This was a drunken night. How is it?

[hc6packranch]

Oh my god it's been a rough year! all these little backstabbing bitches on the cheer squad want to take me out! I've worked harder than any of them and I deserve this! coach told me to rest and take a break then gear up for next year. the team depended on me to make it work.

I called dad to see if I could go to his beach house for the summer. surely all the swimming and running on the beach would keep me in shape for next year.* daddy left me a message and told me to help myself to the house. he thought he was going to be in Italy for a few more weeks on business. well....do i really want to go if he's not going to be there,??? sure, I really need a break.

 

[_Lynn_]

Posting stories on the forums is against site guidelines. I'm not even sure what your purpose was putting it here. If you want feedback, you can receive it after you submit the story for posting to the site. If you need an editor, then ask for one on the Editor's Forum.

Also be sure you follow the under age 18 rule.

Because it goes against the rules, I'll remove it. Please follow submission guidelines for future posting.

 

[_Lynn_]

Not sure where this should go. None of the forums really fit. Sorry, AH, ignore as you please.

 

[AlphaLyon]

WTF kind of bullshit did I just read?

 

[_Lynn_]

WTF kind of bullshit did I just read?

The rest wasn't any better.