Her Big 'O' - the noises ??

[Cruel2BKind]

Why did you limit this to female orgasm?

Men tend to be a lot less vocal during sex. (I hate it when guys in porn force it, trying to keep saying 'Fuck yeah! Uh! Uh! over and over. It's very fake.) But guys still make noses. In fact, I think if you're able to capture the desperation, or the need of the sounds in your story, it's a win. It's less about the dialogue and the phonetics than just trying ot get across the feel, the looks on their faces, etc.

 

[sr71plt]

Why did you limit this to female orgasm?

I don't.

Men tend to be a lot less vocal during sex.

I almost posted earlier that I've been know to howl during sex (or at least at climax).

(I hate it when guys in porn force it, trying to keep saying 'Fuck yeah! Uh! Uh! over and over. It's very fake.)

Don't be too sure it's fake all that much of the time. I don't think most men become flowery and poetic in the throes of lust. I think the "fuckmefuckme" often is about the limit they can manage--and then the purpose was to convey exactly what was voiced: "I know I'm moaning and groaning but that doesn't mean I want you to stop." Sometimes it's all I could manage. And I have college degrees out the yazooo.

I think it goes back to basic male/female perspective responses. I think females think about what their partner is getting out of it more than men generally do. So, with men, communication would be more limited . . . generally.

 

[lovecraft68]

I'm actually pretty damn eloquent, even at the final moments.

I think this is from years of being the top and having a very verbally degrading style. I used to make it a point to stand there and carry on a conversation while getting a blow job.

The point was to always make sure I would throw out there, that that was how lousy they were, they couldn't even get me to moan.

Even though I don,t necessarily do that to often with the wife, its like I'm trained that way now. I just don't lose control.

 

[Cruel2BKind]

I don't.



I almost posted earlier that I've been know to howl during sex (or at least at climax).



Don't be too sure it's fake all that much of the time. I don't think most men become flowery and poetic in the throes of lust. I think the "fuckmefuckme" often is about the limit they can manage--and then the purpose was to convey exactly what was voiced: "I know I'm moaning and groaning but that doesn't mean I want you to stop." Sometimes it's all I could manage. And I have college degrees out the yazooo.

I think it goes back to basic male/female perspective responses. I think females think about what their partner is getting out of it more than men generally do. So, with men, communication would be more limited . . . generally.

Well, I addressed the first question to the OP, sorry for the misunderstanding. I'm not critizizing the way you write, and I admit that I have never seen real live gay sex so I'm not sure what happens. Porn doesn't count, and neither do accounts of voyuerism unless the viewer is truly unseen. We act differently when we know we're being watched.

I'm basing my description of male noises during sex on my own limited experience. I have since found out that there is a vestigial evolutionary reason why women are more vocal during sex. So men are less vocal during sex. There are certainly exceptions. And men who play it up because they think it's sexy or expected. But personally, every guy I've been with has been pretty nonvocal and fairly quiet. (except near the end. Even the quiet ones can be a bit... Explosive )

 

[MattblackUK]

The noise my wife often makes is

"Please, Matt! Stop shouting! I KNOW you love it when you are inside me, but I am not sure our neighbours need to know that!"

Apparently whispering terms of endearment at that volume can be a bit off putting! ;.)

 

[lance gt]

The most vocal either gender is, is at the beginning. The more aroused and excited the couple become, primal needs become the importance and words come at a premium. Breathing hard and concentrating on all the sensations, makes it difficult to form sentences, so very little is actually spoken, in between grunts and groans. Apres sex is 5 minutes of catching your breath and hopefully orgasmic euphoria, so little is said during that phase either. Fucking doesn't come with dialogue, but lots of BDSM fun is built on it.

 

[Handley_Page]

"Please, Matt! Stop shouting! I KNOW you love it when you are inside me, but I am not sure our neighbours need to know that!"

Apparently whispering terms of endearment at that volume can be a bit off putting! ;.)

Can I quote that line sometime please ?
Funniest thing I've heard in ages

 

[sr71plt]

Can I quote that line sometime please ?
Funniest thing I've heard in ages

I think we should poll the neighbors before jumping to any hasty conclusions about what they want to hear or not.

 

[AllardChardon]

The sounds of lovemaking are wonderfully stimulating to the ears, but hard to put down on paper. I usually resort to words for the full effect.

"Oh yes, give it all to me, you know I love it, so," she breathlessly said a moment before her orgasm took control.

