Friend wants to make friends mother pregnant

[ivn01]

Story Ideal -->Friend wants to make friends mother pregnant

Hi every one. Noobie here in this site.

My story idea is about.

Ivan a 29yr old man. who has a major crush on his friend Alex MILF/Cougar mother. His primal instinct to get or make her his. the only way he see's is to make her pregnant. the husband is cheating on his mother and so she has sexual needs. the story opens at his friends house. the pool area. mother is relaxing and suntanning. He finds her sun tanning and is mistaken as her son. she ask him to apply sun tan lotion to her back. she relax and falls asleep.

 

[Hypoxia]

How does the story end?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Why does he want her pregnant. That's a very specific fetish for a man to have and that's kinda where this story has to start. I'm also uncertain how many women would allow their adult sons to apply lotion too much more than their shoulders. It seems like an incest story that missed the intended target.

 

[ivn01]

Why does he want her pregnant. That's a very specific fetish for a man to have and that's kinda where this story has to start. I'm also uncertain how many women would allow their adult sons to apply lotion too much more than their shoulders. It seems like an incest story that missed the intended target.

lol. i got you dude. she has been receiving and sexual favors from her husband. that when she's sleep in the beach chair. his friend takes her for himself.

 

[ivn01]

she does ended up pregnant from the friend. the ending is still in the work table, any ideas?

 

[ivn01]

How does the story end?

she does ended up pregnant from the friend. the ending is still in the work table, any ideas?

 

[Sean Renaud]

No, not really because you started with the idea this guy wants her pregnant. WHY?! If it happens after the story for no reason other than because that's fine but you've listed it as a motivation.

 

[ivn01]

No, not really because you started with the idea this guy wants her pregnant. WHY?! If it happens after the story for no reason other than because that's fine but you've listed it as a motivation.

he has been going over to their home for most of his life and has fallen in love with her. he believes that by making love to her and she ends up pregnant. which will force her to leave her husband and he can rescue her and make her happy. he has seen her crying and want to show her that his a better man then alex's father.

 

[Hypoxia]

How does the story end?

she does ended up pregnant from the friend. the ending is still in the work table, any ideas?

Motivation: his desire to impregnate her
Development: he fucks her; she's preggers
Consequences: what happens now?
Resolution: none, if this is a stroker

With just his desire, and his action, you have an anecdote, a story fragment. For an actual story, something needs to happen after the fucking. Love? Hate? Obsession? Revenge? Violence? Mental breakdown? A twist?

Please don't just dangle and ending like: "he fucked her; all his dreams were fulfilled; she fell for him; they lived happy-ever-after". Actions cause reactions. Let's see what happens.

 

[ivn01]

Motivation: his desire to impregnate her
Development: he fucks her; she's preggers
Consequences: what happens now?
Resolution: none, if this is a stroker

With just his desire, and his action, you have an anecdote, a story fragment. For an actual story, something needs to happen after the fucking. Love? Hate? Obsession? Revenge? Violence? Mental breakdown? A twist?

Please don't just dangle and ending like: "he fucked her; all his dreams were fulfilled; she fell for him; they lived happy-ever-after". Actions cause reactions. Let's see what happens.

dude, thanks.
here is a preview of the story for u. Please feel free to give me your expert advice.

