Moochie’s Mementos (and a pic or two)

It’s the vibration
Left inside me
Curling around my middle
Feeling simultaneous
An awake dream
My body kept in a bubble
Above everything
And amongst it too
In the thick of it
As hands make
Fists filled with sheets
Body bending
Driving the feel of more
And deeper
And closer
And right there
On the edge
As your body behind mine
Is everything
And those quiet moments between
And after
And before
And always
Are asking for your shoulder
Beneath my head
For the catching of breath
For the kissed smiles
For the sound of your voice
For this vibration left inside me
Which makes flying seem possible.
 
It’s the vibration
Left inside me
Curling around my middle
Feeling simultaneous
An awake dream
My body kept in a bubble
Above everything
And amongst it too
In the thick of it
As hands make
Fists filled with sheets
Body bending
Driving the feel of more
And deeper
And closer
And right there
On the edge
As your body behind mine
Is everything
And those quiet moments between
And after
And before
And always
Are asking for your shoulder
Beneath my head
For the catching of breath
For the kissed smiles
For the sound of your voice
For this vibration left inside me
Which makes flying seem possible.

I love the visual picture that these words conjure up in my mind.
 
It’s the vibration
Left inside me
Curling around my middle
Feeling simultaneous
An awake dream
My body kept in a bubble
Above everything
And amongst it too
In the thick of it
As hands make
Fists filled with sheets
Body bending
Driving the feel of more
And deeper
And closer
And right there
On the edge
As your body behind mine
Is everything
And those quiet moments between
And after
And before
And always
Are asking for your shoulder
Beneath my head
For the catching of breath
For the kissed smiles
For the sound of your voice
For this vibration left inside me
Which makes flying seem possible.

Fabulous sensuality!
Initially I wasn't sure what this was, or where you were heading.
Then two lines clarified the encounter:
"Fists filled with sheets" and
"As your body behind mine is everything"
Now the image is clear.
Beautiful!
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It’s the vibration
Left inside me
Curling around my middle
Feeling simultaneous
An awake dream
My body kept in a bubble
Above everything
And amongst it too
In the thick of it
As hands make
Fists filled with sheets
Body bending
Driving the feel of more
And deeper
And closer
And right there
On the edge
As your body behind mine
Is everything
And those quiet moments between
And after
And before
And always
Are asking for your shoulder
Beneath my head
For the catching of breath
For the kissed smiles
For the sound of your voice
For this vibration left inside me
Which makes flying seem possible.


Eloquent..lovely :rose::rose::rose:
 
I love the visual picture that these words conjure up in my mind.

Glad you enjoyed. 💜

Fabulous sensuality!
Initially I wasn't sure what this was, or where you were heading.
Then two lines clarified the encounter:
"Fists filled with sheets" and
"As your body behind mine is everything"
Now the image is clear.
Beautiful!
attachment.php

I was trying to play with time a little and I like that this piece could take a reader several places or separate encounters, all of which happening simultaneously at different moments. Thank you for your comment, means I’m steering the ship in an enjoyable direction. 🌷

Eloquent..lovely :rose::rose::rose:

Thank you for the kind words, sweet Scotty (may I call you that? Or too informal?). 🌷
 
I was trying to play with time a little and I like that this piece could take a reader several places or separate encounters, all of which happening simultaneously at different moments. Thank you for your comment, means I’m steering the ship in an enjoyable direction. 🌷

What?!?!? I was close to being right? Really?

I was just commenting on the image in my head and what I was feeling.

I guess you know how to steer me. :D

perverted minds thinking alike
 
spicy noodles naked. deliciously dangerous or dangerously delicious? either way, it looks inviting.
 
Click HERE for some spicy nood pics!

I was a bit afraid to click.... set my PC's firewall to maximum (one never knows clicking a strange link on a dubious website) I did not know what to expect, and was pleasantly surprised, sexy goodnes and pun-based humor!
As we all know, the Romans revered the Pun as the highest form of humors, so so should we! (Also because I am a Dad and we all know that as soon as you become a father your humor is reduc... I mean elevated to that highest form of amusement known as the dad-joke)

this tangent filled reply was brought to you by Thom
 
Glad you enjoyed. 💜



I was trying to play with time a little and I like that this piece could take a reader several places or separate encounters, all of which happening simultaneously at different moments. Thank you for your comment, means I’m steering the ship in an enjoyable direction. 🌷



Thank you for the kind words, sweet Scotty (may I call you that? Or too informal?). 🌷


No, that's fine. Your mind is also fine and you impress me with your prose. BTW, that gorgeous body is fine too! :devil::rose::rose:
 
Taking unwanted or asked for advice

Don’t try so hard.


We’re all someone’s monster
Something that is feared
Someone to be avoided
Left unanswered
Ignored
Or erased.

