Story Request: Reign of the Popobawa

Nephlim14

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Hello everyone,

Today I want to share an idea for a story i'd like to see. Recently I read about a new mythological creature , from African Folklore, called a Popobawa. They were known as male spirits who would attack people at night. You can look up information online but here is a link giving a better description.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Popobawa
http://cryptidz.wikia.com/wiki/Popobawa

Category: Nonconsent/Reluctance
Tags: Shifter, Gay Ravishment, Nonconsensual, Historical, Defloration, Africa, Warriors, Mandingo
Setting: Tribal Civilization in the jungles of Africa
P.S. All dialog is translated from Swahili

Example Draft:

In the darkness of night, a young woman walks through the vast wilderness of the jungle. She is mildly concerned as she hears the various growls of natural predators, but continues to walk nonetheless. As she moved forward, she suddenly saw a large shadow on the ground swoop by her. She looks up quickly, but doesn’t see anything other than the bright moon. She calms herself then continues to traverse the wilderness, unaware of her stalker.

Soon enough, she reaches her destination in the form of a beautiful waterfall. Finally in a relaxed mood, she strips off her sarong and loincloth, then dives into the water. She swims gleefully, enjoying the nighttime air, then climbs onto a rock to shower in the falling water. Her body is a marvel, with perky breasts, smooth ebony skin, a curvy figure, and a petite body type found on most American supermodels. She caresses her body while rubbing the water over herself. Suddenly she hears some rustling, and turns toward the surface. She can’t see clearly through the waterfall, but notices a person there, who is clearly male. The man appears to be well built, with a sarong wrapped around his waist the only clothing he has on. The woman is growing frightened. She covers herself in fear, and states

Girl: (Slightly frightened) Who are you?

In response, the man begins to move. His eyes glow, he begins to sprout bat-like wings, and he opens his mouth to answer, revealing serrated teeth.

Man: (Yelling) My name is ……POPOBAWA!!!!

The woman recognizes the name, scared to near death, but before she could even move, Popobawa leaps into the air. He floats above the girl, who fell and is frozen in fear, then descends to attack her.
She screams loud enough to echo throughout the jungle.

Daytime rises, and Zabu awakens to greet the day. He gets out of his bed, and clothes his nude body with his tribal garb. This consists of a mid size sarong wrapped around his waist, a lion skin covering his chest, and tribal markings covering his chest, shoulders, back, and feet. He leaves his hut, and walks toward a large crowd to see what is going on. There he meets his two friends, Raphiq and Nasir. Raphiq is clothed with only a sarong around him, while Nasir wears a loincloth. The three friends converse over the current situation

Zabu: What is going on here
Nasir: The chief’s virgin daughter was attacked by a Popobawa.
Zabu: What on earth is a Popobawa?
Raphiq: It is an animal spirit that attacks at night-
Nasir: They ambush, and rape people they see as prey. The woman was skinny dipping in the waterfall and the monster attacked her. She was found this morning and is being brought back now.

At that cue, the woman is carried to the chief’s hut by some of the village men. She is naked with small scratches on her back and chest. Her legs are numb and the small amount of white seed leaking from her suggests that she was indeed raped and robbed of her virginity. The crowd looks on in pity of the girl, except Zabu. He keeps an unmoved look on his face, which Nasir notices.

Nasir: Zabu, what is with the face. Don’t you feel bad for her.
Zabu: I do, but she knew about this creature flying around and she snuck out to play in a waterfall. The chief’s daughter has always felt she was untouchable.

After this, the girl is carried back into the hut. The chief then tells the crowd to go home. Suddenly Zabu stated an idea for him and his friends.

Zabu: We should go after this thing!
Nasir and Raphiq: WHAT?!
Zabu: Everyone seems to be scared of this thing, so why don’t we go after it.
Nasir: You honestly think we could kill this thing?!
Raphiq: Yeah, when the chief sent a group of our hunters to kill it, they were found outside the village naked and ravished by the beast.
Zabu: We are not them! We can sneak out tonight, kill this thing, and become heroes. It will be fun. And the women will want to show their gratitude.

The two relent. Zabu was a young and slightly arrogant hunter in the village, always looking for thrills.

That night, the three set off for the jungle. They are carrying bows/arrows, and makeshift machetes. They trek carefully through the wilderness, encountering a sudden fog Zabu is determined while his two friends are slightly rattled. They fear an encounter with the beast, believing they will be victims of it. The situation becomes worse when the trio hears a loud screech. It echoes all around the men, leaving Nasir and Raphiq petrified. Zabu rallies them and the group continues to walk toward the waterfall in hopes of finding any trace of the monster.

