A modest girl finds another side of herself

[HjUotila]

Hello all. I've been reading Literotica stories for many many years but only recently I found out that there's such a great discussion board on the site too.

I have many story ideas in my head, but I just haven't yet had enough time (or writing skills either, English is not even my home language) to compile them as stories. I'm more than happy to share these ideas and give someone else a try.

One of my favourite ideas is a story about a young, shy and modest girl exploring the wilder, exhibitionist side of her. She's attractive, beautiful and polite and friendly to anyone. She's all aware of how attractive her body is for men, but she wants to save nudity to private situations. And she's an old-fashioned sweet girl who wants to save her virginity to the guy she loves.

This 19 years old beauty has now been on a trip by herself, probably for some things involving her college studies. She's heading for home, but she misses the last train. Alone at the railway station, far away from her home, she's thinking about what to do now, as she doesn't have any money left to take a hotel room.

Then she recalls a family friend, a single middle-aged man who lives in the town. She calls the man and tells him about the situation, the guy tells her that she certainly can stay at his place over the night. The girl hesitates about spending the night by the single, middle-aged man's place all by herself, but she hasn't got any other choice either and the guy after all has been a trusted family friend since she was a baby.

The guy picks her up from the station and they'll go to his apartment. The man acts like a gentleman, he puts up some snacks for the girl and they'll have some casual small-talk. Then he gives the girl some bedsheets to put on the living room couch and the girl opens her suitcase, noticing for her big embarrassment that all of her panties are on the top of it. The guy notices them too, as well as he notices the girl blushing. Playfully, he starts to beg the girl to give him an underwear show. Firstly, the girl just giggles shyly and politely try to refuse, but as the man just keeps on, she reluctantly agrees, as she doesn't want to be unpolite and ungrateful for the guy that gave her a place to stay over the night.

The man gives the girl privacy to change in the other room, from where the girl comes to the living room wearing another pair of panties after another. They're mostly cute girly panties, but there are also a few sexier pairs (even though the girl is modest, she also enjoys being a woman). The guy keeps on watching, acting gently, but giving admiring looks on the girl's legs, thighs, her bubble butt. The girl keeps her t-shirt on, feeling very shy of being only half-clothed in front of the man. But then she starts to enjoy the attention, after a few pairs, she has rolled her shirt higher to show off her belly.

Then, still feeling very hesitant and insecure while being very very excited at the same time, she agrees to strip herself all naked for the man (after the guy agrees to undress himself first). From there the story escalates for the girl (who hasn't yet touched any man's penis before but certainly has read some erotic literature) to show the guy how good she is to give a hand-job (or maybe even a blow-job) to the man.

Okay, please forgive my rambling text and feel all free to write the story if you find yourself interested to do it. And all this is only my suggestion, feel free to change the details, or to use the parts of the prompt to any other story. Basically, the erotic tension of this story idea for me comes by thinking about the feelings and thoughts of this modest girl appalled feelings, as well as her sexual excitement.

 

[AlinaX]

Welcome to the Forum.

Why don't you run with the idea yourself? Make sure you consider:
- Where has she been that she has a suitcase?
- How is it she has no money for a taxi/hotel?

Maybe she has been raised to be 'a good girl' and as a result she has always been shy around the opposite sex, even though all her friends now seem to be doing it on a regular basis and part of her really wishes she could...

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Welcome to the Forum.

Why don't you run with the idea yourself?

Agreed. Unlike some, you seem to have decent grammar and spelling and, critically, some idea of where you think the story should go. Give it a try.

 

[HeyAll]

It has a good build up and interesting premise, but the main event needs work. Maybe have the wife or neighbors involved.

 

[PattieD]

The "underwear show" should be reluctant but also a slow reveal. Like a strip tease. Not intentional but one of the girl finding her own rhythm. From a stiff reluctance of very shy and awkward to more of a catwalk-like strutting. The underwear itself plays into this reveal as she consciously chooses the panties that are more traditional to high cut to sheer and thong. The latter reveals her choice to stay natural. unshaved
Throughout, he too has a transformation. From cordial. Gentlemanly. To paying close attention to marveling to becoming noticeably aroused
The girl notices his slowly building bulge and slyly plays to her audience.
When they both eventually lose their clothing he erection bursts out of his boxers

 

[HjUotila]

Welcome to the Forum.

Why don't you run with the idea yourself? Make sure you consider:
- Where has she been that she has a suitcase?
- How is it she has no money for a taxi/hotel?

Maybe she has been raised to be 'a good girl' and as a result she has always been shy around the opposite sex, even though all her friends now seem to be doing it on a regular basis and part of her really wishes she could...

I'd love to try, but I afraid I'm not that good at describing the girl's feelings of being watched. I'd love to read this story with detailed descriptions, to say an example, like in Charles Petersunn's excellent stories. I'd rather give it a try for someone who can describe it better than me.

I agree that she has been raised to be an old-fashioned "good girl" and that's made her being so shy around males. She's also been raised to always be polite and friendly to older people, that's why it's so hard for her to refuse from giving the panty show, even she's reluctant in the beginning. Her mixed feelings of being shy and embarrassed, but at the same time enjoying being admired and getting aroused would be a very important part of the story.

