Need Help to make my monster dungeon Story "Legal" if possible

[SiroGoddess99]

OK, mostly I just want to bounce my ideas around.
I already have over 54,000 words and believe my story very nearly breaks a lot of posting rules.
My story is designed to be a long term episodic serial like an isekai manga.
It probably infringes on more rules than I'm actually aware of.
It is a long plot, but the porn is the plot.

1. It is a fantasy universe and most of my characters are, thus far, less than a week old but all past sexual maturity.
They were born either as adults or a species that matures in a few days.

2. Some characters are extremely child like, two of them evolving into even more child-looking and acting characters.
They act child-like due to a lack of sentience which in my story requires specific evolution and an intelligence stat above 100.

3. Some sex monsters are created by the main character based off of animals. All of the monsters are intentionally non-sentient creatures.
The primary plot of the story is that magically sex with non-sentient creatures is considered virginal/safe sex.
One monster is very nearly an animal but with attributes purely imaginary and a phallus several times too large for the real-life species.

4. The main character did fantasize about getting raped by a deer in the woods, but it didn't actually happen.
She was very disappointed, the deer were upwind of her masturbation session.

Please tell me your thoughts.

Also, please tell me if you like the idea of a reverse harem monster sex-servicing dungeon.

It services only females so far while the female main character protects her "virginity" and earns dungeon points to increase customer accommodations.

 

[jaF0]

Please tell me your thoughts.

Another 'how do I get around the rules' thread.

 

[Jada59]

That story would not appeal to me at all. Sorry. Can't help you.

 

[ElectricBlue]

1. Change your fantasy universe time line so your characters are obviously and recognizably eighteen years plus. Given that "porn is the plot" one assumes every engagement between characters is in some way sexual, therefore you need to write adults, not teenagers, and definitely not children.

2. Forget it. Don't even think about it. You write children and sexual activity (porn is the plot, remember) and the story will be rejected. Child-like is underage, no matter how you dress up "sentience" and "age".

3. "Very nearly an animal" is borderline. If you have creatures, get them as far away from the line as you possibly can. In this case, I think sentience actually helps. You want the fantasy creature to be an intelligent, sentient, consenting entity. Otherwise, your creature is no different to a dog, and that would breach Laurel's no bestiality rule.

4. Real dear, upwind or downwind, you're sexualising your animal, thus pushing the line.

The fact that you know your story is sailing close to the wind is probably the best clue that maybe, just maybe, Literotica isn't the best platform for this story. It's almost as if you gave yourself the challenge, how many rules can I bust and still get this one over the line?

Stay within Laurel's set boundaries and you'll be fine. To blatantly flag that you're toying with the line is just silly. She does eyeball this forum and comments from time to time, and I somehow suspect her memory is pretty good.

 

[SiroGoddess99]

1. Change your fantasy universe time line so your characters are obviously and recognizably eighteen years plus. Given that "porn is the plot" one assumes every engagement between characters is in some way sexual, therefore you need to write adults, not teenagers, and definitely not children.

2. Forget it. Don't even think about it. You write children and sexual activity (porn is the plot, remember) and the story will be rejected. Child-like is underage, no matter how you dress up "sentience" and "age".

3. "Very nearly an animal" is borderline. If you have creatures, get them as far away from the line as you possibly can. In this case, I think sentience actually helps. You want the fantasy creature to be an intelligent, sentient, consenting entity. Otherwise, your creature is no different to a dog, and that would breach Laurel's no bestiality rule.

4. Real dear, upwind or downwind, you're sexualising your animal, thus pushing the line.

The fact that you know your story is sailing close to the wind is probably the best clue that maybe, just maybe, Literotica isn't the best platform for this story. It's almost as if you gave yourself the challenge, how many rules can I bust and still get this one over the line?

Stay within Laurel's set boundaries and you'll be fine. To blatantly flag that you're toying with the line is just silly. She does eyeball this forum and comments from time to time, and I somehow suspect her memory is pretty good.

