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DeepRedLips you are gorgeous and sensual and subtle. I like your bookworm photos.:kiss::rose:

You and most of the ladies that visit this thread are quite enchanting. Does y realise he is a lucky guy?;)
 
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Sadness

Of all the storms that convect deep within
The caress of sadness is the most welcome.

As deeply painful as it is
I have a beautiful romance with her.

Of all the storms that ravage
Her reach does not extend past the glass of my eyes.

I love her because she and her memories are unable to hurt anyone but me.

She's yet to make me buckle in public
She's come damn close
Sending solar flares so bright and hot that my eyes must shut
--causing me to push my glasses up so I can pinch the bridge of my nose
--giving my wife, my mom, a friend, reason to question.

"Just thinking..."
"I feel a headache coming on."

This bides the masons time to build their stone wall
but they are getting old
getting slow
their work a bit shoddy.

Just thinking...
I feel a headache coming on.
 
There are different wells within your heart.
Some fill with each good rain,
Others are far too deep for that.

Over the last few days I've found myself returning to your most recent poem. It is a work of beauty. A lesson in sadness. Thank you for sharing it with us, handsome.
 
I am glad I am not me, single, with a solid well paying career because there is a mousy hipsterish girl that works at the walgreens on the corner that I SO want to take home, recline naked between my legs and against chest as we soak together in a hot deep bath, where afterwards we would retire into the bedroom where upon I'd spoon her until morning... protecting her from the hurtful things in the world... turning her fear and uncertainty into stable security. I wouldn't even care if we ever ended up fucking.

Though I'm not sure if I would want to fix the tooth she's missing. It's not one of the front ones... more to the side towards the back which is only noticeable when her beautifully perfect lips part into a soul-embracing sunsetting smile.

I guess I would if it's a personal issue for her

She's so perfectly adorable it's goddamn painful. And I seriously don't buy this whole hipster scene... but she's got it down to the degree that she's pretty much a caricature of herself... which for everyone that isn't her would be fuck-all goddamn pathetic, but for everyone else that is exactly her it's pretty goddamn sincere and endearing.

Certainly one of those strangers I see all the time, will never get to know, and will forever cross my mind from time to time here on out.
 
I am glad I am not me, single, with a solid well paying career because there is a mousy hipsterish girl that works at the walgreens on the corner that I SO want to take home, recline naked between my legs and against chest as we soak together in a hot deep bath, where afterwards we would retire into the bedroom where upon I'd spoon her until morning... protecting her from the hurtful things in the world... turning her fear and uncertainty into stable security. I wouldn't even care if we ever ended up fucking.

Though I'm not sure if I would want to fix the tooth she's missing. It's not one of the front ones... more to the side towards the back which is only noticeable when her beautifully perfect lips part into a soul-embracing sunsetting smile.

I guess I would if it's a personal issue for her

She's so perfectly adorable it's goddamn painful. And I seriously don't buy this whole hipster scene... but she's got it down to the degree that she's pretty much a caricature of herself... which for everyone that isn't her would be fuck-all goddamn pathetic, but for everyone else that is exactly her it's pretty goddamn sincere and endearing.

Certainly one of those strangers I see all the time, will never get to know, and will forever cross my mind from time to time here on out.

One of the best and worst feelings of all time. The desire to have someone but only if your life were completely different. But it isn't and that also comes as a relief.

... If any of that makes sense...
 
One of the best and worst feelings of all time. The desire to have someone but only if your life were completely different. But it isn't and that also comes as a relief.

... If any of that makes sense...

I'd say something along the lines of "Oh... if you only knew..." But that would lead to wide spread speculation and probably add another layer of mystery to who I am and what I do when I'm not who I am and what I do here.

so I'm not going to. Instead I'll say "that shit makes no sense to me... but I appreciate you posting in my thread!"
 
I'd say something along the lines of "Oh... if you only knew..." But that would lead to wide spread speculation and probably add another layer of mystery to who I am and what I do when I'm not who I am and what I do here.

so I'm not going to. Instead I'll say "that shit makes no sense to me... but I appreciate you posting in my thread!"

Fair enough, I suppose.

ETA: For all the shit we give you for being a mysterious-sensitive-elusive-bad boy, we deserve an answer like that from time to time.
 
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I am glad I am not me, single, with a solid well paying career because there is a mousy hipsterish girl that works at the walgreens on the corner that I SO want to take home, recline naked between my legs and against chest as we soak together in a hot deep bath, where afterwards we would retire into the bedroom where upon I'd spoon her until morning... protecting her from the hurtful things in the world... turning her fear and uncertainty into stable security. I wouldn't even care if we ever ended up fucking.

Though I'm not sure if I would want to fix the tooth she's missing. It's not one of the front ones... more to the side towards the back which is only noticeable when her beautifully perfect lips part into a soul-embracing sunsetting smile.

