"Stop! Just stop! Please! No more!"

I lost my power at 5 am, just before my coffee was scheduled to brew.

"Bummer."

Good thing that I always keep a flashlight by my bed and in every room actually, along with fly swatters (lol). Otherwise, living out in the country as I do, everything is pitch black, so black that you can't see your hand in front of your face.

It made me realized how dependent we are on electricity. No computer, phones, or TV, God forbid this was a real emergency.

Then, I thought, how did they write back then without electric lights and/or a computer. We're all so spoiled. We all should have a problem.

"Ah, the first cup of coffee, Starbucks French Roast, black with no sugar, is always the best."
 
Did you ever wonder what you'd do if you were rich? Not millionaire, rich but billionaire rich.

I've thought about it, dreamed about it, and fantasized about it. I know exactly what I'd do.

Unlike most folks, I wouldn't travel. I'd stay home. In the way that Bill Gates did, I'd make my home a place that I'd never want to leave.

Besides, why put myself at risk by flying whether in a commercial airliner or a private plane? Now that I finally had all that money, I wouldn't want to jeopardize my safety. Instead, I'd do everything I could to continue to live a long, healthy, and happy life.

I'd live in a high rise somewhere or in a house overlooking the ocean, someplace with a spectacular view but not New York or California. I hate New York and California. I'd never leave my home but, instead, I'd have everything brought to me, whether it was doctors, lawyers, companionship, or food. Howard Hughes had the right idea about being a recluse. Who needs people when you have money?

I'd buy the best of everything, the best TV, computer, and furniture. Instead of giving my money to charity, much like the TV show of old, The Millionaire, I'd select people that I read in the paper or saw on the news. I'd select people who not only could really use the money but also that my money would make a big change in their lives.

I'd pick an entire grade school class and buy annuities that would mature on their 18th birthdays that would guarantee that they had money enough for college. I'd find, poor, sick kids and make them better. I'd build a better animal shelter where dogs weren't locked in cages but had room to run and play without the fear of being euthanized because the shelter couldn't afford their food.

Then, much like William Forrester, one of my writing characters at Literotica and the character in the movie, Finding Forrester, I'd write all day, every day, but wouldn't share my writing with anyone. When I finished one story or novel, I'd file it in a draw and start another.

When I died, I'd will everything I had to a university. Not an Ivy league university but to a black college as a self-sustaining endowment to insure that those black kids who'd never have a chance of earning a college degree, could afford a college education.

Lastly, I'd buy bullets, as many bullets as I could afford and destroy them. I'd make the bullet market so expensive that every bullet would cost a thousand dollars. People would think twice about firing a bullet when each bullet cost a thousand dollars.

"Did you shoot him?"

"Nah, I didn't want to waste the bullet. I stabbed him to death."

 
Describing the emotional dynamics between say, a brother and sister about to have sex, well that really gets me hot. So yeah details can make the story much better
 
Describing the emotional dynamics between say, a brother and sister about to have sex, well that really gets me hot. So yeah details can make the story much better

It brings the story to life when, as a writer,
I can make you see what I see and feel what I feel.

Thanks for your post.
 
I woke up with an idea for a story. Not unusual for me to do that but the story was about a superhero. I've never written a superhero story.

Further, with me not very religious, the story is about a crusader for God, in the way of an avenging angel.

I haven't started writing it yet. I'm just going to allow it to percolate in my brain for a while.

Still a story of an angel coming down from Heaven and walking around on Earth as if he owns the place could be really something.
 
Look out! l'm on a roll.

Look out! I'm on a roll.

Not only have I started my Nude Day stories but I'm already posted the first three chapters of Mom, Sis, Aunt & Cuz Naked. Chapter 4 should post Monday or Tuesday.

I also have another story for the nude Day contest, Mom Gets Drunk with Son on Nude Day. If you like incest, this is a really good one.

Lastly, hold on to your hats, SusanJillParker fans, I writing a 120,000 word Christmas story, All I Want for Xmas Is You, Mom. The story will be about 8 to 12 chapters, maybe more.

Unfortunately, too long for the Christmas contest, I'll have to write another story to submit for that contest too.

 
Look out! I'm on a roll.

