I'm in the process of writing my first story involving my wife and out older neighbor (i know not original but its what I find hot). She has performed oral for him on his deck and now I would like for us to move inside where he will fuck her. Looking for suggestions on what positions would be best for the story. I was planning on him being a little dominant once inside and really giving her a pounding that she hasn't experienced in years. One position I think I want to use is her in reverse cowgirl leaning back against him as he fucks her. Her breasts bouncing up and down from his vigorous strokes. Her eyes rolling back. Any other suggestions for positions or acts to show his dominance and prowess with sex? Appreciate the help.
Sexual position suggestions for story
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Carnevil9
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To show dominance on the part of the man, I'd go with some rough doggy-style. If you want it a little softer than that, how about missionary with her legs bent back behind her head?
Anything with her on top is going to show the opposite of dominance. Just my humble opinion.
Anything with her on top is going to show the opposite of dominance. Just my humble opinion.
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Yes, that's the first associations. What OP proposed still may work, especially if the object is to show the watching hubby, but even that makes the woman at least little bit complicit, although that "makes" may be the point to make.
Anyways, it's not in the position I would say.
One can have her upside down with knees on his shoulders choking on his cock while he's teasing the clit with the tip of his tongue... and that can show whatever you make to. As can anything.
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For the win.
That said, in context, then doggy. Whatever its advantages, it’s male-controlled, there’s no personal contact (eg eyes), the man can pull her hair and slap her bum as he pleases, etc.
But work on plot, backstory, characters, emotions, etc.
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In my not-so-humble opinion as someone that has played in this sandbox for several decades (as well as a degree and some professional experience), Dominance and submission is in the brain much more than the gonads.
What I mean is that the exact same sexual position can show him as Dominant or submissive.
Take your reclining reverse cowgirl for example...
Now, to the uninitiated, this is going to place her as the Dominant. After all, she is on top of him and she is controlling how much she moves, how hard, and how fast. Right?
Wrong.
Oh, she could have chosen to climb on top, and he could choose to passively let her just ride his erection however she sees fit. Perhaps she slaps his hands when he reaches around to cup her breasts or rub her clitoris and he acquiesces.
Or.. Perhaps he lifted her from her knees between his and turned her the way he wanted her, pulling her back atop him. And as she is riding him, he is controlling the tempo, his hands on her waist alternately lifting her and pulling her back down. Perhaps he even reaches a point where his hands on her hips are holding her still as he lifts his strong hips to ram up into her as she screams in pleasure, helpless, overpowering her even from beneath her. Who is the Dominant one then?
Or let's look at something as simple as "going down on her."
I can understand this position being seen as him being submissive to her. I understand why some people would think that him orally pleasing her would be. Particularly if you wrote it that way.
On the other hand, I don't "go down on" my slave. I feast on her treasure. I devour her because it is something I crave. I slake my thirst on the heavenly nectar I coax from her delicate petals. And even if I do so with her astride my face rather than on her back with her legs over my shoulders and her wrists trapped in my strong grip to keep her from wriggling away, it still does not make me in any way subservient to her when I can damn well, should the mood strike me, lift her from my face, stand up, and carry her to the nearest wall to continue tongue lashing her into submission.
My point is... use virtually any position that you want and let your writing reflect that he is putting her in that position because he desires it, because he is in control of what is happening and for how long (barring her explicit withdrawal of consent, of course) as she is little more than a passenger on the wild roller coaster ride she chose to get in line for once that train leaves the station.
What I mean is that the exact same sexual position can show him as Dominant or submissive.
Take your reclining reverse cowgirl for example...
Now, to the uninitiated, this is going to place her as the Dominant. After all, she is on top of him and she is controlling how much she moves, how hard, and how fast. Right?
Wrong.
Oh, she could have chosen to climb on top, and he could choose to passively let her just ride his erection however she sees fit. Perhaps she slaps his hands when he reaches around to cup her breasts or rub her clitoris and he acquiesces.
