wife exhib/loving wife slow developement

[diedra13]

trophy..don't they just serve their purpose..I think htat the term brings up the thoughts of a woman that is there for appearances..maybe marries some schmuck who has a lot of money and screws him in order to maintain a plush lifestyle. to me having a beautiful wife that youa re proud of is a different story. some people let their sig others have these relationships because they cannot have the sex themselves (med issues). I also talk to my husband about this situation..he states that he wants me to be happy, but I also wonder how he would feel if I did seek this out so I am careful. maybe that struggle...scanerios that could occur if she does stray...what if it is a trophy who is denied pleasure so much but needs to feel that passion....is it looked upon so poorly if a woman acts out when she is denied so often...just a few thoughts on the post..

 

[nakdsub]

Certainly, sex like everything else in life, is subject to, different strokes for different folks. I have known my share of people who do not mind if their husband or wife has another sex partner. I guess it comes down to; what sex with your significant other, means to you.
I have been a bachelor most of my life, but I have been engaged several times and married once. FOR ME; sex with someone I don't love is a physical release, but sex with the person I love is much more emotional. It carries with it, the ultimate intimacy and affection that should only be shared between a man and his wife. It is the entire essence of my love for that person and it should never, ever be shared. But that's me!
I don't care how casual a man and wife is about it, "just being sex," there is always a danger that it will lead to an emotional tie and, therefore; the very real chance of losing your spouse.
I have seen it first hand many times. I was even an unknowing part of a situation many years ago. I was dating a woman with whom I had enjoyed wonderful sex. We were pretty hot and heavy for about six months. It started as a casual thing mostly for the sex, but after awhile we both started to have feeling for each other. It was at that point, that she told me she was married! She told me because her husband and found out she was seeing someone and gave her an ultimatum, him or me. She wondered if we had a future together. He thought we did until that point. If she cheated on him with me, what would prevent her from cheating on me with someone else in the future.

 

[hpycpl]

WOW, this thread has evolved into a hot bed of ideas and ideals! very inspiring!

I think all these points of view, reasons for sex, the thoughts/needs for cheating, etc. are exactly what makes this subject so interesting. What so many of you have listed here is what makes a very good argument for a story that developes slowly and explores what the mind set of each of the characters is as they push their moral envelopes. Exploring these feelings and the motives behind the actions is the difference between a great story and a penthouse letter that everyone jumps into bed at the drop of a hat.

If only we could find a writer that would be willing to take on a project like this...LOL

 

[hpycpl]

We have once again gone to the bottom of page two. I think a post to bring us back to the top might be well served.J

I still would like to find a writer that would like to take on this task. I'm beginning to think that I should maybe be posting under another board, I just thought that this would be the appropriate place to find someone to write these stories. If this should be posted elsewhere please let me know.

Either way we still can have conversation about it!

 

[hpycpl]

maybe this will help

I have attached a pic for inspiration. This is the type of wife I was thinking of to be the main character. I have many other pics we could use and also list the story in the illustrated section.

 

[nakdsub]

Yeah well...

if you're willing to share that with other guys you're just absolutely NUTS!

 

[hpycpl]

Thanks for the left handed compliment nakedsub.

Just for the record, I'm NOT willing to share my wife. Now that that's cleared up, I think you fail to realize that a fantasy is just that...a fantasy. There are a lot of things that I have imagined that I would never follow through on. In fact most times when I am having sexual fantasies or reading a story about loving wives, My wife is the furthest thing from my mind. I'm sure that most of the readers who read rape or incest stories would never commit incest or rape even if given the chance.

The fact that I'm looking for someone to write a LW story doesn't mean I want them to write about me or that I want to share my wife!

I apologize to all if I have given the impression that I was looking to have someone write about my relationship.

 

[nakdsub]

You didn't see my happy face?

My comment, hpycpl, was strictly a joke. That's why I put the little happy face there. I also write LW stories but would never want my wife to cheat on me.
Please don't take offense, it was not meant to be mean spirited.

PS. You have a gorgeous wife, and I do mean that as a compliment.

 

[hpycpl]

Thanks for the compliment and thanks for clearing the air. I very often loose the intent of text and I obviously have misunderstood your post.

ps I think she's gorgeous too!

 

[BuckyDuckman]

Stay out of my psychosis, LOL!

of a man believing it's okay for his wife to screw another man. Take it from the guy who broke the nose and knocked out a tooth of the man he caught with his wife. Are they really, (really) that many men out there that get turned on by watching their wife fuck someone else. I just find that so hard to believe.
From a woman's stand point, could you ever love or respect a man who allows you to have sex with another?