Not only have I started my Nude Day stories but I'm already posted the first three chapters of Mom, Sis, Aunt & Cuz Naked. Chapter 4 should post Monday or Tuesday.

I also have another story for the nude Day contest, Mom Gets Drunk with Son on Nude Day. If you like incest, this is a really good one.

Lastly, hold on to your hats, SusanJillParker fans, I writing a 120,000 word Christmas story, All I Want for Xmas Is You, Mom. The story will be about 8 to 12 chapters, maybe more.

Unfortunately, too long for the Christmas contest, I'll have to write another story to submit for that contest too.


You're working on a Christmas story now? It makes me tired just to think about doing something like that! I'm having trouble enough keeping the ball rolling for stories for the spring.
 
You're working on a Christmas story now? It makes me tired just to think about doing something like that! I'm having trouble enough keeping the ball rolling for stories for the spring.

When I was participating in Literotica's yearlong survivor contest, I was accustomed to working on a dozen stories in a dozen different categories at a time. As soon as the inspiration stopped for one, I'd move on to the next.

Now that I'm writing stories fans, I always have a least a dozen stories on the burner. The Xmas story just came to me one day when I thought what would a horny, testosterone filled, young man want for Christmas.

Ergo, "All I Want for Xmas is You, Mom."

The last 120,000 story I wrote was Young Woman with Older Man a fan favorite.

Thanks for your post.


 
Bored with what's on TV. I watched Manchester by the Sea. It was good. It was sad.

Before that, I watched Games of Thrones again in preparation for the new year. Watching it again made more sense as I missed stuff and didn't understand things the first time.

I finished watching the first season of Marvel's Iron Fist. It's stupid but Jessica Henwick as Colleen Wing, the Japanese sensei is good. Rosario Dawson as Claire Temple plays her part well. She as Luke's girlfriend in Marvel's Luke Cage. She has a phenomenal body. I'm still waiting for Marvel's Jessica Jones to return. I didn't care for Marvel's Flash, Daredevil, or the Arrow but Stranger Things wasn't bad.

I did that with Deadwood but I may watch that again just to count how many times the use the word, "Cocksucker (lol)." Besides, I wanted to revisit Trixie, Paula Malcomson again. She plays Ray Donovan's wife in Ray Donovan.

Now, I'm watching Justified again because I'm a big fan of Timothy Olyphant. He was great in Hit Man. Joelle Carter as Ava Crowder is gorgeous.

I still like Blacklist and how James Spader as Raymond Reddington gives us all a world traveler education without having to leaving the living room. He was good in White Palace with Susan Sarandon. Did you know she's lesbian? I never knew that. She's great playing Bette Davis in Feud with Jessica Lange playing Joan Crawford.

Ever since I got Direct TV in conjunction with Amazon TV and NetFlix, I'm thinking that I watch too much TV (lol).
 
I watched another episode of American Gods.

Cloris Leachman was in it this time. She looks good...for a 91-year-old. I wonder what her secret is to longevity.

It's a strange show but entertaining. Besides I'd watch anything with Ian McShane in it. He's such a great actor.
 
Who has most transformed themselves?

TRANSFORMATION is a big, 14 letter, three syllable word. Transformation is a thorough or dramatic change in form or appearance. It's a metamorphosis during the life cycle of an animal.

I wondered who, out of all the people that I know personally or have seen on TV, has transformed themselves the most?

Think about it? Do you have someone in mind who has become who or she is by going through one metamorphosis after another? I do. I have someone in mind.

Arnold Schwarzenegger. Why him? Why not? Think about it.

He came here from Austria and couldn't even speak English. Some say that he still can't speak English.

He was a dumb weightlifter, a bodybuilder, and a gym rat. Those guys are stupid, right? Wrong. Not so much, especially with Arnold anyway.

He started winning bodybuilding contests. He won five Mr. Universe and seven Mr. Olympia titles before retiring. Do you have any idea how competitive those contests are and how impossibly difficult they are to win? From there he made movies and we all know how that career exploded.

If that wasn't enough, he attached himself to the Kennedy clan, married Maria Shriver, and became Governor of California. Governor Arnold. Wow!

Seemingly, anyone can hold the highest political offices in these United States, if you know what I mean and if you get my drift (wink, wink). Actually, he was a good governor and accomplished a lot with renewable energy and passing laws against pollution.