A hot summer Thursday in June 1990, Ivan Doe a 20yr male stand ringing the doorbell of his friend’s home. Ding Dong rang throughout the interior of the house. The breeze of the summer blew onto Ivan. He looked at his watch whiling waiting for a reply. He started too walked to the back entrance to see if there was any one in the pool. The smell of rose's filled his nostril. He could hear the sound of splashing water and laughter. He reached out to open the fence door and stopped. While standing he observed Raquel lying on a beach chair. She was wearing a sky blue bikini. The strings of the bikini enter her butt cheeks and disappeared.
The outline of her butt was his main focus from this point. He dreamed of standing behind her and massaging her and then eating her pussy out. Afterwards he would enter her warm pussy and fuck it to his hearts contempt. Sending his baby making milk into her womb; hoping it was the day when she was fertile with an egg in her womb waiting for his sperm. His primal animal instinct of breeding and spreading his family seed. which would make him the alpha male in his eyes. He couldn't see her breast due to the fact that she was lying face down. Sun tanning her back. Ivan and Alex had been friends since elementary school. They have both fought over the seat next to girl. She had happened to be a cheerleader.
Since then they both became the best of friends. They also couldn't remember the girl’s name. Sometimes the best friends argued after he caught Ivan peeping in on his mother. While she was taking a shower. That evening he had been invited to spend the night. Since it was Alex 17th birthday and he got a ps3 as a gift. Also some court side tickets to a NBA basketball game. A great gift from his father. After the basketball game both had attended. Raquel had made them dinner and also had waited up for them. At the dinner table while eating some ice scream. The two friends talked about the great game. But Ivan attention was on the short nightie that Raquel was wearing and the way it road up on her as she moved. "Okay kids, I’m going to take a shower and then go to bed. Don’t stay up to late." she said with a smile. She kissed Alex on the forehead and then walked over to Ivan. Her breasts were in his face as she also kissed him on the forehead.
He felt his blood start to fill his penis and it starting to get hard. Ivan had to move his leg so that his tent would be in her face. What he didn’t know was that Raquel had felt his penis getting hard and rubbing on her leg through his jeans. As she walked away she moved her hips as to inform Ivan of her interest. ”Dude your mom is a hot MILF.” Ivan said still looking at swaying ass. "I challenge you to a game of basketball on the new system." Alex says. "You’re on dude." Ivan replied. After 20 minutes of continual playing.
"Dude I’m going to get some water." Ivan told him. "Yeah okay." he shakes his head and starts a new game. Ivan exits the room and walks down the hall. Passing the bathroom, He hear Raquel in there shower and also he can’t tell if she moaning. The door wasn’t completely closed and the sweet smell of her bath soap. The view was making his penis twitch inside of his shorts, pushing the door open a little bit more to get a better view. The outline of her body, he was able to see through the glass door of the shower. She was facing him but wasn't able to see him due to having her eyes closed. The feeling of Ivan’s hard penis on her leg had made her horny. He watches her rubbing her vaginal lips and caresses her tits. He could see she had three fingers inside of her pussy.
He starts to rub his hard on as he looks at hear. With her moaning and movement of her hips. Ivan could tell she was about to reach organism. He wanted to shoot his jizm with her. The sprinkle of the water from the shower. Added a erotic gleam to her body.
"Are you just going to stand there Alex" Raquel stated. Think it’s her son. "Can you do me a favor and apply some lotion on my back. Mommy doesn't want to get a bad sun tan. She passed him the bottle and he reached out and grabbed it. He squeezed the bottle and the lotion squired on her back. "Mm mm. that's cold." she moves a little to give him leverage and so he can cover her body with lotion. His hand massaged the lotion onto her skin and he could hear her starting to moan. Her reaction to his messaging was to moan. His hands move down her shoulder blades and reached the beginning of her butt. His penis started to grow inside of his shorts.
As he continues to apply her lotion. Raquel falls asleep and spreads her legs apart. He loosens her bikini top string tie to continue the application of the lotion. With his hard on making it hard for him to stand. Ivan moves his hand into his shorts and starts to jerk off. He loosens the belt and lets his short fall to the floor. He moves to where he can better view of her but and her womanhood lips. Having walked safely and holding his cock in hand while jerking off. He arrives to his destination. He placed himself straddling her legs at the ledge of the beach chair. Leaving his shorts on floor beneath her toes; Raquel’s vaginal lips were visible and compressed under her bikini. Creating a great outline of a camel toe.
The patch which covers her lips was wet. Ivan moved his head close to her pussy and inhaled to get her sweet aroma and he licked it. The heat from her pussy covered his face as he licked her and inhales her aroma, causing him to pump faster on his cock. The skin to his penis is covered with the lotion, making it smoother to jerk off. He looks up to see if Raquel had woken up. The same outline of her pussy was there and in front of him this time. This time he had a closer look at it and is able to touch. He couldn't taste her sweet honey nectar due to the material. He thinks of lowering her bikini down. While tracing her vaginal lips with his fingers, He begins pushing the material into her. The material only goes in a ¼ of an inch. As he pull his finger a dampness outlines the material were his finger had applied pressure. His nerves are over powered by his lust for Raquel’s body. He grabs the bikini bottom and slides it down, continuing to massage the lotion onto her skin. Her skins become shiny from the lotion. He jumps as she moves to his actions.
What would he say if she wakes to him holding his enlarged penis on top of her? Or would she call the cops and also informed his friend Alex. Also her hips were uncovered and her vagina is visible to anyone. A drop of pre-cum dropped on her butt from his penis head. Ivan leans forward as if he was going to do a push up with Raquel under him. He starts to rub his penis on her skin. “mmm.” She moans. As his penis is rubbed up and down her back, as he reaches the arch of her butt. To some one on the street it looked as duo, he was dry humping her back. As Ivan continued to dry hump his friend’s mother back. The sensation became too much. His penis started to rock and pulse as he shot his jizm on her back. “mum...” she moan in a sleepy voice. Ivan bit down on his lips and closed his eyes. The jizm settled on her between her shoulder blades.
As he moved his hips down her back a trail of his sperm followed from his penis head. When he reached the end of her butt, he was now looking at the inner liner of her bikini bottom. Having pulled it down to add sun tan lotion on her. Raquel started to move her hips in an erotic movement. While she moves; he can pull her bikini completely off. He pulls the bikini even lower and leaves it stretched on her thighs. Moving one leg at a time to position himself inside the space created. He goes to his knees while continuing to look at Raquel. His view is amazing, the beautiful view of her womanhood. He leans his tongue forward and licks it, he stops every time to make sure she hasn’t awaken. She started to grind her hips and a clear liquid oozes out of her pussy. He scoops it up with his tongue and enjoys the sweet taste of her honey nectar. To his supervise her hand moves down and starts to play with herself. She separates her pussy lips. The inner colors of her vagina reminded him of a peach. She started to moan more and oozes more liquid. His primal beast is telling him to insert his penis and make her his.

