Agent Carter

[MagicFingers]

A story based on Agent Carter of the SSA set around 1947 after the war.
She's a female agent with high intelligence and fighting skills who initially gets mistreated with task like getting coffee and donuts for the guys and doing their desk work. She is personal friends with Howard Carter (Howard Hughes) and his personal servant Jarvis is tasked to protect and work with her to solve crimes.

But she has needs
Who will she fuck first, Carter? Jarvis? and how?
Her bosses, Chief Compton, Jack and Sousa?
Dr. Wilkes, the tall dark and handsome black scientist who was invisible for a while?
Or Whitney Frost, the blonde actress who is trying to get all the Zero Matter, stuff created from an atomic blast that has incredible powers?
Under the influence of it, great sex could be had.

 

[cabin69]

I loved Agent Carter.. this would be a fantastic story when done right. Peggy is a hot one for sure. like you mention there are a world of possibilities.

 

[MagicFingers]

Yes

I loved Agent Carter.. this would be a fantastic story when done right. Peggy is a hot one for sure. like you mention there are a world of possibilities.

If you've seen the TV series, you know how many different possibilities there could be! Peggy is a very sexy solid-bodied woman for sure, and could handle any man, or woman.

 

[sirhugs]

I generally avoid celeb stories because so many are generic, but I agree that Agent Carter has all the elements to be outstanding.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think Agent Carter is actually the exact amount of wrong for a celeb story.

Celeb (and really Lit should separate Celeb from Fanfic the next time it adds categories and maybe remove a few of the others that get no love.) stories essentially run on one (or more) of the following.

1. The woman is super hot and everybody wants to fuck her. Beyonce, Britney Spears, Jessica Alba etc etc. Saying her name in the title essentially draws in the fans of that particular look. Anything after that is essentially window dressing.

2. The woman has a well known persona either "real" (PAris Hilton) or imagined (Flo from E-Surance or whoever that Sprint chick is.) The persona is already developed and your effectively writing real person fan fic. Probably should have put this last.

3. fanfic. You are working (more or less) within an established universe. You cut off the hard work of having to establish anything and your audience is somewhat locked in.

Agent Carter is obviously the third but here's the snag. She's not that well known. Neither the character nor the actress is a household name and that's generally what you want for these stories.

With Carter I think you'd be 100x better off inventing a brand new character (and probably ditching the era unless your comfy in 1940's 50's America. ) Base her off Peggy, take everything but the names and build your own stuff. Because I don't think you'd get a sufficient number of readers BECAUSE of Peggy Carter to justify locking yourself in to the various rules that come with Peggy Carter. Sure you're sufficiently removed from most stuff not to worry but still

 

[Hypoxia]

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Agent who of the what? I guess I missed that part of my cultural education.

Old pal Sean details why "Agent Carter" (whoever she is) isn't a good subject for Celeb or fanfic. I'd be lost in a vague universe I'm supposed to know. Eh, why bother reading? In-jokes only work for the in-crowd.

 

[MagicFingers]

Sean nailed the mystique of Peggy Carter very well

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Agent who of the what? I guess I missed that part of my cultural education.

Old pal Sean details why "Agent Carter" (whoever she is) isn't a good subject for Celeb or fanfic. I'd be lost in a vague universe I'm supposed to know. Eh, why bother reading? In-jokes only work for the in-crowd.

If you haven't seen the TV series you wouldn't "get" the power that the writers and actress pull off in it. It's not about in-jokes, but the story would have to be told as if the reader didn't really know anything about her, but if you did, you would realize how she and her strong personality could pull pull off some great sex scenes and scenarios.

If the setting remains post-WWII, it would be easier for her to seduce or be seduced by any or all of the characters I mentioned, because it was a man's world back then and women were second class. But Peggy is NOT subservient or dumb or helpless. She could kick most of their asses and the power and raw desire within her would explode like the bomb that created Zero Matter. I could envision her getting dosed by Zero Matter that causes constant sexual desire that must be satisfied or she can't even function to do her job. Like a different guy every day.

No, I couldn't imagine a story about Super Girl or Wonder Woman would work as well.

 

[Sean Renaud]

A story about Supergirl or Wonder Woman would work better. Self Friend Hypoxia knows those characters and may very well click on it because those characters get him off. Or at least some random reader might.

Agent Carter is not that popular a character. (She's part of MArvel encase anybody reading this honestly doesn't know. She's essentially pre S.H.I.E.L.D.)

But my point Magic Fingers is why bother with Agent Carter? See fans of Agent Carter are gonna pick at the shit you get wrong and people who don't know won't read to begin with. You could just as easily (and likely with more readers) go Sci-Fi.

Introducing

Agent Renaud, daughter of Duke Renaud her parents sent her to the United States to escape what they viewed as an inevitable war with Germany that they feared would spell doom for their country. Agent Beatrix Renaud trained in every goddamn thing under the planet, joined the war effort, helped create the first Wrist Launcher which would later become a staple of US special forces. After the war she went galavanting across the globe preventing escaped Nazis from fulfilling Hitler's plan to revive the Terracotta Army using the Easter Island Monoliths.

Or whatever blows your hair back.

There is no particularly good reason to bind yourself to Agent Carter since she won't carry the story on her own. As opposed to the very good reason to use Wonder Woman instead of Ultragirl, Amazon Princess created by Hera to defeat Hercules!

 

[MagicFingers]

And speaking of Sean Renaud

How about when Adalind, a hexanbest, goes into Juliette's body in order to have sex with her boyfriend, Portland detective, Nick, a Grim, in order to have a powerful baby again; then Juliette becomes a hexenbest and get killed but doesn't die and becomes Eve, who fights evil, and now has become Capt Sean Renaud. And a hot woman just seduced the Capt, er, Eve, er Juliette? What's going through HER mind having sex as a man?

But that's another story.

 

[Sean Renaud]

How about when Adalind, a hexanbest, goes into Juliette's body in order to have sex with her boyfriend, Portland detective, Nick, a Grim, in order to have a powerful baby again; then Juliette becomes a hexenbest and get killed but doesn't die and becomes Eve, who fights evil, and now has become Capt Sean Renaud. And a hot woman just seduced the Capt, er, Eve, er Juliette? What's going through HER mind having sex as a man?

But that's another story.

First his name is Sean Renard. Second. I love that show and hate that goddamn character because people think I chose this name based on him despite that show being far younger than my screen presence.

But I wuld probably steer clear of Grimm or Sleepy Hollow for the exact same reasons. None of the actors on that show are well known. And the important thing of Adalind and Juliette really boils down to these two themes.

1. Does a woman have a right to be mad at her man for not knowing who she really is? I mean it's heavily implied if never stated that Julliette is pissed that Nick didn't just know that Adalind had changed herself to look like Julliette.

2. Is it okay for your man to get off on another woman? Since again Juliette is kinda pissy about him being able to get off on Adilade when its her.

3. Do you love me or my body (sorta a throw back to the first two.

I think you'd do WONDERFULLY in Sci-fi with those themes without binding yourself to the Grimm mythology.

 

[Hypoxia]

Tangential, USA-based: A matriarchy of super-agents fighting for Federal ideals since 1776, their lore and techniques passed on mother-to-daughter over generations. Fighting Brits, Indians, Mexicans, Southern traitors, Cubans, Germans, Russians, Chinese, Iraqis, et al.

Twist: They always fight for the RIGHT side, which often means fighting AGAINST the USA.

Further twist: They have constant opponents, a clan of incubi and succubi. Steel vs soul-suckers.