beginner seeking help and support

[secretslut_daisy]

its my first time as a writer so apologies at the beginning for any mistakes.


33 f here married from india, and i am secretly here

what i want to write

i want to write about my life, journey and events.
giving the description of my childhood, how i grew up, teens - there is no under 18 activity . just giving the background.

how i started my 1st relationship and and then 2nd and more... until i got married.

about how i turned from an innocent cultured girl from the high society into being such a sluty -

i also want to share about my darkest wildest secrets and also how i got into different things - be it blowjob or rim jobs or gangbangs and pleasing men in different way.

about my relationship with different kind of men, how they used, exploited me and how i pleased them...


but because i have never done it, i dont know how to go about it.
i just want to share about my real life experiences and my views and feelings.

i want someone who can understand that and can give adequate time to
1) help me write - by asking questions so that i can give more information
2) compile and make the information into a story format
3) guide me how to publish it

we can do this on google docs - where i can share.
i have some basic ideas and sequencing done and also written few things.

looking for a person who is genuinely interested to help me share about my life experiences.

 

[SimonDoom]

Here's my suggestion for getting the most you can out of the Literotica author's community to help you:

First, take a small chunk of this story, and write a short story based on that chunk. Make it short so you can get it done, but long enough to have a beginning, middle, and end. Maybe 8,000 to 10,000 words. Do the best you can. Use some of the "how to" writing guides that have been published here to help you. Try hard to get the grammar and punctuation and spelling as good as you can. When it's done, submit it to the Feedback Forum and ask for advice.

Second, in the meantime, read stories here. Find authors you like. Perhaps reach out directly to authors you think can help you.

You find MUCH more help doing it this way than trying to enlist someone to help you with a huge writing project.

 

[LAHomedog]

I believe this person might be a troll or an online sex worker. "She" has been posting all over the Board in other areas and ending the posting with "knowing all about her and having a secret online relationship"

And then those posts are deleted later.

I could be wrong, but I suggest everyone be aware.

 

[secretslut_daisy]

thanks, but i was seeking support actually

 

[secretslut_daisy]

you be kind to understand me

I believe this person might be a troll or an online sex worker. "She" has been posting all over the Board in other areas and ending the posting with "knowing all about her and having a secret online relationship"

And then those posts are deleted later.

I could be wrong, but I suggest everyone be aware.

i had writeen 3 posts about the same what i wrote but were not giving the clear idea and hence i deleted them

i am not a sex worker- i come from a nice family nad background but then i was involved with differnt men who showed me differnt ways and made me feel slutty submissive and hiding from the world i was like a slut to them..

now i am married and just to share about my life ...

i am geneuinely interested and hence posted the thing again.
hope you will understand.

in india i cant tell about this and hence its like the 2 kinds of person i was living...
hope you understand

 

[TarnishedPenny]

I would suggest you go with Simon’s suggestion, then. Your grammar and vocabulary both seem good; you should be ok.

Good luck.

 

[SimonDoom]

I have one other suggestion, meant to be constructive. In all the writing you submit at this Site, whether in the form of stories or in comments in forums, use the most correct format and style you can. Capitalize the first letter of sentences. Write in complete sentences. Use periods at the end of sentences. Use commas where appropriate. Don't skimp on these things.

I realize that many contributors contribute via phone, and it's simpler to omit punctuation and capitals, but it really does affect the way people will view and evaluate what you write. They will be less willing to work with you if they feel like you are lazy with your writing and not trying your best. I've done a little bit of editing with other Literotica writers, and I have vowed I will not edit anything contributed to me by an author if I do not feel the author has submitted what they honestly believe is their best work. You owe it to an editor to do that before submitting it for editing. You will also learn much more about how to write well if at each stage you are giving it your best shot.

 

[LAHomedog]

i had writeen 3 posts about the same what i wrote but were not giving the clear idea and hence i deleted them

i am not a sex worker- i come from a nice family nad background but then i was involved with differnt men who showed me differnt ways and made me feel slutty submissive and hiding from the world i was like a slut to them..

now i am married and just to share about my life ...

i am geneuinely interested and hence posted the thing again.
hope you will understand.

in india i cant tell about this and hence its like the 2 kinds of person i was living...
hope you understand

Fair enough. But if that is the case, why did you finish your other posts with your last line? (that I put in bold type) The one about "the secret online relationship if both of us feel the same?"

I'm sorry. Maybe I misunderstood, but that doesn't seem like seeking writing help...

Originally Posted by secretslut_daisy View Post

"hello , i am 33 f married.. (please check my profile for more details)
and i am lookin for a editor/co-writer who can help me write about my life... and help me express myself and sexual encounters and all that i have been through...

can you help?
. . .

and by the end of you when you know all about me, we can think about the secret online relationship if both of us feel the same"

 

[Rustyoznail]

There's a few Indian people who publish here. I suggest reading some of their stories (or any popular story in a category you like) to see what they're doing and how to lay out a story.

Once you have a draft, use the free version of Grammarly to help tidy it up. It won't fix everything, but it will make it easier for an editor / beta reader to read.