How To Go...

[JackStrange]

I submitted a story a few weeks ago, which was relatively well received. The main criticism was that it was too short and ended too abruptly. The critics were right.

The story I am referring to is Louisiana Days Ch. 2, Elliot's Wife, which itself was a sequel to Ch. 1, To Nail Doris....

My question becomes: Should I just write a Ch. 3, Elliot's Wife Redux, or should I combine the two Wife stories into one, and resubmit it??

The problem for me is the procedure in Literoticaland... whacha think?

 

[legerdemer]

I submitted a story a few weeks ago, which was relatively well received. The main criticism was that it was too short and ended too abruptly. The critics were right....

My question becomes: Should I just write a Ch. 3, Elliot's Wife Redux, or should I combine the two Wife stories into one, and resubmit it??

The problem for me is the procedure in Literoticaland... whacha think?

The advantage of posting a new story is time on the New Stories pages, which gives each new story greater exposure to readers. The readers of the older ones will be happy, hopefully, with the next installment, and though you might lose some old readers, you may gain new ones.