Moochie’s Mementos (and a pic or two)

[Moochienanu]

Halloween rolled around again,
And dressed in an early 1960’s housewife ensemble,
Complete with pearls to clutch,
She found herself at the bar again.
It had become a second home by then
And everyone knew and loved her.

She got her soda
Turned to her booth…
And there he was.

 

[Moochienanu]

The End
Or is it?​

 

[Fingerfuxs]

That moment when
the words glide
out loud

Floating in
A
mist

u see them
U feel them
u know them

Rejoice in
knowing it

That ju ju

Isn’t a

Myth



Well done

Thxs for sharing


Footnote : ju ju is another slang way of saying mo jo or something with positive karma , it’s a regional term to me and I’m using it this way here.

 

[TANSTAAFL58]

Nice. A familiar tale with a fresh look to it.

Thank you Moocchie.

 

[scotluvsoral]

The End

Or is it?​

Really enjoyed the story, Moochie! Liked the ending!

 

[JKL123]

Interesting story .... well done.

 

[Inspirinious]

The End

Or is it?​

You asked a question.

I would answer "I hope not. I want there to be more."

 

[Moochienanu]

Nice tale, tail.

Thank you. Both took quite a bit of personal work.

Lovely, haunting and teasing end or pause?

Just a pause caused by writing at work.

First chance I’ve had to sit and read. I love the way your stories are presented, has me hanging on to every word.

I read and believe the basics are drawn from a real life experience, suitably modified to entice us poor mortals.

I absolutely love the pic, you know that tailplugs are one of my things, don’t you.



Pffft. Watch it Mr. (it’s a very nice end though)

I like to let the reader decide things for themselves…. Makes it all a bit more fun to read with some ambiguity.

And I know you in particular like a good tail, Todger.

Lovely tail very exciting

Tail? Or tale? Either way, thank you.

Just keeping the fun going...

You do that well.

Your continuing storyline is compelling and well crafted, I'm thinking it through. But the one thing I already knew was that whoever you bring into your life is beyond blessed and a most fortunate son or individual. I'm both fascinated and somewhat envious as you are a gem.

Thank you, tnman. I am having a difficult time believing most of what you write, but it is very kind of you to say.

{just musing to myself}

Is this her true story?

Is it a metaphor?

Is this totally a work of fiction?​

Don't answer!

I don't want to know.

More enjoyable to read while considering the possibilities.​

What do you think now? Have your questions been answered now that there is finality? Or were more raised with the end?

That moment when
the words glide
out loud

Floating in
A
mist

u see them
U feel them
u know them

Rejoice in
knowing it

That ju ju

Isn’t a

Myth



Well done

Thxs for sharing


Footnote : ju ju is another slang way of saying mo jo or something with positive karma , it’s a regional term to me and I’m using it this way here.

Thank you for coming along on the ride, FF.

Nice. A familiar tale with a fresh look to it.

Thank you Moochie.

I wanted to do something for the season, but thought an exorcism felt too close to reality right now… so instead you get a het couple with a man who is a ghost...

Really enjoyed the story, Moochie! Liked the ending!

Glad you enjoyed it, Scoty.

Interesting story .... well done.

Thank you for reading. I’m not sure if I like it, but that’s the good thing about writing: I don’t have to read it again after it’s out of me.

 

[Moochienanu]

You asked a question.

I would answer "I hope not. I want there to be more."

*sigh*

I really do too… but I don’t think this story will get any more space on the page.

The good news is, their love will be always
Even if nothing is written of it ever again
They will endure the pain of it.

 

[Inspirinious]

. . . . . . .
What do you think now? Have your questions been answered now that there is finality? Or were more raised with the end?
. . . . . . . . . .

*sigh*

I really do too… but I don’t think this story will get any more space on the page.

The good news is, their love will be always
Even if nothing is written of it ever again
They will endure the pain of it.

For me, more questions were raised by the ending. But I suppose that is real life. A never ending story.

I must add that I thoroughly enjoyed the story and your writing style. Well worth reading.

