Writing Challenge ~ December 2015 ~ Comments and Reviews

Britwitch

Classically curvy
Joined
Apr 23, 2004
Posts
23,086
WRITING CHALLENGE REVIEW THREAD ~ DECEMBER 2015​

Just a few little rules for this thread:-

• This thread is for comments and reviews only. Submissions go here!

• Please keep your comments focused on the pieces posted for the challenge running from 1st – 24th December 2015 only, this is not really intended to be a thread for conversation/flirting/mayhem and so on (Sorry to be a bore!). Writers should be able to find reviews/comments for their pieces without having to trawl through pages of banter (no matter how amusing/sexy it might be!) :)

Readers/Reviewers:- Please keep your comments and reviews polite and, wherever possible, positive. If you have constructive criticism or advice for writers please do give it but be polite about it! You don’t have to like everything you read but if you really don’t have anything nice to say about something then I would suggest you refrain from posting. And if all you want to say is you liked a piece and no more…that’s great too! We all know how writers like to be appreciated! ;)

Authors:- Please take constructive criticism as it is intended, as an attempt at improving possible flaws/problems/areas of confusion in your piece. They are not (hopefully!) personal attacks on you or your work.

• This is supposed to be a fun way to get to know new writers and potential partners, to exercise our writing brains, it’s not a competition, please keep that in mind!

• One more thing…suggestions for future prompts are very welcome and should be PM’d to me – Britwitch – as a link ideally. :)

Previous challenges and reviews can be found here.

Happy reading!
 
Last edited:
1st December ~ Iceprincess12

This was fantastic! I won't give anything away but I was sat holding my breath as I read on, waiting for the ending just as your characters were.

A brilliant start to the challenge indeed! :D
 
I like the lighthearted feel of fr33ks33k's piece and watching the socks while reading. It made me smile.
 
fr33ks33k

Great imagination and it flows so well.
Love it
 
I just wanted to poke my head in and say a massive well done to all those who've written so far. I've not been massively productive myself and laptop issues mean what I've written is trapped, at least for the time being, but my assistant (read, Mr Britwitch :eek: ) assure me it should be freed in the next few days.

I will leave 'proper' reviews when I'm able to type more than a few sentences at a time (smart phones and I do not get on well when having to type at length...) :rose:

Keep going, loving it all so far!
 
My hat's off to you, prettyserpentine. :)

Your December 6th entry is a delightful read, and a beautiful epilogue to the best thread I've ever contributed to.

Thank you. :rose:
 
Good work, Jezzilee. Your (Dec. 13th) story is gently and pleasingly erotic. You pull off the changing of time frames flawlessly and leave us wondering: what happened in front of the fire the day before?
 
I've really been enjoying the stories that have been posted so far. Almost done with my Dec. 20th one, but, admittedly, I'm not thrilled with where I landed.
 
Interesting start Lustfull Intentions, I wonder if we will find out what Elsie and her cousin have in store?
Thanks
 
Interesting start Lustfull Intentions, I wonder if we will find out what Elsie and her cousin have in store?
Thanks


Thank you, Mac, I appreciate it. I admit, I felt like perhaps I was trying to do too many things at once in that story.
 
Nice submissions, Remec and Dreamcloud, I enjoyed reading them both.
Have a great Christmas
 
This was fun. I wish there were more stories to read but it was nice to see how different the writing styles and ideas were.
 
It was a shame more could not contribute, but it is a busy time of year and things build up so quickly so something has to give.
Like you IP I enjoyed reading what was submitted.
Thank you all and Merry Christmas.
 
Back
Top