 

[MyRubiLips]

That is an awefully long "preview". Please refrain from posting stories in Story Ideas. Thank you!

 

[ivn01]

That is an awefully long "preview". Please refrain from posting stories in Story Ideas. Thank you!

I am very sorry if i broke the rule. its just that when i started writing it down on word. i couldn't stop.

 

[Hypoxia]

I am very sorry if i broke the rule. its just that when i started writing it down on word. i couldn't stop.

Once a story starts speaking, it's hard to shut it up, eh?

 

[ivn01]

Once a story starts speaking, it's hard to shut it up, eh?

your right. more if its your 1st. lol

What are your thoughts of the story so far?

here are my answer's to your questions.
Q->Motivation: his desire to impregnate her;
A->His motivation is to become her alpha male, his desire to have her carry his baby, to give her lots of pleasure, since her husband wasn't, his love/lust for her since the age of 14, having seen her crying while he was invited to sleepovers.

Q->Development: he fucks her; she's preggers
A->He has sexual interaction with her, she discovers that she also has a hidden lust for him, due to the lack of sex from her husband. her biological clock is counting down and causing her to lust for a strong cock inside of her.

Q->Consequences: he is hated by his best friend, shun by his father,
A->she tells her family of the baby, she is also shun by her son and daughter after discovery of who is the father.

Q->Resolution:
A-> he will raise the child with her, he will try to win his friend back. she will gain the love of her kids back, she will apply for divorce. his family will help with the baby. she plans to return to work so they can buy a house of their own.

 

[Hypoxia]

What are your thoughts of the story so far?

