Beta reader for part two of my story

[Sai_dias_29]

As the title says, can I get a beta reader for part 2 of my story, "Awakening." So far, it's about 10k words long. I need a blind eye to take a look at it and give me feed backs.

 

[SeXiEGrl04]

If you send me a PM, I'd be happy to read and give feedback

 

[Sai_dias_29]

If you send me a PM, I'd be happy to read and give feedback

I don't think that'll work. The story is has a lot of italics in them, and I don't know how to post it on Lit's PM system with the italics intact.

 

[NikiVien]

Where do we find part 1 so we know if part 2 would be of interest?

 

[Sai_dias_29]

Where do we find part 1 so we know if part 2 would be of interest?

https://www.literotica.com/s/awakening-pt-01-4

Part 1 has a lot issues with head-hopping, which I feel I fixed in part 2.

 

[ElectricBlue]

I don't think that'll work. The story is has a lot of italics in them, and I don't know how to post it on Lit's PM system with the italics intact.

I think the idea is to use PM to swap email addresses, and do the document exchange outside the Lit PM system. That's how it usually works.