Looking for beta reader

[Halin24]

I'm working on a chapter story, my first, and would like a second opinion. At the moment I have two chapters finished (10.000 words each) and the third pretty much outlined (4.000 words). It's
Romance but includes light bondage in one or two scenes so far.

I have cut out a lot from the original plot because it got messy, and now i feel more comfortable with it, but perhaps i took it too far? The ending I see right now would make the third chapter the last, but would that make it seem hurried?

I'm not looking for an editor even though I know I need one. What I want is a fresh set of eyes and an objective mind. Honesty is much appreciated and I respect any opinion without outbursts.

I write in Open Office (.odt) and in a mix of UK and US English (or worse).

Is it too much? Perhaps you could have a look at the first chapter only? I take what help I can get!

PM me if you are interested.


Halin24

 

[HeyAll]

What in particular do you need? To know if it's any good?

 

[Halin24]

Not really. I'm well aware that people like - and dislike - different things, so such an evaluation would be without meaning. What I want is an honest opinion in general, anything that comes to mind. Too long, too short, too much bullshit, not enough sex, it stinks: anything.

In the end I will have to evaluate any respons to see if I think it's valid or not but I don't want to point too much 'look at this' so I miss something else.

Halin24

 

[HeyAll]

Not sure what time frame you need but i can look at it in august. I'm taking the bar exam next week.

 

[richman3]

Not sure what time frame you need but i can look at it in august. I'm taking the bar exam next week.

Good Luck. HeyAll. : )

 

[HeyAll]

Thank you: )