Editor Request : Cuckold Story Series

[LPCream]

Starting to write a small series and am wondering if someone has the time wants help with flow of the story and the inevitable gamma bits and bobs. It's my first time trying to put my pervy thoughts done that I hope other people might like.

I've written part one that's just under 1600 words and part two is currently about 900 words.

Maybe they should both be one part to start with ? However if I'm totally rubbish then I kinda don't want to carry on.

Any advice or assistance all greatly received.

Thank you

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Since your request is for an editor, I should recommend you contact SR71. He is one of a select few who are editors.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

Since your request is for an editor, I should recommend you contact SR71. He is one of a select few who are editors.

@AS
Hi - is this really fair to a relative newbie?

@LPCream
AS's post is part of an ongoing childish spat between SR71plt and some of the rest of the regulars on this forum. Ignore it.

 

[LPCream]

Cheers for the replies both .

PM heading to a choosen editor from the Feb list.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

@AS
Hi - is this really fair to a relative newbie?

@LPCream
AS's post is part of an ongoing childish spat between SR71plt and some of the rest of the regulars on this forum. Ignore it.

Was just making a point at a time I was "stinging" from a "punch" so to speak. But Snoops is right, I was wrong in making my point. Wrong place. Welcome!

 

[sr71plt]

I think snooper's "some of the regulars" is quite a stretch.

I think the spatting has more or less been going on without me. I hope the OP found someone to help, though.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

I think snooper's "some of the regulars" is quite a stretch.

I think the spatting has more or less been going on without me. I hope the OP found someone to help, though.

Let's just shake hands and be done with this.

Or not. Your choice.