I guess I would if it's a personal issue for her

She's so perfectly adorable it's goddamn painful. And I seriously don't buy this whole hipster scene... but she's got it down to the degree that she's pretty much a caricature of herself... which for everyone that isn't her would be fuck-all goddamn pathetic, but for everyone else that is exactly her it's pretty goddamn sincere and endearing.

Certainly one of those strangers I see all the time, will never get to know, and will forever cross my mind from time to time here on out.



Those "what if" moments can be interesting.

Also I am a little envious of this female.:eek::mad::rolleyes:
 
I feel as though I should provide you all with some sort of update of some kind.

though I don't have anything to update you about... and I'm feeling all debts have been paid with the depth charge postings I posted in my book thread which... for the most part seemes to have killed it. I cannot say I am pleased with this as it was going so well; and now, nothing, save the responses, accolades and appreciations that sent it onto the next page. Much appreciated.

So... yeah. Nothing new. Don't even have any notable erratic thoughts needing to get out of my head. No rolling random words working into way to write down as poetry or prose. Writing as I write right now is right at the second behind thought... pushing it towards something to work with. In short... I am reaching. It doesn't help that my head hurts.

I'd say something about tomorrow being Valentines day. Fuck... I think I will! But what?

How about this?

So tomorrow is Valentines day. Each year society splits itself into two camps. The lovers, and the haters. One could almost say the wealthy-and-in-love and the poor-and-single (saving a good friend or two). Though there's moderates on both sides that recognize the day for what it is and loath what it's become. Nary my point is this... those that have come to hate it as much as those that love it annoy the fuck out of me just the same. Blah blah capitalism this! Blah blah capitalism that! And it doesn't matter if said individual is single or not. I want to put a boot to their fucking skull. Not because I don't agree with them, I very much do. Just like Christmas and every other holiday in this modern age Valentines day has let itself become what everyone has wanted it to become.

you all have been saved from this diatribe as something has distracted me... and by the time I am undistracted I will no longer give a fuck about what I was talking about. Even if the distraction only lasts a mere 5 minutes. This thought is gone. Good bye.
 
I wouldn't say I'm in the camp of "hating" Vday. But I do get frustrated by it. In that, I feel what is done on Vday should be done on any given day.. and people use it as an excuse. How can a female truly appreciate any gift giving on said day when the guy is expected to get something. I also get frustrated with how many don't see what a commercialized over priced day it is.

I'm more in the camp of: bring me home one single rose out of the blue on any given day of the year, rather than a dozen over priced roses on Vday. Because I know he'll really mean it when he brings me home that one rose on any given day, and I'll cherish it all the more.

Also.. I'm just NOT a girly girl. Flowers die and get thrown away. I really can't eat too much chocolate without getting a headache. I really don't wear jewelry (hell, I was commenting last night how the ring we had picked out, all those years ago, is really almost too big for me)... diamonds are definitely NOT my best friend *smirks* ... Yes, there are other things I'd be more than happy to get as gifts. Fairy figurines (I collect the adult looking ones), books, movies, games (Xbox :p)... but I still stand by the thought of I'd rather get them out of the blue rather than on a day where it's expected.

So.. that's the "camp" I'm in... whichever camp that might be
lol
 
I am indifferent to Valentine's Day. I actually didn't remember it was Vday until I got to work and saw some collegues in red. Shrugs. I hope for those who find the day "special", it was good for them. I think appreciation and love should be shown everyday not just on a commercial holiday.


I hope you and the missus had some fun. ;)

Have a splendid weekend my broody Lit dude;):rose::kiss:.
 
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I wouldn't say I'm in the camp of "hating" Vday. But I do get frustrated by it. In that, I feel what is done on Vday should be done on any given day.. and people use it as an excuse. How can a female truly appreciate any gift giving on said day when the guy is expected to get something. I also get frustrated with how many don't see what a commercialized over priced day it is.

I'm more in the camp of: bring me home one single rose out of the blue on any given day of the year, rather than a dozen over priced roses on Vday. Because I know he'll really mean it when he brings me home that one rose on any given day, and I'll cherish it all the more.

Also.. I'm just NOT a girly girl. Flowers die and get thrown away. I really can't eat too much chocolate without getting a headache. I really don't wear jewelry (hell, I was commenting last night how the ring we had picked out, all those years ago, is really almost too big for me)... diamonds are definitely NOT my best friend *smirks* ... Yes, there are other things I'd be more than happy to get as gifts. Fairy figurines (I collect the adult looking ones), books, movies, games (Xbox :p)... but I still stand by the thought of I'd rather get them out of the blue rather than on a day where it's expected.

So.. that's the "camp" I'm in... whichever camp that might be
lol

THIS. Perfect explanation of how I feel about that particular holiday as well.
 
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