A woman's revenge

Rose95

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Here's an idea I have been playing with, but I can't find the time to write it myself. I've got the whole story line, but it needs a lot of detail.

The main character is a female student, let's call her Elisabeth, who is angry at men in general for a bunch of reasons. Her dad left her mom for a younger woman, her uncle did something unspeakable to her cousin, her boyfriend stole some of her money and disappeared and last but not least her brother recently cheated on his girlfriend, who also happens to Elisabeth's best friend.

Originally she planned to have fun on Halloween (or any other event where people can wear costumes and masks), but because she is so mad, she decides to take revenge. She plans on seducing a random guy and make him pay for everything the men in her life have done wrong.

She goes into town, wearing some sort of sexy outfit and a witches mask and ends up in some frat house. There's a guy, apparently on his own, wearing a black cloak and one of those masks like they wear in the movie scream. She makes sure he notices her, moving around as sexy as she can and finally gestures him to follow her.

She takes him up to a bedroom and tells him to get down on the bed. Their voices are muffles by the masks but they can understand each other anyway.

She tells him to take of the cloak, but keep on the mask, as she doesn't want to know who he is. underneath the cloak he is just wearing boxers. She ties him down using whatever she can find in the room and then cuts his boxers off of his body.

Then she takes her own clothes off (except for her boots?), but as soon as he gets an erection, she says "Stop that" and slaps his dick or balls hard enough to make the erection go away. :caning:

She enjoys doing that, getting him aroused and then punishing him for it, so she keeps doing that for a while, but his talking annoys her. In a drawer she finds some sort of tape (duct tape?), sticks her hand under his mask and tapes his mouth shut. She leaves his mask on because she still doesn't want to know who he is.

She is getting a bit hot and her own mask partially blocks her breathing so she takes it off. When she turns around the guy tries to say something, but all she hears is mumbling.

She goes on with her game for a while, but gets turned on herself by watching the guy's cock go hard over and over again, so finally she climbs on top of him and fucks him.

When she's done, she puts on her clothes and mask and leaves, leaving the guy tied down for someone else to find.

She enjoys herself for a couple of hours, meeting friends and stuff, and finally goes home. There she meets her mom or dad who is still up, watching a movie or something, and who tells her that her brother came home early, apparently feeling sick. She doesn't care, but when she goes up to the bathroom, she finds a black cloak and the mask from scream.

Anyone interested in turning this into a complete story?
 
I was surprised to see you had no replies to this, because I think it's a powerfully imaginative scenario. I wouldn't be able to do it justice, but I'm sure someone out there will - good luck.
 
I was surprised to see you had no replies to this, because I think it's a powerfully imaginative scenario. I wouldn't be able to do it justice, but I'm sure someone out there will - good luck.

it has just been up for a few minutes. Most Lit members are probably asleep now.
 
it has just been up for a few minutes. Most Lit members are probably asleep now.


Sheer laziness. In re your story, there is a story about Chambercombe Manor in Devon, England that a ship was deliberately wrecked by one of the aristocratic robber baron inhabitants. He went down to pick through the goods and found a heavily jewelled woman still just about alive, but unrecognisable from the battering her face had taken from the rocks. He took her back to the house, stripped her of her rich clothes and jewels and laid her, still naked, on the bed. Then he went to the local tavern, to hear the whole place abuzz with the apparent death of his sister, who had been away for some years, on the ship he had destroyed. He hurried back to the house to find the woman dead. When he looked more closely at one of her rings he realised it was a family heirloom: shocked and horrified by what he had done, he plastered over the room so successfully that it was not discovered for hundreds of years. When in the 18th century new owners worked out there was a missing room, they broke down the wall to find the skeleton still lying on the four-poster bed. There are now ghost tours of the whole house, and that room in particular.

So there you are. Your female protagonist may have reason to be angry with men, but at least her brother didn't do that to her...
 
Sounds interesting.

Let me know if you want to collaborate.

And the twist ending might not make sense because wouldn't the masked man recognize her voice? Another good ending could be that it's the college dean who wanted to visit the party to have fun.
 
