The Flesh Note

[Nephlim14]

I just thought of this idea for a potential multi chapter exhibition story inspired by "Death Note". It could revolve around different people stumbling upon a supernatural book that could mess with reality. The difference being that instead of the person dying if their name is written, they end up in a situation of naked Humiliation. If anyone is interested, please reply and I can give more details.

Also I know Flesh Note may be a bit creepy so if anyone has abetter name, feel free to chime in

 

[Yerkiddin]

I wouldn't worry about the title. "Death Note" was a creepy movie, with a creepy death god as a main character. "Flesh Note" would have a mischievous sex god as a main character, I would think. It could work by just adding a mental block such that people named in the note can no longer recognize when they are unclothed. They still dry off when leaving the shower, but just can't seem to notice they're not fully dressed already as they put the towel back...

 

[Carnevil9]

Instead of naked humiliation, how about they end up naked and in bed with the person in possession of the book? Or with someone else, designated by the person with the book?

 

[Nephlim14]

I wouldn't worry about the title. "Death Note" was a creepy movie, with a creepy death god as a main character. "Flesh Note" would have a mischievous sex god as a main character, I would think. It could work by just adding a mental block such that people named in the note can no longer recognize when they are unclothed. They still dry off when leaving the shower, but just can't seem to notice they're not fully dressed already as they put the towel back...

The blissful ignorance may take away from the humiliation factor. I figured that the rules for the book would be that
-if the wielder wrote certain situations in the book, it would manipulate probability/luck to render whoever is written in the book naked and possibly aroused uncontrollably.
-If they write just the name in the book, the person just has their clothes ripped of by invisible forces. -Oh and in either case, they are unable to cover themselves until they can get to their home.

I think it could be a comedic story that anyone could work with, detailing every moment the victim spends during the experience. If you want an example please say so and I can give one.