Unusual idea

[Jsnweir29]

Hello all
I gave an unusual idea for a story, or perhaps a series of stories. I love stories about well dressed woman, be it a power business suit, or an elegant dress, but what ever the outfit she must be wearing stockings or pantyhose and high heels.
I love the office affair type of idea. Erotic encounters with a mysterious man etc.
But.... I also have a fetish for a woman dressed just as described get her car stuck in the mud. This type of story is missing on this site. I know there are a few sites that cater to thus type of fetish, but they have basically become dormant.

The basic idea I have is a powerful executive on business trip, traveling some desolate country roads, gets lost and ultimately gets her luxurious car stuck in the mud. After trying for a long time she calls for help. A handsome tow truck driver responds to the call and one thing leads to another and they end up making love on the hood of her mired car.
This could be a one off story or a recurring series. Maybe she discovers an exotic way to have satisfying sexual encounters by going out and getting herself stranded.

I have the ideas, but not the literary skills to write them into a story.

Are there any authors willing to take the reigns of this idea??

Thanks in advance

 

[Carnevil9]

I think that is a great idea for a story. Lots of opportunities for nice lustful action. There are plenty of stories about male executives who get taken down a peg, and end up liking it. I think similar stories about powerful women are rarer. We could use more of them!

And don't sell yourself short. Your brief post demonstrates better writing skills than many of the published stories on this site. I'm sure you can write it yourself. Even if you aren't as good as you'd like to be, you will get better with practice. Go for it!

 

[sirhugs]

In the sequel, instead of a handsome tow truck driver, the only help in miles is old One Tooth Uncle Gus, who is willing to winch her with his 1975 Ford pickup.

 

[jaF0]

City girl stuck in the country seeking help from Cooter is by no means original or unique. Been done a jillion times in all sorts of media including TV.

But that doesn't mean you can't do it again and Lit it up.

 

[jaF0]

Weren't there some 70s nookie flicks along that line ..... city slickers getting caught on a back road by hick sheriffs and sent off to the county work farms where they had to work it off by getting the rednecks off?

 

[silversword]

Room for the night

Breakdown could be miles from anywhere, tow truck driver can only recover her car to his garage, it's late a night and she can't make alternative arrangements or hire a car until tomorrow.

Tow truck driver offers to put her up for the night, takes her to his house that he shares with his wife and grown up son. Powerful woman feels very out of place in their run down home, decides to accept a drink in order to calm herself.

Turns out their homebrew does much more than calm her...

 

[jaF0]

Flip this around to the very old school tale of the traveling salesman and the farmer's daughter.


OK, so we don't really have traveling salespeople any more, but this HoityToity lawyer type is investigating a matter for an upcoming lawsuit, or maybe a criminal defense case. EuroCar breaks down and she walks to the nearest house carrying her $1000 spike heels.

Farmer's son Cletus answers the door ....

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Hmm... I wrote one of those call Woman in White.

And just an aside, stockings are sexy, pantyhose's not so much. In fact I have never found pantyhose sexy once I found out she wasn't wearing stockings. did I leave? No. But I tore them off and told her NO MORE. She nodded and took all her pantyhose out of her drawer and dumped them in the trash.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Flip this around to the very old school tale of the traveling salesman and the farmer's daughter.


OK, so we don't really have traveling salespeople any more, but this HoityToity lawyer type is investigating a matter for an upcoming lawsuit, or maybe a criminal defense case. EuroCar breaks down and she walks to the nearest house carrying her $1000 spike heels.

Farmer's son Cletus answers the door ....

They still roamed the earth when I was young.

There was always one knocking on our door trying to sell something or other to mom. Mostly vacuum cleaners and encyclopedias. And with us two, me and my younger brother, running around there was no hanky panky.

 

[jaF0]

Mix the door-to-door missionaries (ie JWs) with the likes of the NVXIUM sex cult and what do you get?

 

[gunhilltrain]

Hello all
I gave an unusual idea for a story, or perhaps a series of stories. I love stories about well dressed woman, be it a power business suit, or an elegant dress, but what ever the outfit she must be wearing stockings or pantyhose and high heels.
I love the office affair type of idea. Erotic encounters with a mysterious man etc.
But.... I also have a fetish for a woman dressed just as described get her car stuck in the mud. This type of story is missing on this site. I know there are a few sites that cater to thus type of fetish, but they have basically become dormant.

The basic idea I have is a powerful executive on business trip, traveling some desolate country roads, gets lost and ultimately gets her luxurious car stuck in the mud. After trying for a long time she calls for help. A handsome tow truck driver responds to the call and one thing leads to another and they end up making love on the hood of her mired car.
This could be a one off story or a recurring series. Maybe she discovers an exotic way to have satisfying sexual encounters by going out and getting herself stranded.

