Pokemon

[Priscilla_June]

I think you are overthinking this.

Write the story and post it. It's not going to matter that much to readers.

Idk ive had a lot of experiences to the contrary when not staying within the bounds of a category

 

[LupusDei]

Maybe...

So, the pokemon sickness has seemingly minimal effects on pokemon in captivity... but perhaps it greatly increases their libido and aid interbreeding. And interbreeding sick pokemon in certain combination creates mutant pokemon who are real sex fiends. Including, they appear sexually appealing to humans too and willing to play. Sure, such examples are first discovered in the wild, but after some research there's some who produce such types in captivity intentionally.

And that's when the disease jumps to humans, initially to those who fuck their sex pokemon, but then it spreads among humans. It makes humans exceptionally horny too, but also makes all pokemon even more sexually appealing to them... especially to most human males who apparently lose all interest in human females, instead seeking sex with pokemon, especially the mutant types. Perhaps while sick they may even breed the mutant pokemon (and not human female indeed?) to create yet more sexually irresistible human interbreed sextoy pokemon...

While the sickness in human too may recede in a relatively short time (perhaps one to few weeks?), there is no lasting immunity, so one can fall for it again and again. Worse, the deep appeal to pokemon sex lingers. And the interbreed sex pokemon are irresistible even to most healthy men.

Except few guys who apparently are genetically immune to at least that particular effect of the sickness, if not at all. While it is still possible to procreate with the infected men if they are caught between fits of the sickness and somehow, with great effort, interested in fucking an actual female... to avoid population collapse the government issue the immune men with those breeding licenses.

Or female researcher may be tasked with fieldwork towards possibly finding a cure, and/or with testing guys for the aforementioned natural immunity.

 

[ericrodman101]

https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.NmjqMRCxdD2qBTfn9fDLuQHaFE?pid=ImgDet&rs=1
Never for an instant did I imagine the notion of pokemon sex would be even faintly appealing. But this is a great thread and I might actually be into it.

 

[GreatWhiteCock]

https://th.bing.com/th/id/OIP.NmjqMRCxdD2qBTfn9fDLuQHaFE?pid=ImgDet&rs=1
Never for an instant did I imagine the notion of pokemon sex would be even faintly appealing. But this is a great thread and I might actually be into it.

Especially considering the more human like pokemon. Plus the ridiculous monsters or dragons. I'd absolutely love to read about the slutty protag getting butt fucked by a nidoking or something

 

[UsuallyPresent]

Perhaps Team Rocks-Off mutated the virus almost accidentally and are running around trying to find out more. Over time it seems the protag’s preferred pokefucker is a major vector of the disease, only that critter shows no negative symptoms of the mutant strain. Only much later does I become evident that the trainer herself is the reason why, and her poke-dillo (pokephilia? Critter-fucking?) is the reason why

 

[shakna]

Idk ive had a lot of experiences to the contrary when not staying within the bounds of a category

I've found NonHuman are pretty okay with that, if they've invested first, so a few previous chapters.
But what also works well, is having one chapter over in Fantasy, instead. It can bring in a few more readers, and doesn't usually get complaint. (But the "lagtime" of bad to good voting takes longer on Fantasy than NonHuman, so ignore the score for a couple weeks.)

 

[Priscilla_June]

I've found NonHuman are pretty okay with that, if they've invested first, so a few previous chapters.
But what also works well, is having one chapter over in Fantasy, instead. It can bring in a few more readers, and doesn't usually get complaint. (But the "lagtime" of bad to good voting takes longer on Fantasy than NonHuman, so ignore the score for a couple weeks.)

Yea I havnt posted much in non-human yet. Tbh i was thinking just sticking with sci fi/fantasy but I know that is an over saturated category.

 

[Priscilla_June]

Especially considering the more human like pokemon. Plus the ridiculous monsters or dragons. I'd absolutely love to read about the slutty protag getting butt fucked by a nidoking or something

Lol Pikachu may not be the prime example but 100% the thought of the protag being fucked by a Machoke or a gang of Mankes, or maybe a Slaking would be the idea.

 

[Priscilla_June]

I think I prefer the first option. I am struggling to understand what the second option has to do with Pokemon, unless the male humans are breeding Pokemon (which should be impossible barring some sci-fantasy experimentation).

Second option can honestly be simplified. There is already a canonical virus in the Pokemon universe: Pokerus. Tamed/caught Pokemon catch it when battling an infected wild Pokemon. It can't be healed at the Center, but it has a timer in-game (number of days) until it goes away. You can put it in the PC Box to suspend the timer indefinitely. If the Pokemon is in your party, it can infect those other Pokemon. There are no negative effects, just doubles the effort values gained from battling.

Nerding over.

Since this virus already exists in the games, you can just adapt it to your situation and make it relevant to erotica and... breeding. If Pokerus doubles effort values gained, what else can it do related to sexual and reproductive function? Fertility? Humans currently can't be infected with Pokerus, but what if someone is trying to make that happen? And what if the protagonist is part-guinea pig, part-field scientist, looking for infected Pokemon to capture and contain... to observe the virus's effects on their breeding capabilities?

Because the crazy abilities of Pokemon to interbreed within weirdly variable Egg groups and such is already quite Sci-Fantasy. Now throw a curious (and horny) traveling scientist on top of it.

I hadn’t played some of the later games so Pokerus is new to me but I like your line of thinking. A virus that is mutating to affect humans but primarily affects reproductive function. The whole second option I laid out didn’t have much to do with pokemon, only that it was happening in a pokemon setting.