Or.. Perhaps he lifted her from her knees between his and turned her the way he wanted her, pulling her back atop him. And as she is riding him, he is controlling the tempo, his hands on her waist alternately lifting her and pulling her back down. Perhaps he even reaches a point where his hands on her hips are holding her still as he lifts his strong hips to ram up into her as she screams in pleasure, helpless, overpowering her even from beneath her. Who is the Dominant one then?
Or let's look at something as simple as "going down on her."
I can understand this position being seen as him being submissive to her. I understand why some people would think that him orally pleasing her would be. Particularly if you wrote it that way.
On the other hand, I don't "go down on" my slave. I feast on her treasure. I devour her because it is something I crave. I slake my thirst on the heavenly nectar I coax from her delicate petals. And even if I do so with her astride my face rather than on her back with her legs over my shoulders and her wrists trapped in my strong grip to keep her from wriggling away, it still does not make me in any way subservient to her when I can damn well, should the mood strike me, lift her from my face, stand up, and carry her to the nearest wall to continue tongue lashing her into submission.
My point is... use virtually any position that you want and let your writing reflect that he is putting her in that position because he desires it, because he is in control of what is happening and for how long (barring her explicit withdrawal of consent, of course) as she is little more than a passenger on the wild roller coaster ride she chose to get in line for once that train leaves the station.
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Acktion,
Very well said. I hope the mods pin this for future writers to absorb.
Very well said. I hope the mods pin this for future writers to absorb.
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and realistic dialogue.
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Good advice here. My only addition is to suggest that you resist the temptation to write it as a porn script. (Which sounded like a possibility, with 'cowgirl' 'bouncing breasts' etc.)
The world of Lit changes immensely when a tale goes from being a porn script to a real story, with someone interesting in there, some surprise, something to interest a reader.
The world of Lit changes immensely when a tale goes from being a porn script to a real story, with someone interesting in there, some surprise, something to interest a reader.
Lots of dominant positions, and don’t let the “experts” who want to decry anything you’re trying to do “because I’ve seen it before a million times”. Who cares? No one here is the second coming of freaking Hemingway. This is a stroke story site.
Dominant positions/acts include: standing doggy with hand full of her hair and arms hooked, piledriver, breasts pushed up to the glass in the shower while getting it from behind, fish hooking, choking and face slapping (for those into that) is VERY dominant, and maybe the most dominant of all to me is making/inspiring the wife to do things that she would never do for her husband (ie anal, another girl to bring into the bedroom, facials, swallowing, etc.).
Finally, to me true dominance is displayed when the husband does not want this stuff to happen at all, thereby dominating him as well as his wife.
Dominant positions/acts include: standing doggy with hand full of her hair and arms hooked, piledriver, breasts pushed up to the glass in the shower while getting it from behind, fish hooking, choking and face slapping (for those into that) is VERY dominant, and maybe the most dominant of all to me is making/inspiring the wife to do things that she would never do for her husband (ie anal, another girl to bring into the bedroom, facials, swallowing, etc.).
Finally, to me true dominance is displayed when the husband does not want this stuff to happen at all, thereby dominating him as well as his wife.
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The wife has just taken the neighbor into her mouth in front of her husband and essentially in front of the neighborhood as she performed this act upon their deck.
Whether she gave him an orgasm or not, the neighbor is probably still mentally (and physically) aroused because of not only receiving oral from the neighbor lady but also doing so in front of her husband while again out in the open.
Another assumption is that with sex imminent a clothing trail ensues upon entering the house leaving both the neighbor and the wife naked or close.
Since the neighbor is hard and ready, the last assumption that feeds into their choice of that first position would be dictated by when the wife becomes bottomless. Accessible to his re-entry
Depending on the momentum of the moment, she would probably be lacking panties by the time they barely got inside. If that was the case, the neighbor would probably satisfy his urge by lifting her onto the nearest surface that would enable her to be prone for him.
