Wanted: a pair of (preferably female) eyes on nude day contest story.

[tomlitilia]

Would be most grateful if someone is willing to edit a story intended for the nude day contest. It is mainly about female exhibitionism, but ends with group sex in front of a small audience. I'm looking for someone to
1) spot those annoying grammar/spelling mistakes
2) find inconsistencies or erouneous use of terms
3) potentially point out sections that can be improved.

Because the story centers on a female perspectives, it would be ideal with a female pair of eyes. It has served me well before.
The story is around 19000 words. If you want to see what you might get yourself in to, please see my stories below.

 

[hentaikitten]

Editing

How big of a hurry are you in? I'd be willing to edit for you, but I'm kind of booked up right now. Would you be able to wait until next week? I could guarantee to have your story edited within 2 days, so around July 2nd or so.

 

[tomlitilia]

How big of a hurry are you in? I'd be willing to edit for you, but I'm kind of booked up right now. Would you be able to wait until next week? I could guarantee to have your story edited within 2 days, so around July 2nd or so.

That should work fine! You have PM