You Decide

[NOIRTRASH]

Lemme know what you prefer.

In a new series a killer has an older girlfriend with an 18 year old daughter. He fucks both. He lives with his mom, an ex-con and alcoholic.

Do I keep his ma as ma, or make her his married secretary or married land lady? He'll fuck her, too.

 

[JackLuis]

I'd vote for Landlady.

Motherfuckers don't turn me on JB.

 

[NOIRTRASH]

I'd vote for Landlady.

Motherfuckers don't turn me on JB.

Land lady works for me 2.

 

[ishtat]

Landlady. He eventually gets fed up with her being drunk and loud as well as paying rent to her. So he kills her as a sort of casual afterthought - a minor subplot to convince readers of his real character which is being developed in the main plotline.

 

[SusanJillParker]

Lemme know what you prefer.

In a new series a killer has an older girlfriend with an 18 year old daughter. He fucks both. He lives with his mom, an ex-con and alcoholic.

Do I keep his ma as ma, or make her his married secretary or married land lady? He'll fuck her, too.

Normally, I'd lean towards the mother but him having a married landlady opens up all kinds of possibilities.

I've written more than one story about a tenant paying her rent with sex.

Actually, to make the story more interesting or believable, he needs to have a dawg. A mangy mongrel of a dog. A dog that he seemingly hates but truly loves. He loves his dawg more than any woman.

You'd need to give the dawg a good name though. Just off the top of my head, I dunno, I'd name the dawg...Dawg.

Actually, I wrote a story about a dawg named Dawg. Geez, seemingly, I've written stories about everything except for you JB.

 

[ehuang]

Married secretary would be a little less often seen.

 

[JaxRhapsody]

Normally, I'd lean towards the mother but him having a married landlady opens up all kinds of possibilities.

I've written more than one story about a tenant paying her rent with sex.

Actually, to make the story more interesting or believable, he needs to have a dawg. A mangy mongrel of a dog. A dog that he seemingly hates but truly loves. He loves his dawg more than any woman.

You'd need to give the dawg a good name though. Just off the top of my head, I dunno, I'd name the dawg...Dawg.

Actually, I wrote a story about a dawg named Dawg. Geez, seemingly, I've written stories about everything except for you JB.

Which means, with all this, he should ride a HD, too, huh?

 

[NOIRTRASH]

Maybe both but get rid of ma early.