He became a business man, a restaurant owner when he opened Planet Hollywood with Bruce Willis and Sylvester Stallone.

I can't think of anyone who has transformed themselves as much as Arnold Schwarzenegger. For sure, had he been born in this country, we'd be calling him, Mr. President.

 
I've been watching Justified again from the first season. It was a good program then when it first came out in 2010 and I appreciate it even more now.

Only, it bugs me that Raylen drives around in a black Lincoln Town Car as if he's a chauffeur instead of a deputy marshal. I'd think he'd want a faster and better handling ride especially with him driving through some of that hilly terrain.
 
Incest, especially mother and son incest is something that I don't understand.

Incest, especially mother and son incest is something that I don't understand and will never understand.

Mother and son incest stories are the biggest draw on this site. Yet, with all the mother and son incest stories that I've written and continue to write, I don't understand why a son would want to have sex with his mother. Why? I don't get it. If that's not confusing enough, even worse, I don't understand why a mother would want to have sex with her son. Why? I don't get it.

What drives a mother and son to have incestuous sex? Always looking to see up-skirt peeks of her panties, up-nightgown views of her naked pussy and/or down-blouse views of her cleavage and bra, and down-nightgown views of her naked tits, what drives a son to peep on his mother and to leer at her while undressing her with his eyes? Why do sons masturbate themselves while imagining their mothers naked and having sex with them? Is it because the sex is so expressly taboo, illegal, and forbidden? Is that all it is or is there even more to that?

The same could be said of a young man's sister, aunt, cousin, and/or grandmother. Why is that so sexually exciting to see any of them without their clothes and/or to imagine having sex with any of them? With all the women in the world, why do some men want to have incestuous sex with their female, blood related relatives that others find the sex incestuous, dirty, nasty, and unappealing? With all the men in the world, why do some women want to have incestuous sex with their male, blood related relatives that others would find the sex incestuous, dirty, nasty, and unappealing?

With all that goes on behind closed, bedroom doors, I wonder what the real percentage is of a man who is sexually attracted to his blood related, female relatives. What do you think the percentage is? With all that goes on behind closed, bedroom doors, I wonder what the real percentage is of a woman how is sexually attracted to her blood related, male relatives. What do you think the percentage is?

With lots of blame to go around, we can blame mothers and sisters who tease their sons and brothers by walking in their bedrooms without knocking. Perhaps in the way their sons and brothers hope to catch their mothers and sisters naked and/or masturbating when barging in their bedrooms unannounced, their mothers and sisters hope to catch their sons and brothers naked or masturbating too. We can blame mothers and sisters who walk around their sons and brothers in their sexy nightgowns, in just a towel, in their bras and panties, topless, and/or naked.

Perhaps in the way that their sons and brothers are sexually attracted to them, they are secretly, sexually attracted to their sons and brothers too. I don't know. I don't get it. I don't understand. Maybe some women just get off in incestuously, sexually teasing their sons and brothers. I don't know. I have no idea.

Overwhelmingly by far, the stories that fans ask me to write the most are mother and son incestuous sex stories. While some want the son to be the aggressor, others want the mother to be the instigator. One would think that with my four, much older brothers having incestuous sex with my stripper, prostitute, and whore of a mother before I was even born, that I'd understand the mother and son sexual dynamics but I don't.

I remember whenever they had sex, I'd barricade myself in my bedroom and turn my radio on loud. Whenever they had sex, they were drunk. I never told anyone that my mother was incestuous with her sons. My Mom was the instigator.

When she wasn't walking around the house wearing her sexy nightgowns, she was walking around the house in her untied bathrobe while naked underneath. She always walked around the house in her bra and panties and stood in front of the bathroom mirror doing her hair while topless. Yet, even though I've had years of therapy, here I am writing erotica on a porn site. Why? Go figure.
 
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I totally agree with you. Thinking about my parents having sex already made me feel sick, let alone thinking about me taking part in it... Even watching my mother only wearing underwear made me feel very uncomfortable (fortunately for me, that rarely happened). Thinking about having sex with people depending on me, except for my wife, is a turn off...

Having second hand experience with incest (not sure if that's the right expression, but not going to clarify) I can tell it can have very long lasting effects - probably never heals, and while that person was forced, I have the impression that the initiators don't see it that way, and downplay the importance. Maybe their way of dealing with their guilt. That's why I am always skeptical when it is indicated that it was consensual...