I have the ideas, but not the literary skills to write them into a story.

Are there any authors willing to take the reigns of this idea??

Thanks in advance

My own kink is that her stockings are held up with a garter and straps - you can still get those. Maybe she likes to have transparent panties on top of them - makes her feel slutty under her proper clothes.

I'd have her get stuck in the Pinelands in central New Jersey, because I know them well. She'd be coming back from Philadelphia to an upscale Jersey shore town like Rumson or Mantoloking when she decided to take the detour.

I did know a guy who for a while drove a tow truck into there to pull out stranded cars. He wasn't conventionally handsome but he was very macho and assertive. He was big on telling stories - some of them made up - but I never heard about him getting it on with a customer.

I almost feel like writing this one, but it wouldn't be ready for at least a month. If I do it, I'll PM you. I'd probably have the first encounter in the cab of the truck, but maybe not. By the way, the people who live down there call themselves "Pineys."

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pine_Barrens_(New_Jersey)

 

[gunhilltrain]

Yeah, I think I will do this one. That guy was such a natural-born character, you couldn't make up someone better. And the setting is great too. I can already imagine exactly what they'd say to each other.

 

[Jsnweir29]

My own kink is that her stockings are held up with a garter and straps - you can still get those. Maybe she likes to have transparent panties on top of them - makes her feel slutty under her proper clothes.

I'd have her get stuck in the Pinelands in central New Jersey, because I know them well. She'd be coming back from Philadelphia to an upscale Jersey shore town like Rumson or Mantoloking when she decided to take the detour.

I did know a guy who for a while drove a tow truck into there to pull out stranded cars. He wasn't conventionally handsome but he was very macho and assertive. He was big on telling stories - some of them made up - but I never heard about him getting it on with a customer.

I almost feel like writing this one, but it wouldn't be ready for at least a month. If I do it, I'll PM you. I'd probably have the first encounter in the cab of the truck, but maybe not. By the way, the people who live down there call themselves "Pineys."

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pine_Barrens_(New_Jersey)

You sound an awful lot like me when in come to her outfit, weather it's a dress, or a power suit, she must be wearing stockings.
I'm familiar with the Pine Barrens, although I've never been there myself. I'm thinking it would be the perfect place for a story such as what I'm wanting to do to take place. I'm guessing there are a ton of secluded dirt roads.
I did give the story a try yesterday and it's in for approval right now. I left it off to easily be the start of an ongoing series.
I'm not satisfied with it personally, I think I left too many holes in the basic story, but I gave it my best go.
I hope you do give this idea a go. I'd love to see someone else's take on the idea.

J.

 

[gunhilltrain]

You sound an awful lot like me when in come to her outfit, weather it's a dress, or a power suit, she must be wearing stockings.
I'm familiar with the Pine Barrens, although I've never been there myself. I'm thinking it would be the perfect place for a story such as what I'm wanting to do to take place. I'm guessing there are a ton of secluded dirt roads.
I did give the story a try yesterday and it's in for approval right now. I left it off to easily be the start of an ongoing series.
I'm not satisfied with it personally, I think I left too many holes in the basic story, but I gave it my best go.
I hope you do give this idea a go. I'd love to see someone else's take on the idea.

J.

Yes, is a good idea; I rarely see any worth trying in this forum. I'm definitely going to do it, but I need a bit of time to write it. It's going to have a romantic angle at the end.

The Pine Barrens feel weirdly isolated when you're inside the area. Virtually none of the roads are paved, and there are places where, especially if you don't have four-wheel drive, it is possible to get stuck. It will happen in mild or warm weather, probably around 2007 or 2008. She will be wearing thigh-high dark stockings I think. I've found some photos online that give me a good idea of what she looks like and what she's wearing.

The guy I'm thinking of drove a tow truck as a part-time side hustle to his regular job. He has since passed at a relatively young age. He had many characteristics that make him ideal as the male protagonist here. His conversation with the woman is an important part of the build-up to the sex. Then I will describe what happens afterwards, which is also an important part of the story. Not sure if it will be a series, however.

I will let you know when it's posted. Congratulations on your first story here. It's exciting to post your first one.

 

[jaF0]

Unlikely an executive type would be wearing dark hose during the day for business.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Unlikely an executive type would be wearing dark hose during the day for business.

She's a lawyer, if you must know. And she does things her own way. Write your own version and do it as you see fit.

 

[Jsnweir29]

Yes, is a good idea; I rarely see any worth trying in this forum. I'm definitely going to do it, but I need a bit of time to write it. It's going to have a romantic angle at the end.

The Pine Barrens feel weirdly isolated when you're inside the area. Virtually none of the roads are paved, and there are places where, especially if you don't have four-wheel drive, it is possible to get stuck. It will happen in mild or warm weather, probably around 2007 or 2008. She will be wearing thigh-high dark stockings I think. I've found some photos online that give me a good idea of what she looks like and what she's wearing.