As for the suitcase, I thought she's stayed at some hotel/motel/hostell for a few days, but as she was about to go back home and the place is full, she has no other choice than turn to the family friend.

 

[AlinaX]

As for the suitcase, I thought she's stayed at some hotel/motel/hostell for a few days, but as she was about to go back home and the place is full, she has no other choice than turn to the family friend.

Just my luck, after a day of planes and trains, and of waiting for planes and trains, to find myself almost within spitting distance of home but no way to get there. It was dark. I'd missed the last bus. The money in my pockets wouldn't cover a taxi ride, and my cards were maxed out. I was only a student, after all, and the holiday had been more expensive than I'd anticipated. Worse still, my parents were away still, and there was no one I could call for help.

Well, maybe there was one person I could call...

 

[LupusDei]

... and I don't think it could be actually a blind cold call. Not that she planned it, of course not, not deliberately, not consciously, but that person should have been somewhere hidden in the back of her mind for this to work.

Also, I wouldn't start the fashion show with panties. Hadn't she had other nice things bought on the trip, sure she had, that's where her free money went, wasn't it?

The panties might be what caught the guy's eye, but he wasn't so dumb to request underwear show directly, it was other outfits he became curious about. Only when she was comfortable enough to change dresses right in front of him he might ask, wouldn't that other pair be better with the next one...

 

[wallstreetguy]

Quite the middle aged male fantasy.
I might add that she feels vulnerable being alone with this man, but decides that this might be the time for her to act like a bad girl, for once in her life. She knows he will not tell her family. He has a nice place. She might want to stay a while. He might take care of her. She suddenly notices that she does not mind his eyes on her.

 

[Specula]

Hello all. I've been reading Literotica stories for many many years but only recently I found out that there's such a great discussion board on the site too.

I have many story ideas in my head, but I just haven't yet had enough time (or writing skills either, English is not even my home language) to compile them as stories. I'm more than happy to share these ideas and give someone else a try.

One of my favourite ideas is a story about a young, shy and modest girl exploring the wilder, exhibitionist side of her. She's attractive, beautiful and polite and friendly to anyone. She's all aware of how attractive her body is for men, but she wants to save nudity to private situations. And she's an old-fashioned sweet girl who wants to save her virginity to the guy she loves.

This 19 years old beauty has now been on a trip by herself, probably for some things involving her college studies. She's heading for home, but she misses the last train. Alone at the railway station, far away from her home, she's thinking about what to do now, as she doesn't have any money left to take a hotel room.

Then she recalls a family friend, a single middle-aged man who lives in the town. She calls the man and tells him about the situation, the guy tells her that she certainly can stay at his place over the night. The girl hesitates about spending the night by the single, middle-aged man's place all by herself, but she hasn't got any other choice either and the guy after all has been a trusted family friend since she was a baby.

The guy picks her up from the station and they'll go to his apartment. The man acts like a gentleman, he puts up some snacks for the girl and they'll have some casual small-talk. Then he gives the girl some bedsheets to put on the living room couch and the girl opens her suitcase, noticing for her big embarrassment that all of her panties are on the top of it. The guy notices them too, as well as he notices the girl blushing. Playfully, he starts to beg the girl to give him an underwear show. Firstly, the girl just giggles shyly and politely try to refuse, but as the man just keeps on, she reluctantly agrees, as she doesn't want to be unpolite and ungrateful for the guy that gave her a place to stay over the night.

The man gives the girl privacy to change in the other room, from where the girl comes to the living room wearing another pair of panties after another. They're mostly cute girly panties, but there are also a few sexier pairs (even though the girl is modest, she also enjoys being a woman). The guy keeps on watching, acting gently, but giving admiring looks on the girl's legs, thighs, her bubble butt. The girl keeps her t-shirt on, feeling very shy of being only half-clothed in front of the man. But then she starts to enjoy the attention, after a few pairs, she has rolled her shirt higher to show off her belly.

Then, still feeling very hesitant and insecure while being very very excited at the same time, she agrees to strip herself all naked for the man (after the guy agrees to undress himself first). From there the story escalates for the girl (who hasn't yet touched any man's penis before but certainly has read some erotic literature) to show the guy how good she is to give a hand-job (or maybe even a blow-job) to the man.

Okay, please forgive my rambling text and feel all free to write the story if you find yourself interested to do it. And all this is only my suggestion, feel free to change the details, or to use the parts of the prompt to any other story. Basically, the erotic tension of this story idea for me comes by thinking about the feelings and thoughts of this modest girl appalled feelings, as well as her sexual excitement.

I happen to be that naughty but respectful man.... (( -'

 

[Abbafan]

Agreed. Unlike some, you seem to have decent grammar and spelling and, critically, some idea of where you think the story should go. Give it a try.

i agree as well. the synopsis was competently written. i've seen a lot worse anyway. i say give it a go.

 

[Hypoxia]

...a young, shy and modest girl exploring the wilder, exhibitionist side of her...

Young, shy, modest girls are hormone-driven, too. Will your character find a nice boy, girl, or dog to satisfy her?

Let's have a nun-indoctrinated girl who underlines all the 'hot' passages in her Douay-Confraternity bible while erotic flashes run through her nubile 18-year-old body. (She was held back a year in convent school.) What happens when she unleashes herself on the world? Can nymphomaniacs be saints?