Sounds interesting.

Let me know if you want to collaborate.

And the twist ending might not make sense because wouldn't the masked man recognize her voice? Another good ending could be that it's the college dean who wanted to visit the party to have fun.

hence the "Their voices are muffles by the masks but they can understand each other anyway." Or she might talk with a witch-like voice to match her mask. :devil:
 
As it seems to be my latest craze here on Lit... I have a couple of thoughts about this story.

One reason the girl is pissed off at men is because her BF would force her to suck him off and she found it humiliating when he came in her mouth. Have her friends and family members also confide in her that their misfortune also surrounded either having to give head or refusing to do it (sets up the ending)

All the other stuff about the costumes and such work well, except his mask needs to allow easy access to his mouth for taping/etc. Have her borrow a friends apartment so she can set up the room before she lures a man into it. Tying the guy down and teasing/torturing him is good... very hot.

She never speaks while she is with the guy she is abusing and his mouth is taped shut so he can't do anything but produce muffled sounds of pleasure and pain.

Dominating him is an unexpected turn on for her and she mounts him and uses him as a human dildo to get herself off as much as she wants. Eventually she is unable to control him and he comes in her pussy.

Then she cuts a slit in the tape on his mouth, sits on his face, squeezes his balls and makes him eat his own cum as a payback for all the men that have made her and her friends suck their cocks.

Then she gets home and realizes she just tortured her own brother. (early in the story there needs to be something about her loving her brother and not seeing him the same way she sees other men. also it would work best if he was her younger brother.)
 
Here's an idea I have been playing with, but I can't find the time to write it myself. I've got the whole story line, but it needs a lot of detail.

The main character is a female student, let's call her Elisabeth, who is angry at men in general for a bunch of reasons. Her dad left her mom for a younger woman, her uncle did something unspeakable to her cousin, her boyfriend stole some of her money and disappeared and last but not least her brother recently cheated on his girlfriend, who also happens to Elisabeth's best friend.

Originally she planned to have fun on Halloween (or any other event where people can wear costumes and masks), but because she is so mad, she decides to take revenge. She plans on seducing a random guy and make him pay for everything the men in her life have done wrong.

She goes into town, wearing some sort of sexy outfit and a witches mask and ends up in some frat house. There's a guy, apparently on his own, wearing a black cloak and one of those masks like they wear in the movie scream. She makes sure he notices her, moving around as sexy as she can and finally gestures him to follow her.

She takes him up to a bedroom and tells him to get down on the bed. Their voices are muffles by the masks but they can understand each other anyway.

She tells him to take of the cloak, but keep on the mask, as she doesn't want to know who he is. underneath the cloak he is just wearing boxers. She ties him down using whatever she can find in the room and then cuts his boxers off of his body.

Then she takes her own clothes off (except for her boots?), but as soon as he gets an erection, she says "Stop that" and slaps his dick or balls hard enough to make the erection go away. :caning:

She enjoys doing that, getting him aroused and then punishing him for it, so she keeps doing that for a while, but his talking annoys her. In a drawer she finds some sort of tape (duct tape?), sticks her hand under his mask and tapes his mouth shut. She leaves his mask on because she still doesn't want to know who he is.

She is getting a bit hot and her own mask partially blocks her breathing so she takes it off. When she turns around the guy tries to say something, but all she hears is mumbling.

She goes on with her game for a while, but gets turned on herself by watching the guy's cock go hard over and over again, so finally she climbs on top of him and fucks him.

When she's done, she puts on her clothes and mask and leaves, leaving the guy tied down for someone else to find.

She enjoys herself for a couple of hours, meeting friends and stuff, and finally goes home. There she meets her mom or dad who is still up, watching a movie or something, and who tells her that her brother came home early, apparently feeling sick. She doesn't care, but when she goes up to the bathroom, she finds a black cloak and the mask from scream.

Anyone interested in turning this into a complete story?