Thank you.

 

[AngelicaS1780]

An interesting twist, Moochie.
Makes me think of a passage from an Indigo Girls song...

Of all my demon spirits
I need you the most
I'm in love with your ghost

 

[Todger65]

The End

https://forum.literotica.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=2126176&stc=1&d=1635524795

Or is it?​

Now this is most definitely the ending I like.

Beautiful story, perfect for the time of year, hope it helped straighten your mind out a bit.

 

[wilderness]

Halloween rolled around again,
And dressed in an early 1960’s housewife ensemble,
Complete with pearls to clutch,
She found herself at the bar again.
It had become a second home by then
And everyone knew and loved her.

She got her soda
Turned to her booth…
And there he was.

They danced.
They did the mash, they did the monster mash
The monster mash, it was a graveyard smash
They did the mash, it caught on in a flash
They did the mash, they did the monster mash

 

[Moochienanu]

For me, more questions were raised by the ending. But I suppose that is real life. A never ending story.

I must add that I thoroughly enjoyed the story and your writing style. Well worth reading.

Thank you.

I’m glad you enjoyed it, I hate to disappoint.

An interesting twist, Moochie.
Makes me think of a passage from an Indigo Girls song...

Of all my demon spirits
I need you the most
I'm in love with your ghost

I really like that… those lyrics are deep.

Now this is most definitely the ending I like.

Beautiful story, perfect for the time of year, hope it helped straighten your mind out a bit.

Thought you would!

Thank you, Todger.

They danced.
They did the mash, they did the monster mash
The monster mash, it was a graveyard smash
They did the mash, it caught on in a flash
They did the mash, they did the monster mash

This made me smile. Thank you so much, wilderness.

 

[Moochienanu]

It’s the things I tell myself not to say
The words I write and then erase
The unwritten messages between
The distanced, polite, curt ones

In that space lives my truths
The tears you won’t see
The loss of strength or fight
The deep ache of my heart
The wishes that you know
The pain that will never end

It’s amidst the pauses
And the overthought replies
You will get the glimpse
Of what I really want to say

 

[Inspirinious]

It’s the things I tell myself not to say
The words I write and then erase
The unwritten messages between
The distanced, polite, curt ones

In that space lives my truths
The tears you won’t see
The loss of strength or fight
The deep ache of my heart
The wishes that you know
The pain that will never end

It’s amidst the pauses
And the overthought replies
You will get the glimpse
Of what I really want to say

So.

I must pay closer attention.
Analyze everything that is written,
and surmise what was erased or never written.

Read between the lines,
find the unseen tears,
feel your ache, feel your pain.

All of which I willingly do,
in my never ending quest
to help you through dark times.

 

[Todger65]

It’s the things I tell myself not to say
The words I write and then erase
The unwritten messages between
The distanced, polite, curt ones

In that space lives my truths
The tears you won’t see
The loss of strength or fight
The deep ache of my heart
The wishes that you know
The pain that will never end

It’s amidst the pauses
And the overthought replies
You will get the glimpse
Of what I really want to say

I caught on to this soon after you first started posting on Lit. It is very difficult, to say the least, to get into the mind of another person, more so when long distance.

 

[Moochienanu]

No Pants November Rules and Pic Index

No Pants November 2021

About

Every year in November, I spend a month not wearing pants. I use lit as a way to keep track of myself and hold myself accountable. Plus, I get to share my cute outfits for a whole month with you!

Rules

1. No pants (jeans, trousers, slacks, whatever you want to call them).

• The only caveats to rule 1:

- At work if the uniform does not have an option for pantsless attire (in other words, I have to wear scrubs during working hours - no way around it).
- Pajama pants for lounging in bed or on couch only (they cannot leave the house).

• Acceptable pant alternatives:

- Dresses or skirts with any combination of the following under:
> Nothing
> just panties
> Socks
> Tights
> Stockings
> footless tights

Picture index

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[Moochienanu]

November 1, 2021

Yes, this was my Halloween costume. I wore it to work last night and it is my outfit today.

