yesterday

butters

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i was planning on traveling up to visit with friends for a few days, but earlier this week she called me from the hospital where they'd just spent all night getting her hubby sorted - a broken wrist and broken collar bone, left and right - since her mum and dad had decided to come stay to help while he was incapacitated (her mum's something akin to a dementor) i decided to give it a miss this time and go visit later.

so

yesterday, around midday i decided to grab my jacket and head off to the train station, and caught a train to the coast. the weather was absolutely perfect for me - cool but not cold, bright, a few puffy clouds, a little breezy.

i had the most relaxing time. the light, the water, the tide being fully in as i arrived and leaving the beach and flats bare but shimmering, not too many people, the walk out onto the long pier (1.33 miles) and the bowl of blue sky all overhead and around me ... sigh. as the sun began to dip and the tide receded, the exposed sand banks looked as if someone had varnished them. there were intricate ripple-marks like the patterning on boot soles... but best of all, apart from the breeze lifting my hair and my spirits, were the colours

the vast expanses of blue reflecting sky, the buff of the wet sand, and as the sun dipped the transitory moments as the iced-blues turned to pinks and lilac, a pale peach flush on the western horizon and the deeper blues as i looked out across towards norway and sweden. a great ship out there lit up as its huge upper decks of white blazed a neon pink

and i just wanted to capture it all. paint it, record it somehow, write a poem to keep it. my phone's battery had died before the best of the show, but i managed to get a few shots earlier in the day. i don't think i could ever capture what i saw, not to do it any justice. to try would only be a frustrating exercise, especially considering the changing nature of the piece as i saw it.

i felt so enormously happy out there, alone on the pier (well, alone except for the odd few people passing by), and felt as if i were in the very center of all of that wonderfulness. of course, that's only because all points radiated out from where i was standing, in my viewpoint. i'm not ashamed to say that tears of real pleasure brimmed and spilled as i turned full circle on the wooden decking, arms out as the soft-mottled backs of various sea-birds hovered close to the pier before sweeping off to chase their fleet, dark reflections across the flats.

it's the best experience i have had in ages. i truly wish you could have all seen it, felt it, been as filled to the brim as i was with its beauty.
 
thankyou, gm, one day it might happen. yesterday i was ablaze with snatches of phrase, alight with possibilities... but the more i saw the more overwhelming it became and that inner monologue grew stilled as silence overtook me. perhaps it'll filter down and fragments here and there will find their way into writes. :eek:
 
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there was one less-than glorious moment: at the end of the pier they were hosting an art exhibition. oh cool, i thought. nuh huh - pretty cheap, uneventful photos for £500, some messed about with close-ups of a mouth pulling expressions in andy warholish colours/crops for £80 a pop, and some really ... well rubbish paintings they were asking £1000 each for. of the whole exhibit (mostly the same artist) there were only 2 pieces i quite liked, one of them a painting. worth about £30 tops to me :rolleyes:

just goes to show you can't beat nature's natural beauty. :D
 
yesterday, around midday i decided to grab my jacket ........ arms out as the soft-mottled backs of various sea-birds hovered close to the pier before sweeping off to chase their fleet, dark reflections across the flats.

Now this is prose poetry - poetic prose - or what have you. I'm not part of that particular discussion but the choice of language and imagery makes this more than just prose IMHO - lovely, thanks, chippers.
 
thankyou, tess. i just wish it did the experience one tenth of how it was. flat out one of those 'you had to be there' times.
 
it's the best experience i have had in ages. i truly wish you could have all seen it, felt it, been as filled to the brim as i was with its beauty.
Now, if we were all there, the pier would have collapsed and we would have been in the drink

there was one less-than glorious moment: at the end of the pier they were hosting an art exhibition. oh cool, i thought. nuh huh - pretty cheap, uneventful photos for £500, some messed about with close-ups of a mouth pulling expressions in andy warholish colours/crops for £80 a pop, and some really ... well rubbish paintings they were asking £1000 each for. of the whole exhibit (mostly the same artist) there were only 2 pieces i quite liked, one of them a painting. worth about £30 tops to me
but, at least i was
 
Now, if we were all there, the pier would have collapsed and we would have been in the drink


but, at least i was
:cool:

some pics from before the battery died:
 

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Lovely indeed, both words and images. I live at the coast and sometimes take those scenes for granted. Thanks for reminding me of the beauty.
 
Lovely indeed, both words and images. I live at the coast and sometimes take those scenes for granted. Thanks for reminding me of the beauty.
ah! so happy you enjoyed them. if only the battery hadn't died....
 
ah! so happy you enjoyed them. if only the battery hadn't died....
too be sure, the pictures are nice, but don't do the words justice

get rid of this: 1.33
one and a third or mile and a third, or just a mile
oops thought i was over in new poems for a minute
 
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