Need help with a story

[8letters]

In my story, a 19 year old boy is given the mission of seducing a 34 year old woman. He doesn't really want to do it. He doesn't think he can do it as she is married mostly-happily to a well-off husband. But he doesn't want to disappoint the person who gave him the mission. He eventually does seduce the woman when she finds out her husband is cheating on her.

I'm not so sure on how to write this story. Can anyone give me some suggestions? Or point me to a similar story where this is done well?

 

[lovecraft68]

Well to me the key is she thinks she is happily married. So I would have the kid kind of make a ham handed attempt at seducing her. If you want reality and not 'real man' porn, then no 19 year old kid, especially one not entirely enthused about it, is going to seduce an actual woman.

So he strikes out badly. Then she finds out hubby is a cheating dog and she comes back to the kid and says "Know what?Let's go for a ride." and he could then tell whoever that he actually seduced her.

As an aside, get ready to earn hate. Even if you put this in mature and not loving wives, those turds have been over flowing their cat box and trashing any story featuring marital infidelity, just got one on my recent stroker incest story.(thanks for your comment BTW)

 

[legerdemer]

In my story, a 19 year old boy is given the mission of seducing a 34 year old woman. He doesn't really want to do it. He doesn't think he can do it as she is married mostly-happily to a well-off husband. But he doesn't want to disappoint the person who gave him the mission. He eventually does seduce the woman when she finds out her husband is cheating on her.

I'm not so sure on how to write this story. Can anyone give me some suggestions? Or point me to a similar story where this is done well?

Not sure exactly what to suggest but here goes something: think about a hubby who is good but too preoccupied with his own career or obsessions (making money, in this case?), or too self-adsorbed (think, ummm, Trump) and dismissive of her. She may not be looking around, but being asked for help by a callow and sensitive 19-yr old may melt her morals and/or reluctance.

 

[EverLux]

Well to me the key is she thinks she is happily married. So I would have the kid kind of make a ham handed attempt at seducing her. If you want reality and not 'real man' porn, then no 19 year old kid, especially one not entirely enthused about it, is going to seduce an actual woman.

So he strikes out badly. Then she finds out hubby is a cheating dog and she comes back to the kid and says "Know what?Let's go for a ride." and he could then tell whoever that he actually seduced her.

^^^
As a woman the same age as your character, I'm going to agree that this is one of the only reasons I would sleep with a nineteen-year-old boy.

There might be others, but I can't imagine what they'd be.

 

[lovecraft68]

^^^
As a woman the same age as your character, I'm going to agree that this is one of the only reasons I would sleep with a nineteen-year-old boy.

There might be others, but I can't imagine what they'd be.

When I bust my wife up about being cougar age to some of the young guys in her class, her answer is "Why the hell would I want them? I want to get laid, not have to tell them how to do it."

 

[sr71plt]

I think the turning point in the decision to have sex would be the woman's. I'd suggest the 19-year-old just finding excuses to be around her and nice to her without a real idea of what to do to get her into the sack--to the point where he gives up and isn't trying as hard, which is what makes her more attracted to him. The catalyst then could be a knock-down, drag-out fight with her husband over her finding out he's been cheating on her. She tosses him out, if only for a moment, he goes off and is remorseful and decides he can't lose her. She's huffing around and finding the hunky 19-year-old there and sympathetic, and biology happens, much to the surprise of the 19-year-old, who had given up on the mission. And, afterward, much to the consternation of the wife, who realizes she doesn't really want to split from her husband.

This overwhelms the 19-year-old to the point that when hubby reappears, loaded down with chocolates, flowers, and remorse, the wife is easier about taken him back because now she's done it too--and immediately afterward regretted it and wanted her husband back. The 19-year-old escapes, glad to be out of the overwhelming experience but also glad he's fulfilled his mission.

(Establishing the why of the mission is probably the most challenge to plausibility here. Maybe the woman the husband has been sleeping with is a golddigger who wants to drive a wedge between the two, but, instead, brings them together in the realization they were drifting apart and don't want to? Maybe she's close to the 19-year-old's age, a real looker, and desirable to him, and he agrees to the mission to be getting her into the sack.)

A three-way win, a drifting marriage solved, and, in the "mission" scenario suggested, a golddigger given her comeuppance (and the 19-year-year old seeing through her and telling her to take a hike).

If you're going to have a 19-year-old intentionally seducing an older woman (which would be interesting), he's going to have to be a negative figure at least at some point and you're going to have to be very careful about the ending.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Abort the whole mess. I give it 5 PILOTS for lame. See eyerolls. They now signify PILOTS.

 

[lovecraft68]

Abort the whole mess. I give it 5 PILOTS for lame.

Translation....you have no advice to give.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Translation....you have no advice to give.

Read my post again, lil lamb.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=af7ngGxEusE

I consulted with Bob Dylan, and he agrees...ABORT, STRIKE ANOTHER MATCH GIRL, START ANEW.