Sub, I couldn't disagree with you more. There are lots of guys who are turned on by their wife fucking someone else and for lots of reasons.

• Sometimes, it's because a guy believes his wife is mostly frigid - and fears it's somehow "his" fault. If she gets it from someone else, maybe it was spur a sexual awakening in her?
• Or, what better way to confirm your "hold" over a woman than to let her stray? "Go ahead, baby. Get it from anyone else, but the best you're going to get is from me."
• Or, the whole "set it free" concept: if you love something, set it free, if it comes back...
• Or, for the simple thrill of seeing someone you love exploring and enriching their life.
• Or, the man has bisexual tendencies and can experience the thrill without being with another man via a cream-pie.
• Or, the old stand-by, "When mama's happy, everyone's happy."

I think there's a huge difference between love, sex, and ownership. You can love without owning. You can own without loving. And you can substitute the word "sex" freely in those two sentences.

 

[hpycpl]

I've been away for a bit and I am somewhat disappointed that there hasn't been any activity on this thread..... ;-(

I hope that there is still some interest in this plot line and maybe someone will be willing to take on writing one of these stories.

I know I may sound like I'm crying in my soup a little but I thought I needed to post something in order to bring this thread back to page one and get some attention!

Pretty sleazy I know, but what better place to get sleazy than Lit? Right ?? lol

 

[jeninflorida]

well not sure when was the last time you visited the story section, but I'm sure a hundred "loving wife" stories were added .... if not more

 

[iadoremywife]

I know what you mean about slow. Check out my post "Almost there"

 

[HeyAll]

Thanks Hotsnatch.

The problem is getting a good writer that will take the time to develop some one else's idea. This is the first time I tried posting an idea here though, I hope I get good results.
It seems that all the better writers are flooded with people asking for their own personal fantasy to be made into a story.

I wish I could write, I tried a couple times but no luck. I'm a good editor though...lol

Thanks for the vote of confidence.

I think you should keep trying.

Your layout of the story is good, and I think if you really thought about it from the male character's point of view, you could really turn it into a great story. I could give you tips of writing if you need any.

btw, I think switching points of view is a bad idea. A few stories have done it, and i don't think it works very well. It breaks the erotic vibes because the same scene is being repeated.

 

[hpycpl]

Hi All,
This is just a shameless bump to get this thread up to the top again in hopes that someone new will get to see these ideas and want to write one!

anyone care to venture a try?

 

[Tmmldr]

....

Mr. Smith doesn’t know why but does notice his son’s interest in his studies and gives Jill a generous tip telling her he likes the fact that his son is now seemingly interested in schoolwork.

The next week Jill dresses for Jack but is careful to bring something to cover-up with for the lesson afterward. The kid (Tom) is not as attentive to his studies and lacks any enthusiasm. Mr. Smith notices it too and there is no tip that week......

I like it because there's a manipulation by the kid, and he can crank it up at will. Suppose, for example, that the kid figures out that the game is for him to do well on a quiz, then Dad pays a tip sized on how well he does. Suppose in reality, he's not dumb at all but quite bright, and just not interested in the studies.

One Weds he tells the tutor to take her blouse and bra off. He swears to her that if she does, he'll ace the quiz coming up. She does, he does, and Dad gives her a big tip. This progresses. Soon anything goes. She poses all kinds of ways at his request. She gets to move into a position every time he says just a few words, and she loves it. He's very polite and nice to her.

The tutor sessions change. Kid starts just directing tutor in things to do, how to do lap dances, all kinds of stuff. Just for fun, of course. He knows and she knows that it's okay.

They've known each other for six months or a year, they are comfortable with each other. And the money's great for tutor. The son gets a private stripper and dancer once a week. Tutor gets really hot and wet during the sessions. Tutor's husband gets fucked like he never has before.

 

[GDOGGUNIT]

Here is the fantasy that I’ve been conjuring up that I think would make a great story. It may be lengthy but I think it will be good in the end. This may seem like I’m trying to compose this myself but I am an editor and by no means a writer. I do have some thoughts on where I think the plot should go.

There is a couple, Jack and Jill (any names will do)married for ten years. Jack as of late is into having his wife dress sexy and revealing for him whenever they go out, enjoying his view and appreciating the looks she gets from men. They had started going out to eat every Wednesday night, their “date night” in hopes of keeping their closeness that all their married friends had seemed to loose.