The guy I'm thinking of drove a tow truck as a part-time side hustle to his regular job. He has since passed at a relatively young age. He had many characteristics that make him ideal as the male protagonist here. His conversation with the woman is an important part of the build-up to the sex. Then I will describe what happens afterwards, which is also an important part of the story. Not sure if it will be a series, however.

I will let you know when it's posted. Congratulations on your first story here. It's exciting to post your first one.

This sounds good. A big part of it for me is obviously the woman and what she is wearing, but also the stuck itself.
The car plays an important part... sports cars are nice, as well as large luxury cars but 9 times out of 10... it always must be a rear wheel drive. It's hard to explain exactly why but it sure adds to it for me. Also she must reluctantly get out into the muddy conditions... adds to the vulnerability of the situation.
Your description of the Pine Barrons sounds perfect for this idea. Lots of dirt roads for her to get lost on.
Can't wait to read it.
PM me if you have any questions or want ideas.

J.

 

[gunhilltrain]

This sounds good. A big part of it for me is obviously the woman and what she is wearing, but also the stuck itself.
The car plays an important part... sports cars are nice, as well as large luxury cars but 9 times out of 10... it always must be a rear wheel drive. It's hard to explain exactly why but it sure adds to it for me. Also she must reluctantly get out into the muddy conditions... adds to the vulnerability of the situation.
Your description of the Pine Barrons sounds perfect for this idea. Lots of dirt roads for her to get lost on.
Can't wait to read it.
PM me if you have any questions or want ideas.

J.

She may be able to climb out through the window and get to the roof or hood; it think that is possible.

I remember riding through there once in a Nissan Pathfinder (I wasn't the driver) and what appeared to be a puddle turned out to be a sort of sink hole. However, the truck did make it out through the far side.

Anyway, as I said, this may take a couple of weeks. And yeah, I'm definitely going to write it in my own way as I see fit.

Regarding your own first story: the first comment on my first ever story was by an obvious troll. I wasn't prepared for that. But Lit has plenty of trolls. Or sometimes they are simply readers with some issue that bugs them. Once in a while they are even right. I hope you didn't put it in Loving Wives.

 

[Jsnweir29]

Anyway, as I said, this may take a couple of weeks. And yeah, I'm definitely going to write it in my own way as I see fit.

I wasn't suggesting you write the story any other way. I'm looking forward to reading your take on the idea.
I was simply just saying what parts I like best.

 

[Hypoxia]

She's kited-up in fancy dress to impress her family firm's board of directors at the annual meeting but she's warned of the impending meteor strike and high-tails it out of town just before the impact that obliterates millions of customers. Her Lincoln towncar gets stuck in the mud outside a rural insane asylum. Inmates offer suggestions but they're crazy, not stupid, same as her. Cue the group sex. Do tentacles intrude?

 

[gunhilltrain]

She's kited-up in fancy dress to impress her family firm's board of directors at the annual meeting but she's warned of the impending meteor strike and high-tails it out of town just before the impact that obliterates millions of customers. Her Lincoln towncar gets stuck in the mud outside a rural insane asylum. Inmates offer suggestions but they're crazy, not stupid, same as her. Cue the group sex. Do tentacles intrude?

I know you're pulling our collective legs, but why don't you write some of these ideas already? Maybe you already have; I haven't read much of your existing stuff. By the way, a meteor strike large enough to destroy Philadelphia, say, would probably throw up enough dust to end much of life on earth. There won't be any insane asylums.

Now I see I did favorite your story the XYZ-Bomber Journal and I commented that it merited a sequel or further expansion of the story.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

Mix the door-to-door missionaries (ie JWs) with the likes of the NVXIUM sex cult and what do you get?

Some asshole preaching how dirty and what a sinner you are, while he fucks the shit out of you with his sword of mercy.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Some asshole preaching how dirty and what a sinner you are, while he fucks the shit out of you with his sword of mercy.

Reminds me of Margaret White and her ex-husband in Carrie. Their super-religious sexless marriage is disrupted by booze.

"We got down on our knees to pray for strength. . .Then he took me. He took me, with the stink of filthy roadhouse whiskey on his breath, and I liked it. I liked it!"

A strange but weirdly hot scene, although it's described, not depicted. She didn't seem to learn anything from it however. Might be a worthy story idea, however, in which she does change her mind because of that incident.

 

[Jsnweir29]

They've published my story.
Please, I would like everyone's feedback.
Here is the link

https://literotica.com/s/executive-decisions-1

 

[gunhilltrain]

You're doing pretty well for your first time out. 3.83 is a respectable score; I have gotten much lower than that at times. And you have three favorites so far. I have to read through your content more carefully; I haven't had time yet.