looking for a writer. Loving wives/ mature cheating

[jacoblee697]

looking for a writer on my actual sex life. Loving wives/ mature cheating

I'm looking for a writer for my ideas. Me and my wife are swingers and do a lot of freaky stuff. I absolutely love the loving wives section but I think it can be a lot better. I think have a lot of good ideas and also am seeking ideas for my actual life. I would actually like to write myself. So I'd like to see more realistic stories in the living wives. More cut-to-the chase. I think most of them are very unrealistic and very often have so much extra stuff going on or leave you hanging. Also I really want to see a story, or even better, stories about a mistreates housewife who fucks one of her husbands Friends who is a hot young guy. And it should be at there home while he is at work, they live very close. Would love to give even more details. I'm likin for a story for soething that actually happened and I fantasize about very often...

 

[HeyAll]

Hello,

Just curious, but what's the enjoyment for these types of stories. In other words, what's the pay-off you're looking for, sexually speaking.

Is the cheating aspect supposed to be arousing?

 

[BurningMonkey]

For some people, the idea of cheating is very arousing in-and-of itself; there's a prurient element to "getting away" with something, just as with exhibitionism ("I flashed/fucked/sucked and didn't get caught, or didn't get punished for it") or public or "risky" sex.

Although if submitted Loving Wives such a story would crash and burn; they're quite moralistic over there. The wife would have to suffer some negative consequence from her cheating or the story would be crucified in the ratings and comments.

 

[jack30341]

Question

I hear that a lot about the "Loving Wives" category. That, if the Wife doesn't suffer a bad consequence, the story gets trashed.

Really? Wtf? I don't get that.

What's the reasoning, if any, behind that?

I'm tempted to write one where the Wife cheats, kills the Husband, and lives happily ever after.

 

[BurningMonkey]

I hear that a lot about the "Loving Wives" category. That, if the Wife doesn't suffer a bad consequence, the story gets trashed.

Really? Wtf? I don't get that.

What's the reasoning, if any, behind that?

I'm tempted to write one where the Wife cheats, kills the Husband, and lives happily ever after.

No clue. But even though this is a sex site with stories about bondage, humiliation, incest, non-consent (read "rape" by another name) and every sort of fetish and "perversion" under the sun, for some reason there is a large and vocal contingent who still feel that Marriage Is Sacred, and if someone cheats by fucking someone other than their spouse--without permission, that is--then that someone should be punished. Harshly.

And this opinion is held by some who wouldn't blink at their virgin daughter being trussed, gagged, and mouth-, pussy-, and ass-fucked and toyed repeatedly in public against her will by dozens, including both her parents, all of her uncles and aunts and cousins, and an alien with a 12" dick 4" thick and six sperm-spurting tentacles. (In fact, I think Hypoxia already did that last one...)

It's a mystery and an irony, but there it is, and who said people have to be logical?

And there are stories like you describe over there. They just don't do well in the ratings or the reviews. But if you don't care what people say about you or your story, and don't care about ratings, then you can submit whatever you want. And some do. They just turn off ratings/comments.

 

[BurningMonkey]

In fact, I'm in the middle of developing a story wherein there's a whacko Christian sect who have assumed the responsibility of doing God's Work by monitoring every Loving Wives story and trashing it unmercifully, believing with ironclad conviction that by doing so they're "upholding the sanctity of marriage". Stay tuned...

 

[Hypoxia]

And this opinion is held by some who wouldn't blink at their virgin daughter being trussed, gagged, and mouth-, pussy-, and ass-fucked and toyed repeatedly in public against her will by dozens, including both her parents, all of her uncles and aunts and cousins, and an alien with a 12" dick 4" thick and six sperm-spurting tentacles. (In fact, I think Hypoxia already did that last one...)

Not yet. Closest I got was banana slugs. I'll have to try tentacles one of these days.

And I'm working on one with a zillion kinfolk. But no cheating. Stay tuned.

 

[BurningMonkey]

Not yet. Closest I got was banana slugs.

Mmmm...banana slugs...

 

[Hypoxia]

Mmmm...banana slugs...

Right here. But no mature cheating there. Darn. Spoiler: Beware the gila monsters.

ObTopic: LW is not the place for realism. Fuck, realism has little place at LIT at all. Realistic cheating stories? Ay yi yi.

 

[BurningMonkey]

ObTopic: LW is not the place for realism. Fuck, realism has little place at LIT at all. Realistic cheating stories? Ay yi yi.

Um, I think what the OP meant by "realistic" is something (or -things) that actually happened IRL. To him. To them. I think.

And from your own experience, such experiences can go far beyond whatever imagination can conjure. After all, the difference between fiction and reality is that fiction has to be plausible.

 

[Zeb_Carter]

I'm currently tossing an idea around about a husband and wife cockroach...the only problem is she fucks all the males in the nest all the time.

Just kidding. Although for an incest story....


The best comments and highest score I received on a LW story was Reality. In the end the wife and her lover die along with the lovers wife.

Yes the guy probably goes to jail, but all those nuts in the LW loved it.

I still write LW stories but none like Reality any more. And I don't except comments or allow voting on them. I really don't care what the readers in that category think of the story. I write them for myself. I post them to fuck around with the crowd in LW.

 

[jacoblee697]

So nobody on the original material of the thread? Hell, I'll write it...

 

[BurningMonkey]

So nobody on the original material of the thread? Hell, I'll write it...

I'm interested, and sent you a PM about it, and asking for further details.
Do you not read your PMs?