Chronicles of Bobby Series

[first2learn]

Howdy - I have a lot of ideas regarding where to take the story, but I want to get some ideas from readers?

On another note, as you will notice, I spend quite about of time describing the sex scenes. My question is this, would you like to see:

1. Keep the detailed sex scenes
2. Describe more about the pregnancy and the impact to the woman's body
3. Do both

Thanks for your time!

first2learn

 

[NotWise]

Howdy - I have a lot of ideas regarding where to take the story, but I want to get some ideas from readers?

On another note, as you will notice, I spend quite about of time describing the sex scenes. My question is this, would you like to see:

1. Keep the detailed sex scenes
2. Describe more about the pregnancy and the impact to the woman's body
3. Do both

Thanks for your time!

first2learn

You should provide a link to the story in your letter so people don't have to hunt it down. You might bet more response that way.

 

[lovecraft68]

Here's the link to the story/stories

https://www.literotica.com/s/pt-01-bobby-impregnates-step-sister

Question for the OP...how has the reaction been to you writing a "step" story? Seeing lit allows real incest I would think the crowd there wouldn't be all that thrilled with it not being 'the real thing'

 

[first2learn]

The responses haven't been bad. I figure that for every response there are 100's thinking the same thing. I do agree, the "step" part doesn't run true to the genre, that's why "found" his real mother and sisters.

Link to the series:

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3510858&page=submissions

 

[first2learn]

Good idea, https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3510858&page=submissions

 

[NotWise]

Good idea, https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=3510858&page=submissions

144 favorites is a pretty good reception, despite the less-than-glowing comments. The scores are where I would expect them to be with step-sister content. I/T readers don't seem to be scoring stories as high as they used to just a year ago.

 

[lovecraft68]

I/T readers don't seem to be scoring stories as high as they used to just a year ago.

I've been saying that for awhile now. I think its been longer than a year, but then someone will dig up a couple that scored well and try to use them as the norm.

But its not just I/T with lower scores/vote totals etc...I've seen it in other hubs as well. I really think less people are here reading and voting, but the trolls are here forever and they have more of an affect with less good readers here.

Is what it is.

 

[8letters]

I've read all but the last one. I enjoyed them. They were good stroke stories...but they were just stroke stories. Bobby has a 10" dick so all of the women in his life want to fuck him and have his baby. The night the stepmom gets home from her honeymoon, she sneaks into Bobby's bedroom to become his lover and to have him knock her up. None of the women are jealous about him fucking and knocking up other women. None of the women seem to have a goal in life beyond having babies. Fun but shallow stuff.

As for what should be in your story, write what you want. Personally, I like the impregnation and don't really care about the bodily changes. But other readers might want the opposite.

 

[AwkwardMD]

What are the chances this passes the Bechdel test?