From personal experience, a dining room table enhances the missionary position as the man can remain standing with his lover being at the perfect height for fucking.
Whether she gave him an orgasm or not, the neighbor is probably still mentally (and physically) aroused because of not only receiving oral from the neighbor lady but also doing so in front of her husband while again out in the open.
Another assumption is that with sex imminent a clothing trail ensues upon entering the house leaving both the neighbor and the wife naked or close.
Since the neighbor is hard and ready, the last assumption that feeds into their choice of that first position would be dictated by when the wife becomes bottomless. Accessible to his re-entry
Depending on the momentum of the moment, she would probably be lacking panties by the time they barely got inside. If that was the case, the neighbor would probably satisfy his urge by lifting her onto the nearest surface that would enable her to be prone for him.
From personal experience, a dining room table enhances the missionary position as the man can remain standing with his lover being at the perfect height for fucking.
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I would think to show his dominance he would like to fuck her in the kitchen, the living room. Bent over the sofa, on the kitchen table, yes 
. So every time she's in those rooms, she will remember this day.
. So every time she's in those rooms, she will remember this day.
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Yep ... I've been fucking someone in 'normal' cowgirl, and been told to turn around, because that's what he wanted. Also offers the option of him holding her (my) hands behind her (my) back, which actually throws one off balance a bit. They could even be cuffed there, so his hands are free for other things ... sliding a finger in her arse, for instance. Add a collar and leash that he's holding ... maybe there's one that the couple have just bought for their dog lying around somewhere
Everything that 'seems' dominant or submissive can be easily flipped. I've given blow jobs that would occupy almost every point on the continuum.
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ExactlyI would think to show his dominance he would like to fuck her in the kitchen, the living room. Bent over the sofa, on the kitchen table, yes
Which is why I suggested the closest flat surface
Their pristine dining room table
With legs dangling at the knees. panties to her ankles. and, dress hiked up nearly covering her face
Thank you all for the suggestions and help. How about when he finishes? I'm assuming it would be easier to write about him cumming on her then cumming in her. Probably easier to describe in detail. Any suggestions for dialogue when he is cumming, either from him or her or even myself
I like your idea, it is very arousing to me, a reader. Consider multiple positions in addition to original one. He is so dominant he stops using the reverse cowgirl, and bend her over the kitchen table, lying on her stomach, as he stands behind her and really fucks her violently, his balls slapping off her sexy ass cheeks. She wails and her hands grip the edges of the table, so her won't plow her and move the whole thing! Again, he stops, and orders her to your bedroom, to fuck her in the same bed as you have. Doggy style, and he tells her to tell him how much she loves and needs his big fucking cock. You could join in and enter her mouth, and make her an insatiable slut from that point on.
Yea I was planning on having him take her in a few different positions but I wasn't planning on getting involved, just having to sit and watch
This all sounds very interesting not sure there is a bad way to go about this ! Having said that there have been a few mentions of doggy , that would put her in a more submissive position. If you find a softer surface where she can lie forward with a bit more comfort , tie her hands behind her that would definitely portray a submissive position ! Just an idea
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I definitely second everyone’s recommendations for some variation of doggy style.
As someone who has been on the receiving end numerous times, it is definitely one of the most dominating positions for the guy and submissive for me. It’s even better when I back up so my feet and butt are sticking off the bed, and he can pound me from behind standing up for even more leverage and and force.
One suggestion I have is one of my most favorite positions a variation on something called a crab tie (I just learned that’s what it’s called).
Essentially you would attach my wrists directly to my ankles. This is an awesome position because then you can put me in a face down doggystyle position go to town on me, and then flip me over onto my back and the crab tie holds me in a super compromising, let’s spread and up position.
I tried to find some pics of the position but it was surprisingly difficult?
This one isn’t exactly right—I prefer my wrists tied on the outside of my ankles but, you get the idea for how dominant this position is:
https://static-ca-cdn.eporner.com/gallery/Dg/GB/KxrixqmGBDg/413644-face-down-ass-up.jpg
Here it is in the on-your-back position:
https://hothag.com/images/bdsm/ankle-bound-3847.html
It allows a ton of options and access, and SUPER compromising for the one who is tied up.