Thank you so much for responding helpfully!

The truth is that I wrote the story and basic plot line before I actually realized there were rules for posting on an erotica site.
The thought really never occurred to me that the content would be censored.
I don't know how much is possible to change when the rule brushing components are literally 50,000 words of the story.
My main character was a 40 year old woman who died and was reborn as an adult dungeon master, summoned adult monsters, and adopted adult goblins who evolved to look like children.
But yeah, I see the issues.
Most of the comics I read have goblins reach adult-hood in three days and go raping women the next.

I just wanted a place to share my story that was more likely to have available and interested readership.

Also, I have found several stories on the site that edge the rules in the exact same manner.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Also, I have found several stories on the site that edge the rules in the exact same manner.

Some writers play the game and occasionally get content past Laurel (the site owner and sole arbiter of what stays and what goes), but that doesn't excuse or condone the practice. Stories do get reported and do get removed, so the site relies on self-policing to some extent.

It's not censorship either, by the way. Only governments censor. Privately owned websites can set whatever policies they choose (which Literotica has done) with regard to allowable content.

I do find it stretches credibility a bit for an author to say, "Oh, I can't rewrite my fantasy creature story because there are tropes that must be obeyed." That's rubbish, surely, because goblins aren't real, so you can make your world do whatever you want it to do. I would have thought it would be pretty easy to up age your critters so they comply. Unless of course you've written very young critters...

Still, with goblins at least, you're not stretching the rules as much as those writers who write juvenile teenage boys and girls and protest till the cows come home that they're eighteen. Which some do.

The policy, incidentally, is no detailed descriptions of sexual activity with characters under eighteen. So you can have young characters innocently playing in the woods - just keep the nearest sexual content a long way away.

I'm sure you could wave some fairy dust over your content and write eighteen year old goblins. I continue to be astonished at the number of people who lose their virginity on their eighteenth birthday. There must be something in the icing on the birthday cake .

 

[SiroGoddess99]

Some writers play the game and occasionally get content past Laurel (the site owner and sole arbiter of what stays and what goes), but that doesn't excuse or condone the practice. Stories do get reported and do get removed, so the site relies on self-policing to some extent.

It's not censorship either, by the way. Only governments censor. Privately owned websites can set whatever policies they choose (which Literotica has done) with regard to allowable content.

I do find it stretches credibility a bit for an author to say, "Oh, I can't rewrite my fantasy creature story because there are tropes that must be obeyed." That's rubbish, surely, because goblins aren't real, so you can make your world do whatever you want it to do. I would have thought it would be pretty easy to up age your critters so they comply. Unless of course you've written very young critters...

Still, with goblins at least, you're not stretching the rules as much as those writers who write juvenile teenage boys and girls and protest till the cows come home that they're eighteen. Which some do.

The policy, incidentally, is no detailed descriptions of sexual activity with characters under eighteen. So you can have young characters innocently playing in the woods - just keep the nearest sexual content a long way away.

I'm sure you could wave some fairy dust over your content and write eighteen year old goblins. I continue to be astonished at the number of people who lose their virginity on their eighteenth birthday. There must be something in the icing on the birthday cake .

Thank you so much for responding!

I honestly think making my characters have 18 years of life experience in this world interferes too much with my plot lines where the characters learn and discover how to exist in the new world together.

I've pretty much given up on posting here at this point. I just don't want to lose so much of my story and characters which I've grown very attached to.

It might seem silly, but I am not a writer nor do I have the desire to learn the strict disciplines that writing entails.

I care about grammar and such, as an avid fiction reader, but beyond that I'm no interested in catering to content restriction.

I write the story, that I want to read, but I couldn't find.

I just wish that I knew of somewhere else to post that had good editing guidelines while also catering to a readership that might be interested.

I'm not proficient enough to write it in Japanese. lol