We’re all someone’s love
Something to long for
Someone to be cherished
Kept close
Adored
And held tight.

We’re all responsible for ourselves
Something that needs reminding
Someone else will not police you
So be kind
Helpful
And worthy

We all know when it is the ring of truth
And when the sound is of a pot stirring.

Ignore the monsters.
Keep close the ones you love.
 
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I like the idea
Of a slumber party
Where you hold me
All night long
After you look me in the eye,
Unzipping my onesie
Slowly

A slow unzipping is
almost reasonable;
but, once revealed, I
think just holding you
through the night might
be a little less so;
unless we were to count
holding you on my lap,
against my chest,
or steady while you rode
my face, rubbing yourself
upon my beard,
or if the grip of hands on hips
while perched behind you,
if that sort of holding
counted,
then, by all means,
holding you all night long
would serve as an additional
muse for when
your words have done
their work.


And I thought I got inspiration off your poetry. *smile* I knew I'd been overlooking AmPic for too long a while again.

:cool:
 
Don’t try so hard.

We’re all someone’s monster
Something that is feared
Someone to be avoided
Left unanswered
Ignored
Or erased.

We’re all someone’s love
Something to long for
Someone to be cherished
Kept close
Adored
And held tight.

We’re all responsible for ourselves
Something that needs reminding
Someone else will not police you
So be kind
Helpful
And worthy

We all know when it is the ring of truth
And when the sound is of a pot stirring.

Ignore the monsters.
Keep close the ones you love.

https://forum.literotica.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=2119162&stc=1&d=1622232505

I wondered why my trousers were loose, looks like you’ve taken my belt.
 
A slow unzipping is
almost reasonable;
but, once revealed, I
think just holding you
through the night might
be a little less so;
unless we were to count
holding you on my lap,
against my chest,
or steady while you rode
my face, rubbing yourself
upon my beard,
or if the grip of hands on hips
while perched behind you,
if that sort of holding
counted,
then, by all means,
holding you all night long
would serve as an additional
muse for when
your words have done
their work.


And I thought I got inspiration off your poetry. *smile* I knew I'd been overlooking AmPic for too long a while again.

:cool:

💜

All night
In the arms of my lover
Hands on hips
Pulling bodies closer
Fingers wrapping around, inside
Leading the way
Making each moment magic
Shadows dancing
Kissed with early morning
The warmth of covers
A nest of our own
Starting with a
Slow unzipping
Leading the way
Fingers wrapping around, inside
Pulling our bodies closer
Hands on hips
In the arms of my lover
All night.

I am thrilled to see you here, Remec... and you write me an inspired poem? Thank you so much. I am truly honoured. 💜
 
It’s my Friday night
On Wednesday morning
Which is something not many people say

Hot day felt in the clink of ice fractures in a glass
And I wish it was something else,
But at least this taste takes me back

To being breathless after bending
My body yours, used
The way it feels like
When everything else
Flies away
With an exhale
Through the wafer thin walls
Inspiration, nothing but you
Feeling, nothing but you
How I split myself upon you
Every equal part
One together
Tighter -
The beginning
Of our next soon

I need that last hour
To feel my knees unbuckle
To gather my head from the clouds
To work through a game plan for walking
To slow my spinning mind
Before I get behind the wheel
And drive away from you

I sip some more of this and wish
That it was something else
While I find myself thinking of a holiday,
And more of you.
 
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It’s my Friday night
On Wednesday morning
Which is something not many people say

Hot day felt in the clink of ice fractures in a glass
And I wish it was something else,
But at least this taste takes me back

To being breathless after bending
My body yours, used
The way it feels like
When everything else
Flies away
With an exhale
Through the wafer thin walls
Inspiration, nothing but you
Feeling, nothing but you
How I split myself upon you
Every equal part
One together
Tighter -
The beginning
Of our next soon

I need that last hour
To feel my knees unbuckle
To gather my head from the clouds
To work through a game plan for walking
To slow my spinning mind
Before I get behind the wheel
And drive away from you

I sip some more of this and wish
That it was something else
While I find myself thinking of a holiday,
And more of you.

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This is possibly the finest pic I've ever seen on Lit.

And yes, I too have drinks that bring me back to people. Not all of them are holiday-related. Smells are even more profound.
 
This is possibly the finest pic I've ever seen on Lit.

And yes, I too have drinks that bring me back to people. Not all of them are holiday-related. Smells are even more profound.

First off, thank you for the compliment. I like to show I’m not always dirty ;)

As far as the writing, it is very specific and has more explanation involved if you’re not my muse (the intended audience). I post for me, so it’s alright not to always understand what I’m saying... sometimes, I like to tell people to try and feel the message instead of working out the specifics of my words.
 
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