I'm a survivor of incest. Without going into all the details, I was forced to have sex with 7 men, 4 were my brothers, one was my uncle, another was my older cousin, and the last was my piano teacher.

Long lasting effects is an understatement. Lifelong effects would better describe what happened to me.

Thanks for your post.
 
I'm still looking to buy a car. Being that I've been living with an elderly Mennonite woman since 2012 when she rescued me from being homeless after the great 100-year flood of the Susquehanna River on 9/11/11, I've had no need for a car. I've been chauffeuring her around in her car 2010, Honda Civic that's devoid of all chrome and nomenclature, just the way she ordered it. A plain Jane car with a manual transmission, it's just the next step up from the horse and buggy that the Amish use.

For the past 20 years, I've always had a Mustang GT. I like the feel and the power of them. Yet, now I want something more practical. I don't like front wheel drive cars with their engines mounted transversely. I'd rather have a real wheel drive car with the engine mounted longitudinally. I don't like unibody construction cars where the body makes for the frame. I'd rather have a body on frame car. Only, car manufacturers no longer make rear wheel drive, body on frame cars.

Unless I want to buy a truck, which I don't, the last body car was made by Ford in 2011. Now, my only choices for buying a rear wheel drive, body on frame car are to buy a used Ford Crown Victoria, Mercury Grand Marquis, or the Lincoln Town Car. With the prices of all three only within a few thousand dollars of one another, I'd be a fool not to buy the Lincoln Town Car.

Only, most of those cars were used as rentals, taxis, and limousines. Moreover, six years later, it's hard to find a one owner, low mileage Lincoln Town Car that is accident free. Rather than pay $2,000 more at a dealership, I've been looking for a private sale. Unfortunately and seemingly, all the good Lincoln Town Cars are in Texas, California, Arizona, or Florida, where all the old people are, I guess. With Pennsylvania having the 2nd oldest population in the United States, I thought I'd have an easier time of finding my perfect car. Not so.

I'm still looking for a 2009 to 2011 Lincoln Town Car. I'd prefer not to have one that's black, white or silver. Blue is my favorite color, but I'd buy any color car if it was the right car. I've been looking on all the car sites and newspapers. I even posted a personal add but no luck yet.

People hold on to these cars forever because between the Panther body and the Mustang engine, they're indestructible. These cars if correctly maintained, last forever. I've seen Lincoln Town Cars with 400,000, 500,000, and more miles.

I figure where a dealership charges between $9,000 and $10,000 for a 2009, between 10,000 and $11,000 for a 2010, and $11,000 and 13,000 for a 2011, if I could buy the same car from a private party for $2,000 less, I'd be happy.

What do you think?
 
Sounds like you've made up your mind. Me, I'm going for a mid-sized truck next but the cost and reliability are my two main drivers. Would love a mustang but that's dreaming. Practicality says mid sized crew cab truck. Those town cars, I do not like. One of my grandads has one of those types and it's a gas guzzling tank. Good for driving straight thru Blm roadblocks tho. Lol
 
Sounds like you've made up your mind. Me, I'm going for a mid-sized truck next but the cost and reliability are my two main drivers. Would love a mustang but that's dreaming. Practicality says mid sized crew cab truck. Those town cars, I do not like. One of my grandads has one of those types and it's a gas guzzling tank. Good for driving straight thru Blm roadblocks tho. Lol

Actually, the newer Town Cars, as long as you don't have a lead foot, will return 16 to 18 in the city and 24 to 27 on the highway. I'd be happy with that for a car that size and weight.

My Mustang GT with a 4.6 V8 and 5-speed manual transmission gave me 32 miles to the gallon as long as I kept it to 53 on the highway. With the speed limit 55 mph and with most folks doing 70 plus mph, even though I drove on the far right, I received plenty of middle fingers (lol).

I've never been a truck person. Because of my brothers, with them having lots of Mustangs, being that they all worked for Ford, I could talk about cars all day.

Thank you for your post.
 
I'm gonna let you in on one of my secrets. I don't "develop" characters. And I don't force myself to write. The sequel to Debbie's Anal Sex is for Buttholes sat in the WOP/WMM file for 12 years. I had bits and pieces but couldn't put them together.

