Cleaning up his act

Monkeybacon518

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Before the safety police show up, I know that this is possibly dangerous, but this is an erotica site, not OSHA, so relax and allow yourself to fantasize :p

Here's a bit of a crazy, out-there one: a clean freak, car-enthusiast wife has a slob of a husband who allows his personal hygiene to slip a little too far... So she convinces him to go with her to a carwash, where she intends on cleaning up his act!
Can be creative here, maybe she takes him to a DIY wash and washes him herself, maybe she ties him to the hood and he gets dragged through the automatic carwash. Only real 'requirements' are a domme wife submitting her sub husband to carwash related torment
 
If he were tied spread-eagled in the bed of a pickup, he would not be visible to most traffic.
 
To quote a prolific author on Lit, who's been around for a minute, and has excellent advice:


the only way to become more of a writer is to write. since your ideas are so specific, this would be a good place to start.
 
To quote a prolific author on Lit, who's been around for a minute, and has excellent advice:

Well, the OP did publish one story four years ago and he has three followers. It's a start, at least.

I'm struck at how much sadism shows up in these story ideas - I mean in the sense of coercion. How about the idea of some fun, even if it has a BDSM theme? I know, there are some people who want to be degraded, but at least make it clear that they are volunteering for it.
 
Well, the OP did publish one story four years ago and he has three followers. It's a start, at least.

I'm struck at how much sadism shows up in these story ideas - I mean in the sense of coercion. How about the idea of some fun, even if it has a BDSM theme? I know, there are some people who want to be degraded, but at least make it clear that they are volunteering for it.


Yeah, I have an actual diagnosed case of ADD, and suspected Aspbergers as well, so focus is hard for me. For the one story I finished and posted, I currently have 7 that I started and they're currently in limbo on my Google drive, waiting for the day I feel inspired and can focus long enough to finish any of them haha

And I love sadism in a story, but playfulness is great for this prompt! Maybe a boyfriend and girlfriend had a bet on a sporting event, and the loser gets teasingly washed in the driveway along with the car :D
 
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