 

[MLClifton]

I have a story here where the 19-year-old main character is a male who seduces his dad's girlfriend, who's in her late thirties (albeit it doesn't take much effort on his part). The only reason I could make it work is because his dad is a complete asshole, while the son is a genuinely nice guy. (Someone still made a comment that my two characters are a "dickhead and a whore.")

 

[sr71plt]

I have a story here where the 19-year-old main character is a male who seduces his dad's girlfriend, who's in her late thirties (albeit it doesn't take much effort on his part). The only reason I could make it work is because his dad is a complete asshole, while the son is a genuinely nice guy. (Someone still made a comment that my two characters are a "dickhead and a whore.")

I'll have to say that I'd have difficulty making a 19-year-old who seduced his father's 30-something girlfriend as a "genuinely nice guy." How did you manage to depict him as "nice"?

 

[lovecraft68]

I'll have to say that I'd have difficulty making a 19-year-old who seduced his father's 30-something girlfriend as a "genuinely nice guy." How did you manage to depict him as "nice"?

Oh, I'm sure its a case of father's an asshole, pays no attention to her. The young kid is sweet, pays her compliments, pays her attention...but I agree 'nice guys' don't seduce married women no matter how much an ass their husband is, especially if its his father's girlfriend.

But...its fiction.

 

[8letters]

Well to me the key is she thinks she is happily married. So I would have the kid kind of make a ham handed attempt at seducing her. If you want reality and not 'real man' porn, then no 19 year old kid, especially one not entirely enthused about it, is going to seduce an actual woman.

The age difference is only a little bigger than that between Jennifer Aniston and Jake Gyllenhaal in “The Good Girl”.

If I can manage to write romantic incest stories that readers find plausible, I'd think that this scenario wouldn't be that hard to pull off. I’ve got most of it mapped out. I just need to figure out how to get him over the finish line.

As an aside, get ready to earn hate. Even if you put this in mature and not loving wives, those turds have been over flowing their cat box and trashing any story featuring marital infidelity, just got one on my recent stroker incest story.(thanks for your comment BTW)

We’ll see. It’s an incest story. I think it’ll come across as a touching love story.

 

[lovecraft68]

The age difference is only a little bigger than that between Jennifer Aniston and Jake Gyllenhaal in “The Good Girl”.

If I can manage to write romantic incest stories that readers find plausible, I'd think that this scenario wouldn't be that hard to pull off. I’ve got most of it mapped out. I just need to figure out how to get him over the finish line.


We’ll see. It’s an incest story. I think it’ll come across as a touching love story.

You lost me. You said he's seducing a 34 year old woman who is married. Now its an incest story?

 

[8letters]

You lost me. You said he's seducing a 34 year old woman who is married. Now its an incest story?

The 19 year old's aunt seduces him and then pushes him to seduce his stepmom to get revenge on his dad for destroying her happy life. It's going to be something like scouries' Two Pregnant Moms - and Sis?, except uplifting and plausible.

 

[sr71plt]

The 19 year old's aunt seduces him and then pushes him to seduce his stepmom to get revenge on his dad for destroying her happy life. It's going to be something like scouries' Two Pregnant Moms - and Sis?, except uplifting and plausible.

You are welcome.

 

[sr71plt]

But...its fiction.

It was also a waste of time responding to.

 

[lovecraft68]

It was also a waste of time responding to.

You're right.

It does however, validate some things.

 

[MLClifton]

Oh, I'm sure its a case of father's an asshole, pays no attention to her. The young kid is sweet, pays her compliments, pays her attention...but I agree 'nice guys' don't seduce married women no matter how much an ass their husband is, especially if its his father's girlfriend.

But...its fiction.

Well, I thought he was a nice guy. And the son does have some major anger issues toward his father. The father is a perpetual womanizer who's already cheating on his girlfriend of three months, and the son knows this. But yeah, it's fiction.

 

[MLClifton]

It was also a waste of time responding to.

And if it's a waste of time, feel free not to respond in the future.

 

[sr71plt]

And if it's a waste of time, feel free not to respond in the future.

Well, yes, now I know. (And I didn't think you could tell me how a 19-year-old who seduced his father's girlfriend could be "a genuinely nice guy." It sounds like the "dickhead and whore" comment probably was right on.)

 

[geronimo_appleby]

who gives him the mission?

and why?

eta:

got it.

http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=80581828&postcount=16

 

[sr71plt]

Yep, I asked that (and gave a suggestion).

 

[8letters]

It was also a waste of time responding to.

LOL. I'm over 11K words into the story. It's going to be a very long and very complicated story. It will be the most challenging story I've written. But I've written a number of long and complicated incest stories that have done well on this site. And I love rising to the challenge on stories. For "My European Summer Vacation", I had to teach myself how to write a Cork accent. I've already figured out how to defeat the stepmom's initial defenses. Facebook! I just need to figure out how to seal the deal.