I have two stories in need of a once-over - can you help a brother out?

[Chimney Sweep]

I have two stories in need of a once-over - NOW WITH RELEVANT DATA!

Howdy!

I have two stories ready to go but I am hoping to find an editor to give them a read before I release them. I have read and re-read these two, looking for errors and boo boos and gremlins and I can't find any more.

I am looking for an editor to find any glaring mistakes in grammar or spelling or pace or word usage. I don't need help in plot or character or any of that business, but I am open to any constructive criticism. These are 99% done and just need that final polish.

Both stories are further chapters of this:

http://www.literotica.com/s/in-charge-ch-01

Length is similar to the link above. Erotic couplings. The general plot is: two lovers take turn being the boss of the shenanigans for the evening. Chapter 1 is published. chapter 2 has her in charge using a stack of cards for her instructions, and chapter three has him in charge again but with a more impromptu execution.

Thanks! And to all the editors who have helped me over the years (I have been posting here for about ten years now) THANKS AGAIN!

-CS

 

[robertreams]

Howdy!

I have two stories ready to go but I am hoping to find an editor to give them a read before I release them. I have read and re-read these two, looking for errors and boo boos and gremlins and I can't find any more.

I am looking for an editor to find any glaring mistakes in grammar or spelling or pace or word usage. I don't need help in plot or character or any of that business, but I am open to any constructive criticism. These are 99% done and just need that final polish.

Both stories are further chapters of this:

http://www.literotica.com/s/in-charge-ch-01

Length is similar to the link above. Erotic couplings. The general plot is: two lovers take turn being the boss of the shenanigans for the evening. Chapter 1 is published. chapter 2 has her in charge using a stack of cards for her instructions, and chapter three has him in charge again but with a more impromptu execution.

Thanks! And to all the editors who have helped me over the years (I have been posting here for about ten years now) THANKS AGAIN!

-CS

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