Demiurging
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So this one hasn't gone over very well with the people who have read it, but nobody thus far has left a comment on why it didn't resonate with them, so I'm hoping to get some feedback before I begin editing the next three parts without giving attention to sticking points.
In essence, this is just the setup of a lesbian romance between a prostitute and a college girl. This part only goes as far as their first meeting and a single sex scene.
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
https://literotica.com/s/flower-on-the-hook-pt-01
In essence, this is just the setup of a lesbian romance between a prostitute and a college girl. This part only goes as far as their first meeting and a single sex scene.
Any help would be greatly appreciated.
https://literotica.com/s/flower-on-the-hook-pt-01