Incest story needs editor

[Ldy_Sea]

I have no idea what's going on with this story. It has been rejected numerous times and is the first story I've had rejected.

1 spelling found and fixed a few errors, not many
2-6 Apostrophes finally removed all except those in contractions
7-9 punctuation I can't find any obvious punctuation errors, and am tired of dealing with the rejections.
This story started as a rp found here http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=806102

I thought i had cleaned it up but guess it needs a fresh pair of eyes.

If you can help please let me know. Thanks.

 

[Bert_Fegg]

Have pm'd you my email

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Thanks.

 

[sr71plt]

You don't say what it was rejected for. Frequently here authors try to clean up areas in their rejected stories that weren't rejected for that reason. The rejection notice gives at least a hint what was considered wrong with it.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

You don't say what it was rejected for. Frequently here authors try to clean up areas in their rejected stories that weren't rejected for that reason. The rejection notice gives at least a hint what was considered wrong with it.

Actually I did...

1 spelling found and fixed a few errors, not many
2-6 Apostrophes finally removed all except those in contractions
7-9 punctuation I can't find any obvious punctuation errors, and am tired of dealing with the rejections.

 

[sr71plt]

No, that's what you said you did to try to fix it (and I noted that often authors try to fix what wasn't noted as being wrong). You didn't give us the wording of the rejection notice. We don't know what it was being rejected for until/unless the rejected author quotes the rejection notice. And, as I said, authors complaining here often haven't identified the problem correctly.

But it looks like you have someone who's going to look at it for you.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

No, that's what you said you did to try to fix it (and I noted that often authors try to fix what wasn't noted as being wrong). You didn't give us the wording of the rejection notice. We don't know what it was being rejected for until/unless the rejected author quotes the rejection notice. And, as I said, authors complaining here often haven't identified the problem correctly.

But it looks like you have someone who's going to look at it for you.

Again, yes I did...

1 spelling found and fixed a few errors, not many
2-6 Apostrophes finally removed all except those in contractions
7-9 punctuation I can't find any obvious punctuation errors, and am tired of dealing with the rejections.

The BOLD text is the reason it was rejected after clicking on the word reason under the word rejected. The normal text is what I did to FIX the story to get it accepted.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Thanks for all the offers. Someone is editing it now.


It has been posted thx