help me decide on story plot (Non consent story)

[If_U_Seek_Amy]

I was thinking of writing a story where a guy is in prison, and he's being picked on by inmates and in order for him to not be picked on, they tell him he needs to have a loved one do 'sexual favors' in the outside world.

I was curious what would play better, if it was his wife, or if it was his daughter or his sister (or even his mom)? Maybe he doesn't even need to ask, but the loved one finds out and tries to intervene.

I'm kind of trying to decide what sounds better?

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[sr71plt]

Any of those would do, I think. To help make it believable, the woman on the outside probably should be publicly known (and alluring)--and that could be any of those you mention.

 

[SusanJillParker]

I was thinking of writing a story where a guy is in prison, and he's being picked on by inmates and in order for him to not be picked on, they tell him he needs to have a loved one do 'sexual favors' in the outside world.

I was curious what would play better, if it was his wife, or if it was his daughter or his sister (or even his mom)? Maybe he doesn't even need to ask, but the loved one finds out and tries to intervene.

I'm kind of trying to decide what sounds better?

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Without a doubt, definitely his mother. Moms will do anything for their sons even have sex on their behalf to keep them safe inside.

He'd never forgive his wife for forcing her to have sex and his daughter will never forgive her father for forcing her to have sex.

"Mom, to keep me safe, they want you to do a gangbang," said John.

"A gangbang? But I did a gangbang last week," said Ruth.

"Sorry, Mom, but they enjoyed you so much that they want you to do another one. This is the last one. I promise," said John.

"Okay," said Ruth sighing and avoiding eye contact with her son while hiding her sexual excitement.

"Oh, and Mom, when I get out next month," said John pausing.

"What? What is it, John?"

"They want me to send them a video of us having sex too," said John.

"I'll do whatever I need to do, son, even if it means having sex with you," said Ruth.

 

[lovecraft68]

Edited because I need to realize where I am and what's encouraged here, so can't blame the OP.

 

[sr71plt]

So the guy is in prison...yet its still the wife that has to be pushed into the non consent.

Seriously, do this many men really hate women or is it just the nature of this site?

How about what would really happen...the guy gets raped in jail? no, wait, that would mean a guy being raped, can't have that, can we?

To answer the actual question, if you can't figure out your own story idea, don't bother writing.

I actually agree with the last sentence. Having your own ideas is part of being a writer (a big part of being a writer), and we have quite enough people wanting to write not to offer crutches for those who can't be their own writer.

But as far as a story idea, it's one that would have readers (just as those writing incest will have readers), so it's an OK writing topic for Literotica.

 

[SusanJillParker]

I don't understand what the issue is. It's just a story.

I've written plenty of things that I don't believe in doing and would never do. This is why writing stories here is fiction. Writing stories here is writing our sexual fantasies and role playing.

I don't see what the issue is about a man writing about being incarcerated in prison and using his wife, daughter, or mother to help him receive favors. I'm sure this type of behavior happens all the time.

Perhaps no one asked his wife, daughter, or mother to do any sexual activities. Perhaps, the man was tricking his wife, daughter, and/or mother to do something sexual that they'd never do just so that they could tell him about what they did and/or video it so that he could watch.

This story would fit in incest or Nonconsent Reluctance, which we have a category for that.

I think the topic for the story is a good one. If this writer doesn't write it, I may be interested in writing it (lol).

 

[ElectricBlue]

I was thinking of writing a story where a guy is in prison, and he's being picked on by inmates and in order for him to not be picked on, they tell him he needs to have a loved one do 'sexual favors' in the outside world.

I suspect a more realistic non-con story is to write what's going to happen to this guy in prison. I can't imagine "favours" being done for Big Harry's brother on the outside are going to stop Big Harry from H Block seeking his own favours on the inside.

Pilot, I'm surprised to see you second cab off the rank here, I didn't think you joined writer's committees except to say don't write by committee. Points for your recovery statement though, good work.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Prison rule of thumb

Some get raped but often the rape is payback for insults, disrespect, and criminal acts. Most invite the rapes.

 

[sr71plt]

Prison rule of thumb

Some get raped but often the rape is payback for insults, disrespect, and criminal acts. Most invite the rapes.

Which, of course, has nothing to do with the question that was just. I must be "JBJ rattling his head for attention" time again.

 

[ElectricBlue]

I must be "JBJ rattling his head for attention" time again.

Freudian slip there, mate?

 

[sr71plt]

Freudian slip there, mate?

Ah, no, no it wasn't. Was it that for you?

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I was thinking of writing a story where a guy is in prison, and he's being picked on by inmates and in order for him to not be picked on, they tell him he needs to have a loved one do 'sexual favors' in the outside world.

I was curious what would play better, if it was his wife, or if it was his daughter or his sister (or even his mom)? Maybe he doesn't even need to ask, but the loved one finds out and tries to intervene.

I'm kind of trying to decide what sounds better?

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If you do wifey or girlfriend, then I think it allows you more range. Suggesting daughter or Mom skews the idea towards incest. Clearly, it's fiction or fantasy, so have some fun with it. Maybe she wrestles with both enjoying and hating the experience at the same time. I'd be more interested in reading a non-con that reads more as "reluctance leading to a sexual awakening" than anything else.

Also, this may be better suited for the story ideas thread than this one.