Your plot seems workable. Your posted text is more a treatment or scenario than a story -- LOTS of work is needed there. As for your proposed ending:

Q->Resolution:
A-> he will raise the child with her, he will try to win his friend back. she will gain the love of her kids back, she will apply for divorce. his family will help with the baby. she plans to return to work so they can buy a house of their own.

It looks like you're headed for HEA (Happily Ever After) which is certainly a valid if rather vanilla way to finish. But I like twist endings. Can you think of some non-vanilla twists? Maybe DNA tests reveal that the MILF is actually our protagonist's long-lost aunt on older sister or whatever.

 

[ivn01]

Your plot seems workable. Your posted text is more a treatment or scenario than a story -- LOTS of work is needed there. As for your proposed ending:



It looks like you're headed for HEA (Happily Ever After) which is certainly a valid if rather vanilla way to finish. But I like twist endings. Can you think of some non-vanilla twists? Maybe DNA tests reveal that the MILF is actually our protagonist's long-lost aunt on older sister or whatever.

cool twist to the ending. i was think of her being his biological mother, but his aunt and only finds out from the DNA. possible more seduction of female family members. I'll have more sexual interactions between them and this will spice it up. maybe each day will end in a none vanilla way.

example:
1st -> he finds out about her secret crush for him/ they have sex while she sleeps/ in powering his want for her / he's worry of getting caught and her reactions.
2nd day-> he seduces her in the bedroom / he is regret by her.
3rd day -> she notices her period is over due/ she remembers the dream / she visits her Doctor and finds out she pregnant / also finds out he's her child. who she put up for adoption <- thks to u
4th day -> they sit down and talk/ she tells him of their situation.

Dude like always thank you.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I am very sorry if i broke the rule. its just that when i started writing it down on word. i couldn't stop.

I shall refer you to a thread "stickied" to the top of this board by RisiaSkye. Thank you.

 

[ivn01]

I shall refer you to a thread "stickied" to the top of this board by RisiaSkye. Thank you.

dude how are you. I'm just getting home from work and decided to look at the post on my thread. I will check it out.

 

[robertreams]

Hold on folks! lots of men have traditionally impregnated women to keep them under control. it is not such a far stretch to have the pregnancy be the fetish. In fact, I have heard of another story in which this occurs. A great ending would be to have her run away with the son because he has such great hands.

 

[Reshbod]

I like this idea and see it going a couple of ways. First, He could have a impregnation fetish and wants to watch as his handiwork progresses. Second, he could just not care and refuse taking precautions and let what happens happen.

One think I would change would be the state of the couples marriage. If they are in a bad relationship, then the cheating seems inevitable and and there's really not the tension of will she or won't she.

If they are in a good relationship and content, then it adds drama and when she does give in it's has more impact. Of course, this is just my opinion and many do not share it.

 

[ivn01]

I like this idea and see it going a couple of ways. First, He could have a impregnation fetish and wants to watch as his handiwork progresses. Second, he could just not care and refuse taking precautions and let what happens happen.

One think I would change would be the state of the couples marriage. If they are in a bad relationship, then the cheating seems inevitable and and there's really not the tension of will she or won't she.

If they are in a good relationship and content, then it adds drama and when she does give in it's has more impact. Of course, this is just my opinion and many do not share it.

Cool. thks dude..

 

[southbound395]

this sounds intruiging

I likethe idea behind this story and where it *might* be going, looking forward to reading it when you get it finished (or close to finished).
Please update us when you do post this.
And thank you for sharing

 

[ivn01]

I likethe idea behind this story and where it *might* be going, looking forward to reading it when you get it finished (or close to finished).
Please update us when you do post this.
And thank you for sharing

updated story is in story feedback area.

 

[ivn01]

Why does he want her pregnant. That's a very specific fetish for a man to have and that's kinda where this story has to start. I'm also uncertain how many women would allow their adult sons to apply lotion too much more than their shoulders. It seems like an incest story that missed the intended target.

updated story is in story feedback area. please check and add your comments..