They soon reach the site, but notice an unusual sight. There were three beautiful women there, naked and playing in the water. The girls see the young men and silently greet them, all while the men are smiling goofily. They wouldn’t admit it, but their manhood was beginning to swell under their garments. Zabu speaks up:

Zabu: Uh what are you doing here. Don’t you girls know there is a monster here.
1st Girl: There hasn’t been a monster here all night, just us.
Zabu: Are you sure, this is where the chief’s princess was attacked.
!st Girl: I am sure. The only beast here seems to be you three. Why don’t you throw away those weapons and join us.

With this, the three men excitedly throw away their weapons. However, as soon as they are disarmed, the men notice the three girls have disappeared. They are left confused, until the same loud screech alerts them, now sounding closer than last time. Before Zabu can respond, the three are ambushed by the Popobawa, now in his true monsterous form. The creature shrieks to disorient the three, then knocks Zabu back into a rock. He begins to black out, with his two friends being overwhelmed the last thing he sees.

Zabu begins to open his eyes, and notices that he is in an unknown area of the jungle. He is bound by strong vines and he has small scratches on his body. He looks around to notice his friends in similar condition and hears the Popobawa, now in his human form, approaching. The monster simply says.

Popobawa: (With a smile on his face) Hello lovelies!

Note: Hello everyone and HAPPY NEW YEAR!! For those who do not know, I have written a LOT of requests/ideas for stories. I have also been asked repeatedly why I don’t write these myself. The answer is because I like to READ the stories more than WRITE them. I like to enjoy the erotic descriptions of the characters and the turns the stories take. But I have decided that I should do more than just belch out what I want. This draft is to be used as a short, non erotic example of what my ideas for the story is exactly. Anyone who specializes in the stories alley can use it as a basis, editing the characters, plot, or possible endings, while adding their own erotic content to them. I won’t fuss about copyright or anything so If anyone is interested in this story, feel free to reply.

THANK YOU!!!
 
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... a story about an African village that is terrified by the creature, with various men and women being stripped and attacked by it. Another part that could happen would be about a group of African warriors trying to hunt the monster, only to become his next victim.
Does not sound very sexy. From your Wikipedia link: Its nocturnal attacks can comprise simple physical assault and/or poltergeist-like phenomena; but most feared is sexual assault and the sodomising of adult men and women. Sounds like non-pleasurable noncon/rape of humans.
 
Does not sound very sexy. From your Wikipedia link: Its nocturnal attacks can comprise simple physical assault and/or poltergeist-like phenomena; but most feared is sexual assault and the sodomising of adult men and women. Sounds like non-pleasurable noncon/rape of humans.

Well rape isn't suppose to be pleasurable in real life, but in these stories it's practically required that the victim feels a level pleasure near the end. You could make it this way so the victims feel reluctant arousal from the encounter. I am going to try and write a short, non erotic draft based on the idea to show what I am requesting. This way I can contribute more to the process.
 
I like it, I think I might work on this cus it's been a while since I wrote anything for lit and this is right up my alley.
 
I like it, I think I might work on this cus it's been a while since I wrote anything for lit and this is right up my alley.

Well please reply when/if you make it. I am going to post a small draft to show what I am requesting exactly. YOu can use it as a basis.
 
Could be tied in the with those college/university dabbles into witchcraft and ouija and suchlike.

Perhaps gap year camp where students go to Africa to help in a local school. The students here about the Popobawa and get curious. They hear from the locals that it has ferocious sexual appetite and as a bit fun they try to summon one.

In the links it talks about possession. Perhaps when the summon it the Popobawa possesses one of the guys who then strips all his clothes off and is instantly hard. Once he has a body to posses however he sets of in pursuit of locals.

Desperate to protect the locals from what they have summoned and their friend they decide that they must try to satisfy the Popobawa and it takes all of them...
 
Could be tied in the with those college/university dabbles into witchcraft and ouija and suchlike.

Perhaps gap year camp where students go to Africa to help in a local school. The students here about the Popobawa and get curious. They hear from the locals that it has ferocious sexual appetite and as a bit fun they try to summon one.

In the links it talks about possession. Perhaps when the summon it the Popobawa possesses one of the guys who then strips all his clothes off and is instantly hard. Once he has a body to posses however he sets of in pursuit of locals.

Desperate to protect the locals from what they have summoned and their friend they decide that they must try to satisfy the Popobawa and it takes all of them...

This sounds like a good one. Would you also consider adding a historical setting in the beginning, like some horror movies do. You could write a prologue about how two sisters in an African village were kidnapped by the village's strongest warrior, who was possessed by the monster. One of the girls would survive and become the old woman who tells the students about the creature.
 
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