 

[SamScribble]

There are several 'parts' to being a writer of fiction. One is having story ideas (which, I would say, includes imagining characters). Another is having the craft skills to bring these two (and a few others) together in the reader's mind. If you have to ask for plot help from other Lit authors, maybe it's time to retire to the woodshed and practise the basics for a bit longer.

Good luck.

 

[OliviaM]

I was thinking of writing a story where a guy is in prison, and he's being picked on by inmates and in order for him to not be picked on, they tell him he needs to have a loved one do 'sexual favors' in the outside world.

I was curious what would play better, if it was his wife, or if it was his daughter or his sister (or even his mom)? Maybe he doesn't even need to ask, but the loved one finds out and tries to intervene.

I'm kind of trying to decide what sounds better?

The only way I can see this story working is if it's not non-con. "You want me to do what for you? Ok, bye forever."

But yeah, like others said, him doing sexual favors in prison seems like a much more likely scenario.

 

[If_U_Seek_Amy]

There are several 'parts' to being a writer of fiction. One is having story ideas (which, I would say, includes imagining characters). Another is having the craft skills to bring these two (and a few others) together in the reader's mind. If you have to ask for plot help from other Lit authors, maybe it's time to retire to the woodshed and practise the basics for a bit longer.

Good luck.

Thanks to all who contributed to my question.

But the posts that say "you suck" but Good luck, what is the point of that?

This is an armature story site. I am not claiming to be the next Norman Mailer or Ernest Hemmingway.

I am trying to write a story some people may like. I am not a seasoned veteran and everyone has to start somewhere.

I just don't understand why it's necessary to just put me down for asking a simple question. I thought the forum was a place where a person could ask for advice.

Maybe I posted this in the wrong sub forum.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Thanks to all who contributed to my question.

But the posts that say "you suck" but Good luck, what is the point of that?

This is an armature story site. I am not claiming to be the next Norman Mailer or Ernest Hemmingway.

I am trying to write a story some people may like. I am not a seasoned veteran and everyone has to start somewhere.

I just don't understand why it's necessary to just put me down for asking a simple question. I thought the forum was a place where a person could ask for advice.

Maybe I posted this in the wrong sub forum.

I still think the main character should be the mother.

What if there's no problem for him in prison? What if he's just saying that to his mother for him to imagine and perhaps see her naked. Giving him something to masturbate over, maybe he tricks his mother into sexually playing along with him.

Actually, this would make for a good April Fool's Day story.

"Sorry, Mom. I really didn't think you were going to go through with this. I can't believe you had two gangbangs," said her son shocked that his mother was such a loving mother who'd do anything for her son. "Now that I'm released from prison, may I watch the video of you sucking and fucking again?"

His mother gave her son a sexy look and a naughty smile.

"Sure but why don't you get comfortable first. Slip off those pants while I change into my nightgown."

 

[sr71plt]

I did more thinking on this scenario and can see it as a reluctance story but it would be tricky to do as a nonconsent one. If the woman on the outside is doing this to keep the man on the inside from being beaten to a pulp or murdered (you don't pose the threat to the man on the inside as being sexual, so I'm not going there with the scenario), doesn't she almost have to be consenting to do it? I can't see a scenario where she doesn't see a connection between saving him and her having sex with anyone--which would mean she was consenting, even if blackmailed to do so. I see it as doable as a reluctance story, though.

The way to nonconsent, I see, is that she agrees to a limited something--to have a date where everything is in public or agree to give someone something short of sex--and then is sexually assaulted because she has been put in a position where that can happen. That's a tricky road to drive, though.

 

[SamScribble]

Thanks to all who contributed to my question.

But the posts that say "you suck" but Good luck, what is the point of that?

This is an armature story site. I am not claiming to be the next Norman Mailer or Ernest Hemmingway.

I am trying to write a story some people may like. I am not a seasoned veteran and everyone has to start somewhere.

I just don't understand why it's necessary to just put me down for asking a simple question. I thought the forum was a place where a person could ask for advice.

Maybe I posted this in the wrong sub forum.

Sorry if you read my comment as ‘you suck’. I’m pretty sure that it said nothing of the sort.

I was merely trying to suggest that you might find it more useful, more productive, to go and do a bit more work on the basics rather asking others to do the work for you.

And I did mean to wish you good luck. So good luck. In fact … the very best of luck. I hope that it all comes together for you.

 

[If_U_Seek_Amy]

I was not asking everyone to do the work for me. I did write one story but it was a fledgling effort. Had no luck finding an editor. Anyway some of the comments on that story said to the effect that maybe if I had done thus and such it would be better. Which I agree. I was just trying to get a little advice before I began to write the story.

I have seen prison movies where a wife had to smuggle in narcotics for the prisoner, and I thought what if one of the prisoners was a cop and he had some guy with a grudge who were on the inside with him.

Maybe that cops wife was asked to do something shady and maybe it turns into something more and maybe the wife gets the wrong message or gets carried away. For example the husband says meet this character and he'll tell you what you need to do.

I was just asking if it would be better for the woman to be a wife, or mother.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Prisons are filling with female guards and professionals willing and eager for sex with inmates. I knew a female psychologist fired for sex with her male inmate patients.

Homosexual sex is common but its usually assholes who get raped.

 

[TamLin01]

Why not all of them?