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Hello, I've submitted a couple of chapters of a story that has been rejected because the editor believes it has non-con/reluctance content in it. Now I'm not saying he/she is wrong, I genuinely want to know where are the problematic parts of that story so I can attempt to correct them if possible.
Short summery:
After the prologue events of the battle for Azeroth, Tyrande comes to Anduin with an attractive proposal about the way that the night elves should pay back their hosts. Uncovering the satisfaction in living out his desires, the High King comes up with a plan to take over Azeroth and keep peace in his lifetime.
here's the first chapter:
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Short summery:
After the prologue events of the battle for Azeroth, Tyrande comes to Anduin with an attractive proposal about the way that the night elves should pay back their hosts. Uncovering the satisfaction in living out his desires, the High King comes up with a plan to take over Azeroth and keep peace in his lifetime.
here's the first chapter:
*edited out*
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