 

[Moochienanu]

I’m doing another “challenge” too…

November’s Writer’s Digest Poem A Day Challenge

The real rules are found HERE

My Super-Special Moochie-Personalized Rules

• Write a poem every day of the month of November (30 total)

• Poem can be about any topic

• Poem can use writer’s digest prompts

- If writer’s digest prompts suck, I will just write what I want.​

• Poem can be accompanied by a picture, but should have the ability to be independent of it

• 15-20 Poems will be collected into a chapbook and made available for your purchase

- This means, if you have a poem you really enjoy and would like to see it or the accompanying picture in the book, you should let me know
- Some revision may happen at the end of the month and before the book is “published”​

Poem index

November 1, 2021 - my Love,
November 2, 2021 - Am I ready
November 3, 2021 - As I Wander
November 4, 2021 - Party Time
November 5, 2021 - Something Special
November 6, 2021 - Bath
November 7, 2021 - Skin deep
November 8, 2021 - Dead of the Night
November 9, 2021 - In the end
November 10, 2021 - It is my Nature
November 11, 2021 - Remember
November 12, 2021 - Arrangements
November 13, 2021 - Untitled for now
November 14, 2021 - Fuck That
November 15, 2021 - One the Screen
November 16, 2021 - Time to Believe
November 17, 2021 - The Symbol
November 18, 2021 - A Thursday poem
November 19, 2021 - Crystal Ball
November 20, 2021 - Hurt You
November 21, 2021 - Nightgown
November 22, 2021 - Curious Kitten
November 23, 2021 - Candlelight vigils
November 24, 2021 - Fanning the Flames
November 25, 2021 - Thank You
November 26, 2021 - Well Said
November 27, 2021 - Across your heart 2
November 28, 2021 - Kiss me
November 29, 2021 - thinking next time
November 30, 2021 - Bound

 

[Moochienanu]

November 1st - a correspondence poem

my Love,

Last night, I whispered
‘I miss you’
into the sky, and watched the words
settle amongst the stars
the way your face did when I looked up
into your eyes before that last kiss…
and I wanted you to know,
there’s still space here, in my heart
where your name is written
Always,
Yours

 

[scotluvsoral]

my Love,

Last night, I whispered
‘I miss you’
into the sky, and watched the words
settle amongst the stars
the way your face did when I looked up
into your eyes before that last kiss…
and I wanted you to know,
there’s still space here, in my heart
where your name is written
Always,
Yours

I avoid emotional pain when I can but sometimes, yesterday for me, we lost our 14 y.o. loving dog and that pain is real and significant. Your pain, or rather your prose of pain, is elegant and beautiful. You speak soul language, Moochie! BTW....this picture makes me want to taste you, even more!

 

[Inspirinious]

No Pants November 2021

About

Every year in November, I spend a month not wearing pants. I use lit as a way to keep track of myself and hold myself accountable. Plus, I get to share my cute outfits for a whole month with you!

......

Picture index

November 1, 2021

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November’s Writer’s Digest Poem A Day Challenge

The real rules are found HERE

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Poem index

November 1, 2021

.......

You have certainly committed to a busy November.

I'm looking forward to following both challenges.

 

[Inspirinious]

my Love,

Last night, I whispered
‘I miss you’
into the sky, and watched the words
settle amongst the stars
the way your face did when I looked up
into your eyes before that last kiss…
and I wanted you to know,
there’s still space here, in my heart
where your name is written
Always,
Yours

What a tender image, while also so poignant.

It's incredible how just two words, "last kiss" can be so painful.

I ache that you are still in such pain. Such pain may linger a long time.

But I am confident that you will eventually leave the darkness and discover the light.

Life will go on.

and what a great picture to couple with this poem.

 

[Todger65]

https://forum.literotica.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=2126313&stc=1&d=1635781116
Yes, this was my Halloween costume. I wore it to work last night and it is my outfit today.

Lovely. What did other staff have to say when you turned up at work in it before changing into scrubs.