So perhaps Pokerus has been going around for a few years, mutated perhaps because of a “Teams” actions to make the male breeding pool limited and thus make the world more pure for pokemon. Maybe its not quite 99% of men affected but its getting worse and worse. So our female protag is perhaps somehow involved in research on pokemon sex to study it and figure out a solution? Not sure how pokeMon sex ties into the virus, maybe the fluids or such are valuable research. Im wondering if initially the story starts with her getting recruited to do so?

All the while the “Team” is trying to thwart them and make it worse?

I am wondering if I need to control my themes here for my audiences sake, or do I? Just from a writing perspective I already plan to have the following elements:

-exhibitionism
-Non-human
-Non-con
-cheating
-breeding

I know the more I mix themes or focus on a certain them one chapter that I piss different people off. Should it matter? No? But I’m human and when I get bad rating after bad rating it is quite demotivating. Not sure thoughts on the themes?

Maybe...

So, the pokemon sickness has seemingly minimal effects on pokemon in captivity... but perhaps it greatly increases their libido and aid interbreeding. And interbreeding sick pokemon in certain combination creates mutant pokemon who are real sex fiends. Including, they appear sexually appealing to humans too and willing to play. Sure, such examples are first discovered in the wild, but after some research there's some who produce such types in captivity intentionally.

And that's when the disease jumps to humans, initially to those who fuck their sex pokemon, but then it spreads among humans. It makes humans exceptionally horny too, but also makes all pokemon even more sexually appealing to them... especially to most human males who apparently lose all interest in human females, instead seeking sex with pokemon, especially the mutant types. Perhaps while sick they may even breed the mutant pokemon (and not human female indeed?) to create yet more sexually irresistible human interbreed sextoy pokemon...

While the sickness in human too may recede in a relatively short time (perhaps one to few weeks?), there is no lasting immunity, so one can fall for it again and again. Worse, the deep appeal to pokemon sex lingers. And the interbreed sex pokemon are irresistible even to most healthy men.

Except few guys who apparently are genetically immune to at least that particular effect of the sickness, if not at all. While it is still possible to procreate with the infected men if they are caught between fits of the sickness and somehow, with great effort, interested in fucking an actual female... to avoid population collapse the government issue the immune men with those breeding licenses.

Or female researcher may be tasked with fieldwork towards possibly finding a cure, and/or with testing guys for the aforementioned natural immunity.

Ok so this helps me with my above question then. So the disease is intermittent and affects interest and fertility (but not entirely) its enough that the birth rate has bottomed out completely. Some men are immune, that is who the government issues the licenses to.

On the flip side the pokeMon strain of the virus gives some subjects a crazed sex drive for a short period of time. Thus that is what she is researching to find a way to bring that symptom of the strain to humans to get the birth rate back up. Even with the breeders the birth rate is obviously really low.

Meanwhile team purity lays in wait.

 

[Priscilla_June]

I think it was first introduced in Gen 2 but further developed down the line like maybe Gen 4? I forget. First time I remember catching Pokerus was Gen 4 lol.

Also whoever posted Misty porn, stop.

She's 10. Fuck off.

So does the mesh of ideas 1&2 make more sense? I am liking the train go thought a lot. But ive found that my own excitement about a story doesnt always relate to reader’s excitement. Mostly worried about the virus/licensed breeder part fitting in.

 

[Priscilla_June]

I'm going to be honest since you asked for my opinion. By forcing in the thread about humanity dying out because of a fertility-plague, it makes it seem like you are just slapping Pokemon as set dressing on top of a fetish that you want to write about no matter what. It doesn't seem like you are developing the Pokemon world, in a sexy and nasty way.

You can write it however you want. But for me personally, a simpler story is better. Someone sees a virus that affects Pokemon in a sexy way. Someone wants to study that, and that gets them into sexy hijinks. Antagonistic forces see that or have seen that and want to get involved and steal from or otherwise thwart the project. Ending would be the mega-orgasmic Climax (lol) of defeating Team [Whatever] and whatever the ultimate end is of the research, or perhaps if you want more of a subverted ending, then that.

Cut, print. Details as you go.

Because a super complicated framework for a plot that is extremely focused on trying to solve a problem that has to do with Humanity, and not with Pokemon or the Whimsy of Pokemon, means that the pokemon themselves are not even necessary for the story. They are set dressing. It could've been a bestiality story for all I care except that's not allowed on this site. Like breeding super-pigs to help humans... make more humans. You don't need pokemon or Team Rocket for that.

Could've been about like, some made up creatures or another famous mythical creature instead to help humankind's fertility go back up.

So that's why it seems like it is slapped on.

Its a very fair point. And honestly yes the pokemon are not intrinsically linked to the story. They could be replaced by Monsters.

But is a set dressing bad? For the main reason I want to write in the pokemon world and secondly people like the pokemon word?

And does it help if the main focus is sort of how you said, the sexual nature of the pokeMon and how the researchers are trying to use that as a cure for the human aliment?

 

[Priscilla_June]

Pokemon are a very dominating Set Piece.

If I know what that is and I click on a story about that, but they seem almost irrelevant to the story, I would be kind of disappointed.

If I don't know what that is and I click on a story about that to maybe find out, but they are relegated to set dressing as like... assuming I know what the deal is while the main story is human-problem-centric, then, IDK. Maybe I'll be confused? Maybe I, this hypothetical reader, won't care and will just be stroking my dick to the first breeding scene I see?

You decide.

Very fair points, this is the kind of feedback I need.

thank you for spending time giving me your feedback btw.


What if I didn’t brand it as pokemon at all in an upfront way? Basically its branded as dystopian virus/breeding story but as you read its very obvious its set in the pokeMon universe? I could also say something in the authors comments to the affect. Just folks would click on the story at first not knowing?

God i hate thinking through literotica branding…. Lol