 

[sr71plt]

"Oh yes, give it all to me, you know I love it, so," she breathlessly said a moment before her orgasm took control.

I find that too detached for erotica. I've got to write something that has a chance of putting the reader in the middle of the experience.

 

[AllardChardon]

Just to be clear, the words are used at the end of a very long and physically descriptive lovemaking scene, one that is specifically designed to include the reader, and works as a catalyst to the big blast off for both of them. You see, my main character is a man, who waits for his lover to come, before taking his own pleasure. After so much sexy description, a few well-placed words have great impact. IMO

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I like how TEX writes it: TEX ROLLED OVER, LIT UP A CIGARETTE, AND EXHALED, "HOW WAS IT BABY?" Hearing no sounds he pulled open the nightstand drawer, felt around for the mirror, switched on the light, and stuck the mirror under her nose.

TEX is a realist.

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Sample of my dialogue, turn away if you're afraid that 'the gay' will burn your eyes.


"No more! D-Darryl I'm gonna! I'm gonna come."

Darryl backed away and gently rubbed Jared's thigh as he trembled and gasped, precome falling in drops to the blanket. Jared's breaths slowed, and his face was bright red.

"Sorry for shouting Darryl. I...I just didn't want it to be o-over."

Darryl chuckled. "Oh baby, I am so hard right now. I'm gonna fuck your sweet little ass so hard..."

Darryl straitened and rubbed his cock against Jared's buttock so the boy could feel how hard he was. Jared trembled. "Please Darryl... Please fuck me. Please be gentle though."

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Sample of my dialogue, turn away if you're afraid that 'the gay' will burn your eyes.


"No more! D-Darryl I'm gonna! I'm gonna come."

Darryl backed away and gently rubbed Jared's thigh as he trembled and gasped, precome falling in drops to the blanket. Jared's breaths slowed, and his face was bright red.

"Sorry for shouting Darryl. I...I just didn't want it to be o-over."

Darryl chuckled. "Oh baby, I am so hard right now. I'm gonna fuck your sweet little ass so hard..."

Darryl straitened and rubbed his cock against Jared's buttock so the boy could feel how hard he was. Jared trembled. "Please Darryl... Please fuck me. Please be gentle though."

Seems like two galz with a strapon pretending to be guys.

 

[lovecraft68]

The last words a woman cries out to JBJ is

"That''ll be $50"

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

The last words a woman cries out to JBJ is

"That''ll be $50"

In your case, what they say is, Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

 

[lovecraft68]

In your case, what they say is, Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Damn straight they do, I wear their asses out.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

Damn straight they do, I wear their asses out.

In that case lemme change your name to SANDMAN.

 

[lovecraftsworld]

In that case lemme change your name to SANDMAN.

The Neil Gaiman version? I'll take that.

But you can keep the Marvel Comics version and that lame version Kirby came out with.

Ooops! Oh, whatever this id isn't secret.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I'm thinking of writing a multi-chapter tale about an old numnutz range-lizard we'll call TEX-RFD. By day he sits on a milk crate peeling spuds for oil crews, but by nite, with a quart of Mad Dog 20/20 stowed aboard, he slithers about the cactus and creosote and mesquite in search of Poon Tang.

 

[lovecraft68]

I'm thinking of writing a multi-chapter tale about an old numnutz range-lizard we'll call TEX-RFD. By day he sits on a milk crate peeling spuds for oil crews, but by nite, with a quart of Mad Dog 20/20 stowed aboard, he slithers about the cactus and creosote and mesquite in search of Poon Tang.

You can get more than one chapter out of that?

 

[sr71plt]

You can get more than one chapter out of that?

Since he never actually writes it down, his mind can chop it up into as many imaginary chapters as required.

 

[lovecraft68]

Since he never actually writes it down, his mind can chop it up into as many imaginary chapters as required.

But if a story is never written, is it really a story?

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

You can get more than one chapter out of that?

His Care Bear boxers are good for 10 chapters by themselves. I can do a few chapters on his bottle of STRETCH GENIE! Just spray STRETCH GENIE on the place that needs to enlarge, attach the STRETCH GENIE EXPANDER to the affected place, give it overnite to work, and voila!

 

[mynameisben]

My characters are always silent during sex, but I do have them send text messages to each other to express their suppressed vocal responses to pleasure. The content of those text messages is never revealed, leaving long strings of ooh's and aah's or anything else entirely to the reader's imagination. It's sexier that way.