sirhugs
Riding to the Rescue
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Two rivals have made a bet as to which of them can fuck women from A to Z fastest.
MC1 stumbled briefly before meeting a Quinn, and MC2 gained the lead with Xia until MC1 met the gal whose Mom really loved the Warrior Princess...
now they are tied, looking for a lass whose name started with Z...
Several plot issues need to be sorted:
~ why are they doing this?
~what is the prize?
~is there an official scorekeeper, a judge or panel of judges? If so, who are they?
~how public is the quest?
~how many of the conquests are actually depicted in the story?
~setting- college? work? neighbours? brothers? cousins?
~ what happens if one character finds a Z gal who resists his seduction efforts?
The two contestants also need distinctive characters - is there an obvious hero? If so, his motivation must be complex. But villains are always more interesting (watch Killing Eve).
MC1 stumbled briefly before meeting a Quinn, and MC2 gained the lead with Xia until MC1 met the gal whose Mom really loved the Warrior Princess...
now they are tied, looking for a lass whose name started with Z...
Several plot issues need to be sorted:
~ why are they doing this?
~what is the prize?
~is there an official scorekeeper, a judge or panel of judges? If so, who are they?
~how public is the quest?
~how many of the conquests are actually depicted in the story?
~setting- college? work? neighbours? brothers? cousins?
~ what happens if one character finds a Z gal who resists his seduction efforts?
The two contestants also need distinctive characters - is there an obvious hero? If so, his motivation must be complex. But villains are always more interesting (watch Killing Eve).