Moochie’s Mementos (and a pic or two)

[Moochienanu]

Poetry without words

 

[wilderness]

Walk on Water

Elementary was so long ago
When puddles were oceans
Tide pools entire universes
Jumping in with two feet
Reaching in with both hands
Grabbing hold of the clouds
Escaping into memories
Of fluid sand slipping between toes
Digging in deeper
Time whittling away glaciers
Moving bodies of water
Dancing around each other
Where they touch
Are touched
Forming around on every side
In every way
As waves lullingly sing against rocks

I am a vessel filling

And everything is vapor in the end.

https://forum.literotica.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=2122236&stc=1&d=1628169138

Mermaids are real!

 

[Azuldrgon]

*hugs*
Wow!!
Thank you for sharing Moochie.
<3

 

[hotcpu]

The 1,000 words that speaks are all saying one thing ... Beautiful . Love this Moochie

 

[Todger65]

https://forum.literotica.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=2122335&stc=1&d=1628251713

Lovely outfit, always did like your collar.

 

[Rt127]

Very Noice

 

[Dubinsky]

Dear god.

You're right. Visual poetry. Hiding something is often more affecting than showing everything.

 

[HonorableRogue]

Poetry without words

Moochie I struggle to call that poetry without words but there's no doubt it's art. Beautiful. Erotic. Art.

Cheers

 

[Joxlrg]

It's like an invitation to take your body sadistically
But a reminder to take care of your heart
Without saying a single word !!

 

[Moochienanu]

Mermaids are real!

Hehe! We prefer the term ‘Siren.’

*hugs*
Wow!!
Thank you for sharing Moochie.
<3

You’ll have me blushing with much more of that. *hugs*

The 1,000 words that speaks are all saying one thing ... Beautiful . Love this Moochie

What an interesting thought: a long verse, all one word repeated. Would the word change meaning for the reader after a time?

Lovely outfit, always did like your collar.

It always makes me giggle to think of something like this as an outfit. I guess there’s no other way to reference it, though since it isn’t really clothing, it’s not suitable to refer to it as a get-up…

Very Noice

Or is it very naughty?

Dear god.

You're right. Visual poetry. Hiding something is often more affecting than showing everything.

I have found that having some secrets and knowing who to share them with is the secret to life.

Moochie I struggle to call that poetry without words but there's no doubt it's art. Beautiful. Erotic. Art.

Cheers

We could now have the argument that art is, actually, visual poetry, since poetry is written art… but I’ve not much energy for it, HR.

Side note: how are you? Been a while since you stopped in.

It's like an invitation to take your body sadistically
But a reminder to take care of your heart
Without saying a single word !!

It is always intriguing to hear what other people think when presented without context. Thank you for sharing.

 

[HonorableRogue]

We could now have the argument that art is, actually, visual poetry, since poetry is written art… but I’ve not much energy for it, HR.

Side note: how are you? Been a while since you stopped in.

Thank you Miss M. I lack the energy to mount a good defense so I'd probably quickly concede. Then again, I prefer debate to argument. The former has better structure and often focuses on facts while the latter is a free for all often running on passion.

I'm well thanks. A little run down from work. Partly the job and mostly the commute. Summertime means road construction in any place that gets snow and road construction means longer trips with more people driving like asshats (no insult to tramp stamps intended).

It's only been a while since I commented. You're thread is on the short list of places I visit when I stop by and I stop by far more often than my commenting suggests.

Cheers

 

[Moochienanu]

Thank you Miss M. I lack the energy to mount a good defense so I'd probably quickly concede. Then again, I prefer debate to argument. The former has better structure and often focuses on facts while the latter is a free for all often running on passion.

I'm well thanks. A little run down from work. Partly the job and mostly the commute. Summertime means road construction in any place that gets snow and road construction means longer trips with more people driving like asshats (no insult to tramp stamps intended).

It's only been a while since I commented. You're thread is on the short list of places I visit when I stop by and I stop by far more often than my commenting suggests.

Cheers

You’re absolutely right, debate is a much better word for us… or discussion, maybe? But really, my only defense would be to offer up another picture, and who knows if that would ever change your opinion.

I’m glad you’re doing well. I agree, road construction (and negotiating the drive around it) can be very frustrating. I hope you find the soothing mix of music that helps you through it with a smile.

I’ll keep in mind that you’re lurking more than you’re speaking up.

 

[Inspirinious]

My 2 cents in this discussion....

For me, your art consists of words and/or pictures, however you choose to use them.

For those of us that follow your thread, both formats conjure mental "images" of what you are experiencing, including what you physically see, feel, smell and taste, along with the thoughts and emotions in your mind.

I greatly admire your talents working words and pictures together.
I also believe that others feel as I do.

I'll leave it at that.

 

[Shyguy1369]

I agree with Inspirinious.
Through both words and pictures you have conveyed so much. Be it an emotion or feeling and all the images that can be conjured in ones mind.
So many times, when visiting your thread, I have been able to feel a range of emotions. Through your words and images shared you have made me smile, cry and almost everything in between. I appreciate your thread so much.

 

[Azuldrgon]

You’ll have me blushing with much more of that. *hugs*

There really isn't a downside to that, my friend. *hugs tight*

 

[menoone]

You carry yourself very well, and that image is inspiration for a great number of thoughts. For example, that collar looks snug, but I think a few fingers could be squeezed in between it and the back of your neck for a tighter fit.

 

[Moochienanu]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

 

[Shyguy1369]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

I feel unlucky, but what I really feel are your words pulling at my heart. You always have an effect on me. Good or bad, you've always been able to make me feel things.

 

[Inspirinious]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

Reading this I feel very upbeat, very positive. Good things can, and do happen to each of us. We should look for good events and recognize them.

I love the photo you choose to pair with this poem.

I also concur with some of what Shyguy1369 said:
"You always have an effect on me. Good or bad, you've always been able to make me feel things."

 

[lustfulraj]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

May I give you a hand? Or two?

 

[Joxlrg]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

I would gladly hold the other one

 

[Massive Grooves]

I’m going to go try and find a smooth rock
For luck

 

[Moochienanu]

Reading this I feel very upbeat, very positive. Good things can, and do happen to each of us. We should look for good events and recognize them.

I love the photo you choose to pair with this poem.

I also concur with some of what Shyguy1369 said:
"You always have an effect on me. Good or bad, you've always been able to make me feel things."

I find writing things like this help to remind myself of these times, memories, feelings. It’s good to have reminders.

I’m glad you enjoy my pairing picture.

As far as feeling things, it’s a side effect of exposing reality: it can be emotional.

May I give you a hand? Or two?

Very kind of you to offer.

I would gladly hold the other one

I’ll put your offer under advisement. Thank you.

I’m going to go try and find a smooth rock
For luck

I’m sure you’ll find one that will fit perfectly in your pocket.

 

[menoone]

Luck

You feel lucky
A four-leaf clover
That smooth rock from the beach -
Rubbing my finger over the surface
Just to feel closer
To the soft touch of lips on skin
To the warm embrace of your body
To the strong pull of need
To a time when
There is time
Counted in beats
Of hearts
Skipping across
Every layer
Holding each other
And feeling so very lucky -
A couple of horseshoes
That shooting star wished on

Lovely words as always and the one that can hold you is lucky indeed.

 

[Inspirinious]

I find writing things like this help to remind myself of these times, memories, feelings. It’s good to have reminders.

I’m glad you enjoy my pairing picture.

As far as feeling things, it’s a side effect of exposing reality: it can be emotional.

Quality art should stir be emotional, for the artist and the art enthusiast. Isn't that one of the reasons for creating art?