A Poet Walks Into a Bar . . .

The roughest. I seem to have survived it, though, mostly intact. I get to continue being irresponsible for a while longer.

my sympathies - if you can't be irresponsible once in a while at your age, how else you gonna learn about being all mature and stuff? :D
 
I'm too old to be taking ibuprofen like candy. But yeah. :rose:

aw :)

and i'm too sleepy to be saying anything worthwhile right now, specially over in the metre thread so do yourself a favour and ignore me there :D i feel i've been neglecting posting anything worthwhile lately, comments or suggestions, and thought i should. yeah, i was wrong :cool:
 
aw :)

and i'm too sleepy to be saying anything worthwhile right now, specially over in the metre thread so do yourself a favour and ignore me there :D i feel i've been neglecting posting anything worthwhile lately, comments or suggestions, and thought i should. yeah, i was wrong :cool:

Your feedback is appreciated, butters.

I was attempting yet again the "unroll" thing, which only seems to work in my mind (not very useful). The idea is that deliberate line breaks and punctuation will allow different ways to form sentences with the same words. However, it doesn't really work, it seems it is just coming across like a bizarre stream of words to others. :)
 
couldn't play it! made my eyes feel sick - too much detail needing to be matched and moved too fast.

*stops writing for a moment, raises head*

It also depressed me that no matter how far I went in the game, I never reached a Doctor I knew. :(
 
Got two emails in response to feedback I left on poems. I wish more people would take the time to do so.
 
hey tso around I got a present;
Tags for Poetry
Anal
Blowjobs
Cuckold tales
Demented Unpleasurable Sex
Excrement
Foot fetish
....
Women troubles
X-you're kidding
Y-good question
Z-as in zzzzz, real snoozer

pick two, nyuk,nyuk,nyuk
 
howdy, stranger - pull up a stool

oh, wait, that might come under anal :eek: we won't go there. (wrong tag - excrement, oy)

wotcha drinkin', ritchie?
 
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hey tso around I got a present;
Tags for Poetry
Anal
Blowjobs
Cuckold tales
Demented Unpleasurable Sex
Excrement
Foot fetish
....
Women troubles
X-you're kidding
Y-good question
Z-as in zzzzz, real snoozer

pick two, nyuk,nyuk,nyuk

Not tags ........... post it and I'll give it a 5 :D
 
Only two? Well, ok... Given the options, I'll go with "women troubles" and "demented, pleasurable sex". :cool:
 
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