWomen, Inc

One new thread from Me (Gystex): A new lesbian FantasyWoman modeled to look just like Britney Spears. Yeah, it’s cliché, but let's be honest: we do want to nail her, don't we?
Read it here

To Urborg: I have your newly submitted threads to FantasyWomen, but it's going to take me a bit of time to get them so they fit properly in the story format. I love your stuff, so please be patient with me!

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From Doing the Sorority

One new thread from hellkite: Continuing the romantic interlude with Christine, who shows her smouldering passion.
Read it here or follow the path 2-4-1-1-1-1-1-1

One new thread from lostandfound: After learning Julie’s startling secret motives behind her desire to “punish” you, she works you over good. But perhaps her sisters will take pity on you in the end…
Read it here or follow the path 4-1-2-1-1-2

One new thread from augy6666: Leading off from the same place as L&F’s new thread - except in this one, you and Julie get caught!
Read it here or follow the path 4-1-2-1-1-1

One new thread from lordanhur, a new contributor: You said NO, and the girls retaliated by getting you expelled. Little did they realize who they were dealing with…
Read it here or follow the path 4-1-3

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From Blue Diamond Escorts

One new thread from lostandfound: A hot lesbian encounter with Halle Berry reaches its climax!
Read it here or follow the path 2-1-1-1

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Thanks to everyone for these fine threads!


P.S. Don't worry about it, Maester.
 
There are newly-approved threads in "Doing the Sorority" by hellkite, augy6666, and lost&founder. For the moment, I'm a little too pressed for time to provide links (sorry!) but I'll try to list them later.

I've been phenomenally busy with schoolwork lately, so it's been hard to spend much time here. I apologize to those who waited weeks for thread approval.
 
Just read JNE-99.

All I can say is Wow! I loved it.

You really have a way with lesbian erotica, especially for a guy.
 
THREAD UPDATE

From Doing the Sorority

One new thread from hellkite: Further lovemaking with the virginal Christine. Read it here or follow the path 2-4-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-1

One new thread from lostandfound: Another twist in the tale of Julie’s revenge and Christine’s sympathy. Read it here or follow the path 4-1-2-1-1-2-1-1-1


From Blue Diamond Escorts

One new thread from TJChurch: Upon arrival at the major after-Oscars party in Hollywood, our hero finds a veritable buffet of hot actresses to service. Read it here or follow the path 3-1


SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT

I am pleased to report the posting of JNE-99, Chapter 2, on Literotica. In this second part of what will become a trilogy, Sandi must come to terms with Jenny’s inhumanity. This one’s been getting favorable reviews; I do hope you all take a moment to read and enjoy it!

If you haven’t read Chapter 1 yet, here it is.

Cheers,
 
Hello gystex. I would like to say that I sign up to this forum, just to say that I love JNE-99 and I look forward to part three.
 
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