Here I thought a segment about a night out with sexy exposure and teasing followed by some hot sex to show the fun that was enjoyed by both. Maybe a POV from both. It would be good to show a little reluctance on Jill’s part turning into eventual enjoyment

The bad economy had started to take its toll on Jack’s business and they had to cut back on many things but they resolved to keep their weekly date. They both enjoyed each others company and Jack wasn’t about to loose his one night a week to show off his wife. Money was getting so tight that they started to consider Jill getting a job. As luck would have it a girlfriend of Jill’s let her know that her boss was looking for a tutor for his college student son. Apparently this kid was flunking out of school and his worst subject was American literature which was Jill’s major in college. The boss was willing to pay big bucks to have his kid pass.

Jill’s friend made an appointment for her with her boss and Jill kept it just to see if it would be worth it to tutor this wayward kid. When she met Mr. Smith she could tell he was very rich and very demanding by the clothes he wore and the way he treated his employees. He checked out her credentials and was satisfied that she would be able to the job. The matter of pay was a little different from what Jill expected. She would only be paid a minimum amount but there would be very lucrative bonuses paid for good grades. The setup was laid out so that smaller bonuses would be given for in class quizzes, and bigger bonuses for tests and a large bonus for midterm and semester grades, the better the grade the bigger the bonus. The boss explained that the only night she would be able to tutor the boy would be Wednesdays evenings as the other nights were taken up by football practice and another night class. Jill accepted the job. Mr. Smith told her he would be in contact with her to let her know when she could start.

Jill told Jack and he was very disappointed about loosing his Wednesdays. She assured him that they could still go out and she could go tutor after especially now that there was extra money coming in. That was ok with Jack.

One Wednesday while out on their “date night” Jill got a call on her cell. It was Mr. Smith and he wanted Jill to start that night. With him being the demanding type Jill couldn’t say no so she said she would be there at nine. As usual for their Wednesdays she was dressed very sexy a tight see thru top with a plunging neckline sweater over it with some skin tight pants and stiletto high heels. There would be no time to change before she went to the Smith’s but she figured she could just be careful about the neckline and it would be fine for that night. The son is handsome and built good and kind of a wise guy. That night he’s very attentive to the lessons and even more attentive to Jill’s chest. Jill notices and does her best to not flash, but blows it off as she thinks this young kid could never be interested in her.



Mr. Smith doesn’t know why but does notice his son’s interest in his studies and gives Jill a generous tip telling her he likes the fact that his son is now seemingly interested in schoolwork.

The next week Jill dresses for Jack but is careful to bring something to cover-up with for the lesson afterward. The kid (Tom) is not as attentive to his studies and lacks any enthusiasm. Mr. Smith notices it too and there is no tip that week.

The following week again Jill dresses for Jack and again brings an appropriate cover-up. Only this night is very warm and Jill can’t keep the sweater on. Again the interest returns and Jill starts to catch on. She thinks its flattering and is amused. She also thinks that if that’s what it takes, why not, it’s no more than she does while out with Jack, besides Jack will probably love to hear about it. Once again there is a nice tip for Jill at the end of the evening.

Week 4. Tom tells Jill about a quiz coming up and they go over the material. Tom is paying more attention to Jill’s outfit than the work and Jill tells him to concentrate. Tom tries to make a deal with Jill. If he studies real hard and concentrates on work for a half hour then they can have a half hour to have fun. They work hard for the ½ hr and then they start to relax but Tom isn’t happy and Jill asks why. He tells her it’s because she has her sweater on and she understands now that the fun is looking at her. She is wearing a plunging neckline top with tight pants so it won’t be so bad to take off the sweater. So she suggests that they play a card game and she takes off her sweater. There is another tip that night.



Week 5. The quiz is that Friday and they study hard for an hour. In her head Jill is already spending the money from the quiz bonus. Just as before Tom wants play time so Jill relents. This time she is wearing a see-thru top with a lacy bra underneath. Tom compliments her and she like it.



It can progress on and on from here getting more and more daring. I thought that Tom would start to ask her to wear special things for him. Also I thought that part of Tom’s class would be to critique a movie and they would have to watch it together getting close on the couch etc. then further down the road Tom might start asking to kiss or dance or cuddle etc. to finally end with Jill taking Tom’s cherry. This may be hard to believe in this day and age that a college kid is still a virgin but it would work here. Jill could be keeping Jack informed along the way and reaping the benefits of his energized excitement which also would get her off each night she was aroused by Tom. Jack may even encourage Jill.

I also thought it could be told in third person narrative with POVs from all characters. Let me know what you think.

I would love to read something like this! Hell I would even share this with my gf if it was to get published! You will eventuly find somebody to write this. If not u have a really great start! Keep up the great work!

 

[shesnotcheating]

My comment, hpycpl, was strictly a joke. That's why I put the little happy face there. I also write LW stories but would never want my wife to cheat on me.
Please don't take offense, it was not meant to be mean spirited.

