Haiku

[Voboy]

Good haiku is life:
Subtle. It makes you ponder.
Too literal? Bad.

 

[Voboy]

Feeling annoyance:
Responding haiku has wit!
Original? Wiped.

 

[AlinaX]

why are new authors
always in such a hurry
to get to the end?

 

[Bamagan]

Feeling annoyance:
Responding haiku has wit!
Original? Wiped.

You may have missed it...
Plain insults and hateful words
Not even artful

(The poster who was complaining about the mod from the other forum did not take kindly to your mild rebuke and got rather nasty in their response. Not surprising it got deleted.)

 

[Voboy]

You may have missed it...
Plain insults and hateful words
Not even artful

(The poster who was complaining about the mod from the other forum did not take kindly to your mild rebuke and got rather nasty in their response. Not surprising it got deleted.)

Oh. Shit. I missed it.
Life's too short for drama, though.
So? On with the show!

 

[Michael682]

Evening cummute
Train going south, checking Lit
Pretty ones pass time

 

[Voboy]

why are new authors
always in such a hurry
to get to the end?

A tale old as time:
Youth. Energy. But mostly?
Because they like ass.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

I shyly smile and
Try to tuck a stray lock of
Hair behind my ear.

 

[Michael682]

Christmas time is here
The year coming to its close
Next week take a break

 

[AlinaX]

lair of the white worm
what delicious nudity!
get your teeth stuck in...

 

[Candy_Kane54]

"Hello," she says, and
My breath catches as the sound
Of her voice thrills me.

 

[AlinaX]

Replace the as with a ... and see how it feels to you.

 

[Voboy]

Relax after work,
But then travel tomorrow?
Listlessness ensues.

 

[Bamagan]

Autumn bloom frozen
Preserved in ice all winter
Thaws and wilts in spring

 

[AlinaX]

a thrice-seasoned verse?
who needs summer anyway
when tempers are hot

 

[Voboy]

"Winter is coming."
Starks, ignorantly cozened:
It's global warming.

 

[Voboy]

Sigh. Lit life problems:
Incognito tab goes poof
As software updates.

 

[Bamagan]

Your world heating up?
Surely it's not people's fault.
Blame it on dragons.

"Here there be dragons"
maps once said of the unknown
Where have they all gone?

Fire-filled beasts of yore
Pushed ever skyward by us,
vomiting carbon.

 

[MrPersonManGuy]

"Here be dragons" - maps,
Now replaced by GPS,
Dragons use Google!

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Comes a new year and
Hopefully it will only
Bring you happiness.

 

[Voboy]

Arbitrary date.
Any day starts a new year.
All of us can choose.

 

[AlinaX]

it's four o'clock now
my eyes are open, but that's
just an illusion

 

[Voboy]

Up late, up early:
Numb night/morning confuses.
Go the fuck to sleep!

 

[rthnck]

Your mouth haunts my dreams.
Sliding slowly up and down
Again and again.

 

[AlinaX]

real-life mary sues
waving their wee lightsabers
typing with one hand