As someone who has been on the receiving end numerous times, it is definitely one of the most dominating positions for the guy and submissive for me. It’s even better when I back up so my feet and butt are sticking off the bed, and he can pound me from behind standing up for even more leverage and and force.
One suggestion I have is one of my most favorite positions a variation on something called a crab tie (I just learned that’s what it’s called).
Essentially you would attach my wrists directly to my ankles. This is an awesome position because then you can put me in a face down doggystyle position go to town on me, and then flip me over onto my back and the crab tie holds me in a super compromising, let’s spread and up position.
I tried to find some pics of the position but it was surprisingly difficult?
This one isn’t exactly right—I prefer my wrists tied on the outside of my ankles but, you get the idea for how dominant this position is:
https://static-ca-cdn.eporner.com/gallery/Dg/GB/KxrixqmGBDg/413644-face-down-ass-up.jpg
Here it is in the on-your-back position:
https://hothag.com/images/bdsm/ankle-bound-3847.html
It allows a ton of options and access, and SUPER compromising for the one who is tied up.
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Perfectly said!
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Hmmm.... you want dominance?
Well, instead of moving indoors, the man pulls her up, rips her shorts and panties off, bends her over so she is now holding on the deck railing. He pulls her left leg up, so she is now in the splits position standing on one leg, her pussy is facing her husband. The neighbor pushes his cock into her and goes to town right there on the deck so every man in the neighborhood can see what she is willing to do for him.
He spends the next 15 minutes, just pounding into her. During that time other neighbors, men mostly, gather in the other neighbors yard and watch.
The husband now had his cock out and is jerking off. As he gets ready to cum, he goes to his wife and cums on her stomach. When he does that, the neighbor fucking her cums deep inside her shouting his orgasm to the neighborhood.
Now it's up to you to get there and what happens after that.
Well, instead of moving indoors, the man pulls her up, rips her shorts and panties off, bends her over so she is now holding on the deck railing. He pulls her left leg up, so she is now in the splits position standing on one leg, her pussy is facing her husband. The neighbor pushes his cock into her and goes to town right there on the deck so every man in the neighborhood can see what she is willing to do for him.
He spends the next 15 minutes, just pounding into her. During that time other neighbors, men mostly, gather in the other neighbors yard and watch.
The husband now had his cock out and is jerking off. As he gets ready to cum, he goes to his wife and cums on her stomach. When he does that, the neighbor fucking her cums deep inside her shouting his orgasm to the neighborhood.
Now it's up to you to get there and what happens after that.
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Your fantasy
I think your heart will be in your writing if you simply describe what turns you on the most. I understand that you want to please an audience but the quality of your writing will go up if your heart is in your story. Otherwise it becomes just an intellectual process. Not that your intellect should be left out of the process but writing is an art form and thus your heart has to steer the ship.
You have probably noticed that in the political world people try to figure out what will be popular rather than what is right or wrong. Don't go down that path. This is not a matter of right or wrong but the same principle applies.
Let your imagination flow. Picture whatever it is that flips all your switches to the on position. Then tackle the task of transferring your fantasy to a written form that plants the fantasy in the minds of interested readers.
I think your heart will be in your writing if you simply describe what turns you on the most. I understand that you want to please an audience but the quality of your writing will go up if your heart is in your story. Otherwise it becomes just an intellectual process. Not that your intellect should be left out of the process but writing is an art form and thus your heart has to steer the ship.
You have probably noticed that in the political world people try to figure out what will be popular rather than what is right or wrong. Don't go down that path. This is not a matter of right or wrong but the same principle applies.
Let your imagination flow. Picture whatever it is that flips all your switches to the on position. Then tackle the task of transferring your fantasy to a written form that plants the fantasy in the minds of interested readers.