Okay, I’d go for it if she seduces him doesn’t torture him at first but ties him up gags him & rides him reverse cowgirl to her satisfaction. Then as revenge to all men, she cuts off his balls & leaves him to bleed out, he screams tries to break his shackles but no one can hear him. For once the man is helpless.

Now in the street & on her way to have fun with her friends, she tosses the balls to a stray cat that hits them around and bites at them. After having fun with friends, she goes home just as her parents are running out the door to go to the hospital. “Some lunatic… someone cut off your brother balls… he’s in critical condition.”
 
Okay, I’d go for it if she seduces him doesn’t torture him at first but ties him up gags him & rides him reverse cowgirl to her satisfaction. Then as revenge to all men, she cuts off his balls & leaves him to bleed out, he screams tries to break his shackles but no one can hear him. For once the man is helpless.

Now in the street & on her way to have fun with her friends, she tosses the balls to a stray cat that hits them around and bites at them. After having fun with friends, she goes home just as her parents are running out the door to go to the hospital. “Some lunatic… someone cut off your brother balls… he’s in critical condition.”

Wow and I was thinking that having her put him in enough pain to eat his own cum was sadistic and over the top!
 
Wow and I was thinking that having her put him in enough pain to eat his own cum was sadistic and over the top!

Be honest when you’re thinking of female vengeance on an evil man, what do you picture?
Plus it’s not that bad, at least it’s not his dick.

He can still have sex; he’ll just appreciate it more and have more respect for women.
 
Then she takes her own clothes off (except for her boots?), but as soon as he gets an erection, she says "Stop that" and slaps his dick or balls hard enough to make the erection go away. :caning:

My understanding is that nurses handling coma patients in hospitals, sometimes will see a coma patient with a woody. To make the wood go away, all they have to do is flick the head from the side. It goes down in seconds.

It is not a matter of strength to make a hard-on go down and slapping the balls might have an adverse reaction; harder wood or a possible ejaculation.
 
Okay, I’d go for it if she seduces him doesn’t torture him at first but ties him up gags him & rides him reverse cowgirl to her satisfaction. Then as revenge to all men, she cuts off his balls & leaves him to bleed out, he screams tries to break his shackles but no one can hear him. For once the man is helpless.

Now in the street & on her way to have fun with her friends, she tosses the balls to a stray cat that hits them around and bites at them. After having fun with friends, she goes home just as her parents are running out the door to go to the hospital. “Some lunatic… someone cut off your brother balls… he’s in critical condition.”

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My understanding is that nurses handling coma patients in hospitals, sometimes will see a coma patient with a woody. To make the wood go away, all they have to do is flick the head from the side. It goes down in seconds.

It is not a matter of strength to make a hard-on go down and slapping the balls might have an adverse reaction; harder wood or a possible ejaculation.
Hey, I'm not a nurse. Just a girl with an idea for a story.
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I totally agree with your little blue barf bag thing. The character can be a vengeful abuser; but let's not make her become a murderer. (attempted-murder/murder ; poe-tay-toe/pa-tah-toe)

So are you looking for a writer, a co-author, or just some ideas on this one?

I'm just offering this idea to anyone who has the ability and time to turn it into a full story. I'm working on another story myself, and can hardly find the time for that one.
 
I'm just offering this idea to anyone who has the ability and time to turn it into a full story. I'm working on another story myself, and can hardly find the time for that one.

I'd write it if she gets to slice some ball-sacks. THATS REAL LIFE! Not this ticking teasing bullsheeeiiit.
 
Saying what I said above, I do believe your idea was good. However I'm just feeling a bit extreme these days, when it comes to story concepts.
 
Maybe here's some extra ideas to spice things up. What if Elizabeth first ties the guy down (not knowing it's her brother) and then lets a bunch of her friends in who are also all disappointed by/mad at men in general. The could take turns in humiliating him, using him for their own pleasure, humiliate him more, whatever. Some of these friends could be using strap-ons.

Perhaps they will not leave him tied down for someone to find, but take him somewhere else an tie him down/up there for someone to find him.

With a bit of imagination he could be punished without having to resort to physical torture.
 
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