Story Request: Chinese Hijinx

Nephlim14

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Category: Nonconsent/Reluctance
Tags: Asian, Ravishment, Defloration, Historical, Nonconsent, Skinny Dipping
Setting: 17th Century Imperial CHina
P.S. All dialog is translated Chinese

Example Draft:

Part 1: Horny Bandits

May-Lin is walking through the rural area of the village, with a small bag of food on her arm. She is dressed in clean, decent garments and headed towards a fabled hot spring area, known for it’s near magical waters. She is known to courageously/foolishly walk through the areas known as “devil’s dens”. They are known to be rich with bandits, but May-Lin is undeterred. She believes that no matter how dangerous, no harm will come to her.

Unbeknownst to the unsuspecting girl, a group of men hide in the bushes watching her. They are a group of bandits that have been hiding out in that area. Their appearance is what one would expect a Chinese bandit from this century. They are dressed in slightly ragged clothes, with tattered fabric pants, bare feet and baggy shirts that moderately cover their chests, the ones that were wearing shirts at least. Despite their filthy appearance, they showed a reasonably athletic figure and a mildly attractive appearance. The men watch as this beauty walks through the road, with obvious lust in their eyes.

Bandit 1: Ooooohhhh! What is that!
Bandit 2: Pretty woman looks lost!
Bandit 3: Yeah! Looks like she’s headed to the hot springs. What do you think Boss?

The three men then look towards their leader, Zhang. He dwarfs over them at a height of 6ft, and has a more muscular frame than his henchmen. He wears a shirt that barely covers his broad chest and abs, which has a large scar across it. The man gives a slight smile and motions the men to follow the woman.

After some time May-Lin (and the bandits) reached the hot springs. It was every bit as beautiful as described. There was steam flowing through the air, warm water, and a waterfall flowing graciously. May-Lin undresses and walks into the water. She swims while the bandits hide in nearby bushes to watch on. As they watch her naked body move through the water, they get more aroused, Zhang most of all.

Soon enough, they see May-Lin climb onto a rock, and shower underneath a waterfall. She caresses her beautiful boy, seemingly average, but smooth and glistening. She was always known for her beauty throughout the town, and had various men fighting to marry her so they could claim her chastity. Zhang smiles in delight at the sight of the woman, with sweat rolling down his skin. He begins to stroke something in his pants, which looks like a long cobra. One of the bandits takes notice and asks

Bandit 3: Hey boss, why don’t we go play with the little pretty huh? Help her get nice and clean.

Zhang smiles and silently motions his bandits to strike.

Hello, Everyone. I have been seeking Exhibitionist and Non-Con stories set in ancient China, . A few other example plots I've been looking for include:
1. Three Chinese Monks ending up naked and lightly embarassed.
- In one way, the monks are seduced by a band of female bandits. They wake up naked, have to travel through the streets undetected, but are then ambushed by the same bandits, who decide to play with the chaste men.
- In another way the monks are confronted by a band of male bandits. The criminals force the monks naked, and violate them until the monks manage to fight them off.

2. Erotic Stories involving Imperial Officers.
-In one story, three corrupt guards are forced to suffer nude punishments for their crimes
-Second story, three guards publicly humiliate a rapist.
-Third story, three guards are relaxing in a natural hot spring until their clothes are stolen by two bandits. The men chase the crooks through the woods, then rape them as punishment.
- Three guards notice one of the village hermits, who can either be a young male or female, bathing in the waterfall. They then decide to shed their armor and seduce the unsuspecting villager.

If the idea interests anyone, please reply.
 
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You need to be careful with your "drafts" here. I removed the text after your "hello everyone" and you still had over 400 words. Hell, Lit's minimum word count for stories is only 750. If it looks like you have more story than idea in this board it will be moved. After all, Lit only allows no more than three paragraphs for reviews, even in rough drafts.
 
You need to be careful with your "drafts" here. I removed the text after your "hello everyone" and you still had over 400 words. Hell, Lit's minimum word count for stories is only 750. If it looks like you have more story than idea in this board it will be moved. After all, Lit only allows no more than three paragraphs for reviews, even in rough drafts.

I had a nagging feeling the drafts would just get negative comments, but I didn't think it would/could ruffle any of the admins feathers. Thank You!!

Aside from this what do you think of the idea?
 
Three corrupt guards

I'd be interested in working on a story about the three corrupt Chinese guards who are forced to suffer nude punishments for their crimes. This would be a gay story with master and sub elements.
 
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