PS. You have a gorgeous wife, and I do mean that as a compliment.

Could you provide a link to one of those LW stories? You know, the ones where wifey gets aroused by another guy, and hubby is excited to see her enjoying herself sexually. All I can find are those sad, sad stories about her cheating, him planning his revenge, etc., etc.

 

[hpycpl]

I think that it is positively brilliant and had the potential to be a masterpiece. You are correct in stating that most of these stories have the wife going out one evening for an innocent drink and ends up balling some handsome stranger completely out of the blue. Please keep pushing this idea as it seems a sure winner.

Thanks for the compliment. I just feel a story can be so much more enjoyable if it has a realistic feel to it. The super-fast turnaround in morals, shyness, promiscuity leave you flat. I would love to help someone write these who shares the same opinion....

 

[nakdsub]

shesnotcheating, you have to be kidding?...

Just put 'cuckold' in the search engine and you'll find hundreds...maybe thousands.

 

[shesnotcheating]

Just put 'cuckold' in the search engine and you'll find hundreds...maybe thousands.

I wasn't kidding so much as I was complaining, quite frankly. You claim to have written Loving Wives stories, but I would disagree. The Loving Wives category was meant for stories of the type I described. Simply surveying the oldest stories in the category will show that the vast majority were of this type. Then, maybe four or five years back, there was an influx of trolls who came in claiming, "No real loving wife would do that....yada yada yada". and ruined the category with their vengeance tales.

My claim of ruination is not simply based on not liking their brand of Loving Wife story. It's based on the fact that very few of the their stories are at all erotic. And, it's based on the fact that their voting is done completely without consideration for the quality of the writing. If the wife cheats and goes unpunished, it doesn't matter if the story was written by Shakespeare, it gets one star and a venomous, though usually third grade level, review. But, if the wife and lover get tortured and killed, then as long as every third word is spelled correctly it will wind up with the coveted red H.

 

[brittanyadams20]

thanks for sharing!

 

[MichaelWest]

My current work delves into this realm. I increasingly find the issue of infidelity too good a story not to write. Love is a very powerful force, all the more so when split or conflicted over different people. I frankly find the genre fascinating.

Who loves more? The husband who fills himself with hate at betrayal, or the one who discovers he must love even more deeply and honor that sacred vow? True love faces hurdles and overcomes.

I do not like the rather troped out cuckold fantasy, so do not expect that, but as I get my bits and pieces polished up, I hope to put new canvas up and catch a different wind in those dragon ridden waters. Keep a weather eye out.

 

[hpycpl]

I wasn't kidding so much as I was complaining, quite frankly. You claim to have written Loving Wives stories, but I would disagree. The Loving Wives category was meant for stories of the type I described. Simply surveying the oldest stories in the category will show that the vast majority were of this type. Then, maybe four or five years back, there was an influx of trolls who came in claiming, "No real loving wife would do that....yada yada yada". and ruined the category with their vengeance tales.

My claim of ruination is not simply based on not liking their brand of Loving Wife story. It's based on the fact that very few of the their stories are at all erotic. And, it's based on the fact that their voting is done completely without consideration for the quality of the writing. If the wife cheats and goes unpunished, it doesn't matter if the story was written by Shakespeare, it gets one star and a venomous, though usually third grade level, review. But, if the wife and lover get tortured and killed, then as long as every third word is spelled correctly it will wind up with the coveted red H.

I can see your point about how different story finishes are generally reacted to the same way. But I offer a different take. Why does there always have to be a loser or winner (so to speak)? Why does the husband have to be a humiliated wimp or a sex maniac that enjoys it? Why does the wife have to be punished or a happily wonton slut? I think the we are looking for too much black and whites in a multiple shades of grey world. I get it that this is all fantasy and therefore we tend to put our spin on what we would like to see the outcome be, but why not leave some reality in. I think the realism makes for a much better piece of erotica rather than spouting out a "stroke story". I like stoke stories too but I think that the scenarios that I have mentioned here have a much greater potential. I feel that in real life there are no absolutes and that we all second guess ourselves and our actions. I know I second guess myself all the time and wonder if I'm reacting the right way or if I did the right thing. A subject like this where you are dealing with the inner most feelings and beliefs would naturally leave all parties with mixed feelings.
Your thoughts are welcome.

 

[hpycpl]

;one last try to bring this thread to the top and get some fresh interest. please let me know if I should give up[ on trying to find a writer to take on this project. Just for the record I am still willing to help with editing etc.
Thanks for lending an ear.