I need an editor for a military story

[john_sixfooter]

I've submitted two stories under LW and one under Erotic Coupling. I'm retired military and have worked hard to not use acronyms, the comments on my first story made that abundantly clear.

A second problem is that the stories are true, I've just stopped stating that. I've had family and friends begging me to write my autobiography, these are the sexual stories that I cannot include.

I have an extensive background writing mostly classified studies about foreign intelligence and information warfare and have had two papers published, unclassified, by the RAND corporation so I have potential.

...and yes, I am former Special Forces, but my bio is really convoluted and unique.

I have yet another truth is stranger than fiction story finished.

Want to help me, please?

 

[Isabel_Innuende]

I've submitted two stories under LW and one under Erotic Coupling. I'm retired military and have worked hard to not use acronyms, the comments on my first story made that abundantly clear.

A second problem is that the stories are true, I've just stopped stating that. I've had family and friends begging me to write my autobiography, these are the sexual stories that I cannot include.

I have an extensive background writing mostly classified studies about foreign intelligence and information warfare and have had two papers published, unclassified, by the RAND corporation so I have potential.

...and yes, I am former Special Forces, but my bio is really convoluted and unique.

I have yet another truth is stranger than fiction story finished.

Want to help me, please?

I would be happy to do a proofread and edit of a story, as long as it is under 5000 words. I had a look at some of your other stories and they seem to be short enough that I would have the time to edit one for you.

My preference is that you would submit it to me via email in a Word document and I would return it to you with tracked changes and editorial comments.

PM me for my email if you're interested.