Vampyre Novel

[MrTarakan]

Hi Everyone,

I am new here, and excited to read and learn.

I've been writing a Vampyre novel on and off for many years. During the Pandemic I dusted it off and have been going through it quite methodically. I am at a stage now when unbiased opinions could help me.

What I am looking for is someone willing to read the first three chapters (approx 8,000 words) and give me an honest opinion. Does it grab you, and why? Or, it doesn't grab you and why?

Mr Tarakan

 

[MetaBob]

OK, as someone who's writing a very different kind of vampire novel right now ("Celtic Vampiress"), I'm curious. I'm deep in research mode but I can act as a beta reader for you. Let me know.

 

[MrTarakan]

OK, as someone who's writing a very different kind of vampire novel right now ("Celtic Vampiress"), I'm curious. I'm deep in research mode but I can act as a beta reader for you. Let me know.

Thanks for replying. It would be helpful to have a second opinion if that's okay. There's no rush on this, so when you can is fine.

I'll post the prologue and first chapter into a private message to you.

Tarakan