Do you still Love Me? was written when I had no intention of writing anything. I sat down at the computer with the intention of googling something and 10 min later I clicked Word and started typing. 3 hours later it was finished and I didn't want to change a thing.

I get an idea for a story and sometimes it just pours out like dumping a bucket. Sometimes it brews on a back burner until a few other ideas click with it.

When I sit down to write the story is already there. In my head. I just connect the brain to the fingers and let it go. Yeah, sometimes the train of thought goes off the tracks and the story sits for a while. But somewhere down the road I get the missing piece to finish it.

I believe that for the characters to be natural, they have to come to you naturally. If you force them or try to make them up, you're already off track. I have a few other pieces in my WOP/WMM file that started off well but the characters started talking and pretty soon it was awkward. Woops. Let's put that aside til they're ready to talk again.

Sometimes the characters are just already enamored with each other and away they go. The only thing that stops them is when I have to stop typing. But the minute I'm ready to write again, there they are waving their arms and shouting, "Oooo.... OOOooo.... Pick Me! Pick me!"

Your characters are ready when they are ready. Trying to plan them just ruins them.
 
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I'm gonna let you in on one of my secrets. I don't "develop" characters. And I don't force myself to write. The sequel to Debbie's Anal Sex is for Buttholes sat in the WOP/WMM file for 12 years. I had bits and pieces but couldn't put them together.

Do you still Love Me? was written when I had no intention of writing anything. I sat down at the computer with the intention of googling something and 10 min later I clicked Word and started typing. 3 hours later it was finished and I didn't want to change a thing.

I get an idea for a story and sometimes it just pours out like dumping a bucket. Sometimes it brews on a back burner until a few other ideas click with it.

When I sit down to write the story is already there. In my head. I just connect the brain to the fingers and let it go. Yeah, sometimes the train of thought goes off the tracks and the story sits for a while. But somewhere down the road I get the missing piece to finish it.

I believe that for the characters to be natural, they have to come to you naturally. If you force them or try to make them up, you're already off track. I have a few other pieces in my WOP/WMM file that started off well but the characters started talking and pretty soon it was awkward. Woops. Let's put that aside til they're ready to talk again.

Sometimes the characters are just already enamored with each other and away they go. The only thing that stops them is when I have to stop typing. But the minute I'm ready to write again, there they are waving their arms and shouting, "Oooo.... OOOooo.... Pick Me! Pick me!"

Your characters are ready when they are ready. Trying to plan them just ruins them.
As if you're a vessel and your fingers are commanded across the keys, you were inspired to write. Inspired writing is the best writing. I wrote an entire novel in that way. I knew the title, the chapter titles, the characters, and the ending before I typed a single word.

I usually write what I know but I especially like developing characters when I don't have any experience with a subject such as Anal sex, BDSM, Fetishes, Gay sex, Lesbian sex, or Cross Dressing.

Interestingly enough when I write enough of the backstory for my characters to have a reason to do what they do is when the characters become three dimensional instead of flat. Then, once they move off the page to stand behind my chair and whisper in my ear what next to write, I hand them the keyboard and allow them to write their own, damn story.

I can see them. I can hear them talking. I can feel what they feel. The hard part is to write all of that without telling and lecturing but showing. The hard part is using dialogue to tell their story instead of using pages of narrative.

There's nothing like taking your story to bed and waking up the next morning eager to write. Sometimes, I can't type fast enough. The hard part is not knowing when to stop. I'm never satisfied with a story but after a while, much like a singer singing the same song over and again, I'm sick of reading what I wrote and want to get on with the next story.

Thank you for your post.
 
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As if you're a vessel and your keys are commanded across the keys, you were inspired to write. Inspired writing is the best writing. I wrote an entire novel in that way. I knew the title, the chapter titles, the characters, and the ending before I typed a single word.

I usually write what I know but I especially like developing characters when I don't have any experience with a subject such as Anal sex, BDSM, Fetishes, Gay sex, Lesbian sex, or Cross Dressing.

Interestingly enough when I write enough of the backstory for my characters to have a reason to do what they do is when the characters become three dimensional instead of flat. Then, once they move off the page to stand behind my chair and whisper in my ear what next to write, I hand them the keyboard and allow them to write their own, damn story.

I can see them. I can hear them talking. I can feel what they feel. The hard part is to write all of that without telling and lecturing but showing. The hard part is using dialogue to tell their story instead of using pages of narrative.

There's nothing like taking your story to bed and waking up the next morning eager to write. Sometimes, I can't type fast enough. The hard part is not knowing when to stop. I'm never satisfied with a story but after a while, much like a singer singing the same song over and again, I'm sick of reading what I wrote and want to get on with the next story.

Thank you for your post.

Welcome to my world. There are 10 stories I have posted here. I would defy you to compare one to another. The exception being the Elloelle stories but they are also seperate from those ten. Same character same basic premise butt still different from each other and so FAR different from who I am that it was a real challenge.

Yeah, I could pump out one sticky sweet romance/love-making short a week if I wanted to. (believe it or not, that is closer to the real me than anything else) But what is the challenge in that?

Ok I could write gay or lesbian but it really holds no interest for me. Nothing against either but I'm just not interested.

I want to expand my abilities. But I want it to come out on its own. Naturally. Not like a Marine taking a shit.
 
Welcome to my world. There are 10 stories I have posted here. I would defy you to compare one to another. The exception being the Elloelle stories but they are also seperate from those ten. Same character same basic premise butt still different from each other and so FAR different from who I am that it was a real challenge.

Yeah, I could pump out one sticky sweet romance/love-making short a week if I wanted to. (believe it or not, that is closer to the real me than anything else) But what is the challenge in that?

Ok I could write gay or lesbian but it really holds no interest for me. Nothing against either but I'm just not interested.

I want to expand my abilities. But I want it to come out on its own. Naturally. Not like a Marine taking a shit.

Because of Literotica's yearlong Survivor contest, I had to write in as many categories as I could. Doing that helped me to be a better writer. I wish they still had the contest. It was fun.
 
Welcome to my world. There are 10 stories I have posted here. I would defy you to compare one to another. The exception being the Elloelle stories but they are also seperate from those ten. Same character same basic premise butt still different from each other and so FAR different from who I am that it was a real challenge.

Yeah, I could pump out one sticky sweet romance/love-making short a week if I wanted to. (believe it or not, that is closer to the real me than anything else) But what is the challenge in that?

Ok I could write gay or lesbian but it really holds no interest for me. Nothing against either but I'm just not interested.

I want to expand my abilities. But I want it to come out on its own. Naturally. Not like a Marine taking a shit.

Well at least you're admitting you're both names rather than pretending to be two separate people. Better off in one sense because you were really bad at alting. But worse in another because now we know you were doing it to pimp your own stories including commenting on them.

As long as you're having fun I guess that's what counts, but I just don't get the point of alting.

As for multiple pen names for different material, I considered it. Most of my work here is incest which means if I decided to put out the odd 'sticky romance' people may never see it or read it then think "I want to read the rest of your work" then go "Oh, you sick bastard"

But I decided to just stick with one name. Stories categories are clearly marked, let the reader have to use their own judgment. My sticky romances have done well. Two are in mature and the top 25 of all time, one is in first time, won the Earth day contest and has over 11k votes and closing in on a million views. The one I did put in romance was the July 2015 monthly winner.

So maybe it matters, maybe it doesn't as far as keeping material separate, but in my case it hasn't seen to affect anything. If anything I would think it shows off diversity.
 
.....I decided to just stick with one name. Stories categories are clearly marked, let the reader have to use their own judgment.

I debated that one as well but it's hard enough to keep track of myself at the best of times. LOL. One Chloe is enough. I was kind of wondering though how it affects your publishing prospects if you write the odd incest story on LIT - would that impact your ability to publish anything on Amazon for example? Or is Amazon only concerned with what you sell on Amazon?
 
I debated that one as well but it's hard enough to keep track of myself at the best of times. LOL. One Chloe is enough. I was kind of wondering though how it affects your publishing prospects if you write the odd incest story on LIT - would that impact your ability to publish anything on Amazon for example? Or is Amazon only concerned with what you sell on Amazon?

Amazon is only concerned with amazon. You can post incest stories on lit or for sale anywhere that will allow them. They are only concerned with what you're selling there.
 
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